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"The road ahead is not easy, but neither is it impossible to travel. Run, Twilight Sparkle. Run."- Wolokai KuRR


The Following takes place after Pinknesia: The Darker Descent.

Canterlot has been saved...The Entity defeated...and the lives of many restored. Celestia raises the sun...Luna raises the moon, and for once in six years in an age of blood and misery...Canterlot and Ponyville knows a peace that hasn't been seen for years and years. Quill and Twilight are set to be married, and Applejack is still trying to find the courage to tell Rainbow how she really feels.

But what about dear Scootaloo...a mare, grown now, in her own right? What does she...a year after succumbing and returning from death, have to say about Pinkie Pie, her mother who is believed to be dead? No body, no proof, no forgiveness. Under her smile, under her eyes, under her coat...a darkness emanates. Anger...and Despair, rocking her to her very soul. She is hell bent on finding Pinkie Pie, and NOTHING will stand in her way. What lengths will she go to, to find the mother she loves, and bring her home? Nopony knows...come now, watch...and listen...as we witness The Darkest Descent of them all...of a mare named Scootaloo.

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Comments ( 133 )

Wohoo! another story on the pinknesia story-line. First story made me watch sweeney todd again, And the second story made me think about amnesia.Then I played through amnesia and shat bricks. All of your stories are pretty captivating, and have inspired me to revisit the things that reminded me of the story. Hopefully this story might make me do something as well.

I'm actually a bit nervous about continuing on and finishing the story. I mean yes I'll finish the series but I feel a bit pessimistic about it. I don't know...I'll get over it though, every story needs a finish. :derpytongue2:

Hope everything's going ok for you readers. I realize the story seems to be going a bit slow...but don't worry, we'll get to the juicy parts. :derpytongue2:

I was 100% Scootaloo would hear the voices again and go psycho for a few minutes! Still, a good chapter :pinkiehappy:

That was about the last thing I expected to happen... You've got me on edge for part 7 now!

Please don't kill Rainbow :pinkiesad2::fluttercry:

Ummmmm, where the heck is chapter 5? :rainbowhuh:


Oh...CRAP! Stupid numbers! Thanks for catching that :fluttercry:

For the love of all that is right... PLEASE don't kill rainbow... :raritydespair:

Behind Pinkie Pie stood a large statue of a pony wearing some sort of winter cap and a flag. The flag had a symbol of a hammer and sickle, and was covered with the color of blood.


this raises a interesting question for me:

was the entity in fact related to Koltzan in some way other than the statue and orb? something seems a tad off about what the entity might actually be. maybe i'm thinking into it a bit much but it seems, after reading this part of the saga so far, that the entity they faced before could've been like a shadow of something much worse in Koltzan, guess i'll just have to wait and see but overall this whole story (all 3 parts) has been quite good so far and quite dark too

:facehoof:I Get It, SnowValker, As In SnowWalker With A Russian Accent


Koltzan is the town, you know that right? :o it's based off the Russian town Kazan'

As to why the orb is there in the first place...well, we'll just have to see won't we :derpytongue2:

Me thinks that the entity has ressurected and has camoflaged itself as pinkie after knocking her out. Am I right? Can I has cupcake?


Or Pinkie and Pinkamena have split into two seperate entities.

I thought Rarity Big Macitosh Celestia and Luna died in one of your books Wolokai did they raise from the dead?


Anything killed directly or indirectly by The Entity has a chance to return to life, as The Entity requires at least three days upon its return to gain enough strength and make his magic permanent. The Entity's magic caused a pillar to kill Luna, Celestia was impaled by The Entity's magic which killed her just before Canterlot was detonated by the last of her magic, and Big Macintosh was killed by the explosion caused by the Possessed Twilight Sparkle, which was an indirect cause by The Entity, the same with Rarity.

Thus, LIFE! :derpytongue2:

36365 I thick thats the Russian flag.

Finally, in the third part of this story, she appears. And Scootaloo have to fight her... Damn this story is cruel. Awesome, but cruel.:pinkiesad2:


No, the Soviet Flag is Solid red with the crossed hammer and sickle in the top left corner with a star above it.

The Modern Day Russian Federation Flag consists of three horizontal bars colored white, blue, and red.

HAPPY THANKSGIVING my cheery readers!!! No chapter today because it's turkey day, but don't worry, the story will commence! Don't forget to stay tuned after the story ends for the afterparty! We have things to talk about! :derpytongue2:

Damn this was awesome! It was just as intense as when Pinkie hunted Trottingham in the first story, but this was even without the music ringing in my head. I give you huge applauds.:pinkiehappy:

hey man dont over do your self with this if you feel depressed making it then maeby take a break i dont want a story to be ruined because the writer was getting depressed

wow :ajsleepy: scootaloo is being a real bitch

so, it finally ends, or at least hopefully. the entity and then that orb, what horrible things they were/are, bet they'll be SO happy its all over with (at the end of the story that is)

is there suposed to be more?

There will be more everpony don't worry!!! :ajsmug:

Be sure to start following me!!! There's a BIG project coming up that I'm going to tell you all about in The Afterparty chapter that's coming up after the end! :derpytongue2:

Wait, that's it, no more?
I thought you could've taken this a bit longer..
if i am getting it wrong, Correct me THIS INSTANT...
'Cause this is Story was really awesome, i didnt even notice time running by when reading it...


Well there wasn't really much to do except go home after The Orb was gone, so I thought a nice flashback segment would work

Please make a sequel or imma get Pinkie to make cupcakes outta you :pinkiecrazy:

Make a story about Scoot and Dimitri please! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

I'm runnin' through these garden hoes like grain-o, I got that Night-marish flow, rock and roll, no haylo, WE'RE PONY ROCK! :pinkiehappy:

I hope you make many more fanfictions to come.

These three stories are on my top 5 list of fanfics.

YOU DESERVE THE INTERNET!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::yay::yay::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

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