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SwordTune


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After a terrible Incident has ravaged all of Equestria of its food, two ponies must travel back in time to stop it at its source. Of all surviving records, there's only one point in time they can be sure they'll find their missing Pinkie Pie.


Written in 1 day for the Bean's Writing Group prompt: Feat of Pony Engineering
Bonus prompt: Pinkie Ate All the Food

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Comments ( 8 )

Has a Twelve Monkeys vibe, or DNA2, good notion to it...and a disaster where all the food is gone? Rather interesting. Unsure how that relates to parts of the city being destroyed, or Othe having a disfigured horn, but a solid prospect. Of course trying to contain a Pinkie Pie is a fools errand, but trusting tech to go back in time where you could erase yourself from reality might do that.

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In regards to the destruction and Othe's horn, what do you suppose might happen if the Incident ate all the food?

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Haven't the faintest about the destruction...likely due to 'efforts' to catch Pinkie is my guess. As for his horn, perhaps a lack of certain vitamins and poor nutrition are factors. You can't grow if you don't have fuel to work with.

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Yea. Also, her horn, Othe is female as well.

“Ma’ams,” he had said,

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Ah yes, my bad on that. Heh. Here I am mulling over this stuff and missed that detail.

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Glad you enjoyed the story though. It's all I can ask.

Strange and mysterious, but interesting enough to hold my attention. Thanks for posting!:twilightsmile:

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