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After spending most of her time studying indoors throughout the winter season, Twilight Sparkle is given a new assignment by Princess Celestia: to form and lead Ponyville's new EHL team, the Ponyville Golden Leafs. Twilight and friends lace up their skates to take on the EHL's elite in hopes of winning the Celestia Cup with teamwork and friendship.

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Whoops...seems i gotta update my Fantasy Team. Lets see....Big Mac...and Spike....there! GO PONYVILLE!!!! :eeyup: :pinkiehappy: :ajsmug: :twilightsheepish:

As an old St Louis Blues fan from WAY back in the day and the Maple Leafs were our mortal enemies, which players did you have in mind when you gave them their numbers?

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No one was in mind when I gave the Leafs their numbers. I picked numbers that closely represented the ponies the best (in Part 1)

Only team I gave consideration to was Cloudsdale because the Red Wings are my favorite team :twilightsmile:
Spitfire = Pavel Datsyuk, Soarin = Henrik Zetterberg, Gilda = Todd Bertuzzi, Pucks = Nicklas Lidstrom, Derpy = Niklas Kronwall
Scootaloo is just Scootaloo with Jimmy Howard's number lol

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I remember plenty of Red Wings games so long ago. Back when Brett Hull was still a Blues and not a jerk and Tony Twist was filling out Gilda's role quite well. We had two of the worst goons in the league back in the late 90's and man I miss it. Now I'm in NC so far away from hockey and awesomeness. I was gonna say that the Red Wings followed closely as our worst rivals too XD I miss the games.

Shouldn't this sort of conduct get all the Rangers booted from the League? I can perhaps see one vengeful nitwit trying to cheat her way to victory but to take her team down with her is beyond the pale.

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From an integrity standpoint, sure they should get booted but the EHL is still a business and it would be financial devastating if they kicked a franchise. The Rangers got a hefty penalty in Part XI and are still on probation. They're still on watch :ajsmug:

This is probably my favorite MLP:FiM fanfic. It's really well written!

Wanderer D
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Sorry to say it but I'm with Twilight on this one. If they don't care, why play? :facehoof:

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To be fair ,(without ignoring the bravery it took to explore and pursue his money-grubbing ways) Cortez did it more for political reasons than pure adventurous spirit. :ajbemused: But I guess Twilight's point got through :twilightsheepish:

Anyway, it's a cool story, I'm glad I finally sat down to read it! Looking forward for more! :pinkiehappy:

“YOU GET NOTHING! YOU LOSE! GOOD DAY MADAM!”

Willy Wonka reference FTW.:rainbowlaugh:

Didnt start reading it yet but plan to when finished or sooner maybe, just find it unfair that the Canterlot team has a princess of their team :raritycry:

Just in time for The Jets to come back, lose, and still have their insane fanbase.

Ok so not the ending I was expecting, like Ponyville making it the finals and kicking flank and what not. But if you are doing a sequel and including Q... I mean Discord then I'm going to stay and watch to see how he will change things. ~Celestia's Paladin, Ex Solis et Lunae, Providentia et Prospera

This isn't good, this isn't good at all... Discord in charge of the entire EHL?!! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

So who's the featherbrain now, eh? Ditzy Doo FTW!!!

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I know the perfect way to punish him: have him do Coach's Corner with Don Cherry. :pinkiehappy: A week with that old dinosaur and he'll be begging to be petrified again.

Wow. I was expecting them to lose in the finals. I loved this story, and I'm looking forward to reading about their second season!

10097 In my opinion, Twilight overreacted. Remember what Celestia told everyone? She told them they should have fun, not just win.

So far, from what I've read, this is the best story I've read so far! :pinkiehappy:

Doctor Whooves? hired by Manehattan Rangers?
Interesting....

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Wait. I thought Big Macintosh was going to be part of the Hockey team? He'd make a great enforcer.

Go Cloudsdale/ Detroit/ anything that plays in Hockeytown!

So... I'm guessing your not a Flyers fan.

Nice job on the names. And I think the names and positions are appropriate.

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Detroit may be Hockeytown but Minnesota is the State of Hockey.

The other teams (and the Golden Leafs) are based on the Original Six (with the exception of the Flyers) all that's missing is the Bruins. Right now the Bruins are thugs are they not, first the sucker punches in the Playoffs last years against the Lightning and then Lucic running over Ryan Miller (oh how I wish Millers stick would have connected).

I like the Flyers (their history), Blues, as well as the Wild (my Stepdad is from Minnesota), Lightning (Stamkos and St. Louis among other players), the Ducks (mainly due to the Mighty Ducks movies), Pheonix (I like the D-Backs of the MLB), and Jets among others, hell I just love Hockey (only thing I love more is Baseball). Sorry but I don't like the Red Wings or Blackhawks at all (I know you don't like the Blackhawks either), the Bruins (I despise Lucic), or Rangers (NOBODY other than Rangers fans like Sean Avery). Though I do like Timmy Thomas.

Comment posted by Cobra 1 deleted Feb 5th, 2013
Comment posted by Cobra 1 deleted Feb 5th, 2013

Interesting to note is I wasn't born in a Hockey rich state, I was born in Tahlequah,OK. The only hockey teams they have is the Tulsa Oilers of the Central Hockey League. I now live in Wichita, KS which has the Thunder also of the CHL, but I still root for the Oilers when their in town.

Comment posted by Cobra 1 deleted Feb 5th, 2013

Great a fight, Next someone needs to write a "Slap Shot" crossover.

Comment posted by Cobra 1 deleted Feb 5th, 2013

so awesome, loved how Twilight sort of over-reacted and you made reference to the Miracle on Ice team (the team staying after the game to practice) :twilightblush: :twilightoops:

Comment posted by Cobra 1 deleted Feb 5th, 2013
Comment posted by Cobra 1 deleted Feb 5th, 2013

I feel I should say, in my "Under production" Fanfiction (As in, unreleased as of the moment I post this comment) Your story has an amazing impact on the general storyline of the whole thing, adding a "Hockey" Perspective to it! :rainbowkiss:


hope you don't mind :twilightblush: I used the general "Ponyville Golden Leafs" and "Ponyville Pond" Idea, but the team has moved, and twilight and her friends quit the league because of it.

but I did mention your story very bluntly, and even gave your user name, so if the people who read mine want to read yours, they can find it!


sorry if you don't like the Idea, but I needed a way for there to be some "Changes" made, and moving the team was the only choice. :twilightblush:


Hope you don't mind.


Your friend and fellow Brony


Thebronywithin.

"And thus the Equestria Hockey League was born"
or in the eyes of a Canadian
"And that's how Equestria was made"

..and Spike being on the reserve list serves absolutely no purpose. Huh.

Damn it! I'm sure Filly would have won if it wasn't for Trixie's....tricks. Sorry, as a resident of PA I am honor bound to root for the pony equivilants of the local. Go Filly!

As a resident of PA, how dare you! We're a hell of a lot cleaner than that thank you very much.

"What will our banking have anything to do with being tougher?" :facehoof::ajbemused::rainbowhuh:

Why didn't you pick mtl for ponyville why:raritydespair:

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