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Kumare Tanamaru


When the new kid comes to town, Pinkie Pie volunteers herself to throw him a Pinkie Party, as it turns out, this particular pink pony takes her to a whole new level of emotion.
The drama,
The randomness,
and of course the pink, are what makes these two ponies the perfect pie! Although, all it's missing is a little spice...

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 162 )

So its a pinkie pie trying to keep his own insanity in check while grown up in a completely earth pony situation? Kinky. :pinkiecrazy:

Basically! :pinkiecrazy: Lol, kidding, wait til the story moves along a bit, i'm actually about to start chapter two. do you like it so far?:twilightsmile:

Interesting, certainly. I can't tell too much at this stage, but I think this is one to watch for a while.
Hope your second chapter works out well, you got skill to do it with, and whatever storyline you have planned is certainly going to be interesting.:pinkiesmile:


It is actually very well written, I would be interested on seeing on how this biznitch evolves. :pinkiecrazy:

OH BTW TRACK'D:moustache:

It's ok its odd that he doesn't know what pegusi are still sounds like he could be a match for pinkie pie :pinkiehappy:

Looking forward to more :pinkiehappy:

Glad you guy's like it so far! :pinkiehappy:

I see you're a fan of Flutterheart, :D I would assume that's who this Trey is from right? Pretty good so far, keep it up! :D

Huge fan of Flutterheart! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Yo, guess what?


Chapter two is a little bit on the lengthy dialogue side :derpytongue2:... Meh.. oh well. Enjoy! :twilightsmile:

So pineapple can out pinkie pinkie.....why do I have a feeling that this is going to get very silly very fast:pinkiehappy:

Just wait, I'm planning on a song! :pinkiecrazy: :rainbowwild:

ITs about time someone puts Pinkie in her place. :pinkiegasp:

Nice idea for a storyline that I can approve. Please do keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

Quiet an interesting beginning to the story. I am enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work buddeh. :pinkiehappy:

Trey huh? gee i wonder where that guy comes from! It sounds like a name to make a heart flutter.:ajsmug: hint hint

but anyway, cool story!:pinkiehappy:

I loved the story Flutterheart. it's what inspired me to write this story! Glad you like it! :pinkiehappy:

What say you, start chapter three tonight? :twilightsmile:

Imagen their weeding.....O.O

I write all of these listening to mostly Epic Sax Spike :derpytongue2:

Hmmm the plot thickens

allen wrenches, gerbil feeders, toilet seats, electric heaters
Trash compactors, juice extractor, shower rods and water meters
Walkie-talkies, copper wires safety goggles, radial tires
BB pellets, rubber mallets, fans and dehumidifiers
Picture hangers, paper cutters, waffle irons, window shutters
Paint removers, window louvres, masking tape and plastic gutters
Kitchen faucets, folding tables, weather stripping, jumper cables
Hooks and tackle, grout and spackle, power foggers, spoons and ladles
Pesticides for fumigation, high-performance lubrication
Metal roofing, water proofing, multi-purpose insulation
Air compressors, brass connectors, wrecking chisels, smoke detectors
Tire guages, hamster cages, thermostats and bug deflectors
Trailer hitch demagnetizers, automatic circumcisers
Tennis rackets, angle brackets, Duracells and Energizers
Soffit panels, circuit breakers, vacuum cleaners, coffee makers
Calculators, generators, matching salt and pepper shakers


I didn't think I'd like this story at first, because Pineapple is essentially a Rule 63 Pinkie Pie that's being shipped with the original, but like a penicillin on bread it grew on me. I liked his back story of being from Pony North Korea and from that I learned you can fight for your right to party, but you'll end up in a prison camp for three years then exiled. It's a shame he didn't run into Liam Neeson in prison.

My only question is why the hell hasn't Celestia done anything about that hell hole of a town?

Regardless this fic is well written and fucking adorable, yeah I said it and no I'm not giving up any of my man cards.

Peace Out.

Oh celestia don't stop! (That's what she said!) YEAAAAAAH!!:heart:

I'm not sure Ponyville has a hardware store.

Anyways, this story is passable. VERY passable. As in, "I'm reading this instead of sleeping" passable. So, you know, great. Well done!

Glad you like it! I usually post at least two chapters a day. but, actually I won't be posting another chapter until I get the Cover Art up. So please be patient! I promise to start again once it's up! that might be today though... :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Sooooooooo cool....sucks about the whole imprisonment thing though:twilightangry2:.....

Yeah.... Wasn't really fair. :fluttercry: But it'll get better!

I was waiting for a 4th wall breaking moment during the baking quiz as Mr. Cake turns into Mark Summers from Double Dare and Pineapple is stumped on a question and is like, "I'LL TAKE THE PHYSICAL CHALLENGE." Congrats on making edutainment, I learned more about baking than I ever cared about, then again I'm reading a story with Pinkie in it and baking comprises 53% of her personality, so it's to be expected. It's a good read that's fun, hilarious, educational and well written.

Peace Out.

AAAAAIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEE:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:.........good chapter

:pinkiehappy: took me a while to finish, but I got it done today! :derpytongue2: I'm seriously dreading chapter Nine though :pinkiegasp: heh heh, oh well! :twilightsheepish:

49584 He already broke the fourth wall in the second chapter I think :rainbowhuh:

Liking the story and all, but I think you made an error of some kind in this one. Not in the plot, but in the coding and such. In the middle of Trey's line "But it was for my little pony. I couldn't leave her.", a piece of code can be seen (specifically, it's /i]), and then the entire rest of the chapter is inexpicably in italics. You might want to fix that.

Awesome story so far otherwise. So much d'awww. :rainbowkiss:

Fixed it! I appreciate the heads up! 49655

I know the chapter is short, and really really bad... I'm sorry guys :fluttercry:

I'm going to re-write it. I'm sorry about this...

add moar chapter kthnxbai

It's not that bad. Your Parody of Art of The Dress was descent. I do like the fact that Pineapple is increasingly frustrated keeping his secret and I imagine a big public proposal to quell his frustrations, yeah he fears Pinkies response to his request and his blurting out of their secret, but the two feel better now that everything is out in the open. The complaint in this chapter, but you've addressed it no one can really complain.

Peace Out and look forward to what happens next.

:rainbowkiss: would their be any chance of that song in audio?

How about this, if anyone wants to make the music for this song, be my guest.

There! redid a little bit and added more! Have fun re-reading! sorry about the original release guys :ajsleepy:

Hope you like it better now! :twilightsheepish:

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