You've got this neat little formula going that gets me every time. You write the show characters very competently and stick to show-like plots and storytelling, which is harder to pull off than people think and certainly engaging for the reader...
I mean, that's what draws me in so well when it comes to your stuff. It isn't edgy or overbearing; it isn't threatening you as a writer (yes, this happens), saying, 'Look how great I am.' They're just nice, quiet, simple yet effective little pieces of work that put a smile on your face, and who wouldn't want to read something like that? โ Acologic (Twilight's Poetry Recital)
This made me smile. Very sweet. โ River Shy (Ditzy Doo Loves Muffins - A Poem)
This was adorable and the song really shows Scoots' hopes and dreams. โ MixMassBasher (When Only the Heart Can Soar)
You're a legend! Love your stories! โ GravityDefyingCoffeeMug
Love the bond shown with these two sisters. Very touching. โ MixMassBasher (Sweetie's Imperfectly Perfect Night)
An inspirational story with a beautiful song included. โ Zervon Tora (Sweetie's Imperfectly Perfect Night)
This was a pretty fun and charming short story, the length felt right, not too long or too short and Rarity and Sweetie's interactions were just heart-warming. โ Waiting (Sweetie's Imperfectly Perfect Night)
That is beautiful. That song, the set up, and the very last line. It gives me warm, happy feelings. โ Avendrial (Sweetie's Imperfectly Perfect Night)
This was super cute, and quite accurate for all the pets. โ Anon E Moose (Onyx and Opal)
Great story to take a deep dive into the shy pegasus we know and love. โ MixMassBasher (I Am a Pegasus)
Ah, nothing like a simple, straightforward pile of precious cinnamon roll thoughts to read while staying up past midnight. โ Imaginer31415 (I Am a Pegasus)
This is so beautiful, so moving. โ SuperPinkBrony12 (The Only Twilight)
Aw, so cute! It would be nice if this actually happened in the show. Could easily see it! โ Summer Dancer (Can Yona Talk to the Animals?)
This story is like a stew. Wholesome, simple, and filling. Great work! โ Salty Alty (Can Yona Talk to the Animals?)
You seriously write the cutest stories on this site! โ twidash1993 (Goodnight, Angel)
Ah, a nice, relaxing read. โ AstralMouse (Night, Night, Sweetie Belle)
Not gonna lie this story made my day. Good job. โ Tango-Raptor (โซ Sweet as Sugar Cubes โซ)
Really made me laugh out loud. You really got their personalities nailed. โ Jay Watson (Moondancer, Let's Be Friends!)
You really do these short and sweet slice of life stories well. This was a pleasant read. โ AstralMouse (Moondancer, Let's Be Friends!)
This was beautiful. โ Godslittleprincess (Granny's Gift)
You know what? This was so well done. I loved the shy romance and the cheering up. It made me smile. โ BradyBunch (Say Something)
Just my type of read! Great spelling and storytelling. Fave and like! โ FireRain (The Divinity of Kindness)
Your descriptions are getting better and better, and they were good to start with. Like from me! โ Acologic (The Divinity of Kindness)
Your Rarity is simply divine, darling โ not overdone, moderate in her mannerisms yet undeniably 'Rarity'. I know you like writing her, haha, based on your other stories. You've done her justice every time. โ Acologic (Eventide Wings)
Wow... For such a short story, you really packed a lot of emotion into it. I'm impressed. And a little envious. โ Imaginer31415 (Silence)
I really enjoyed this. Your tone game with these SoLs is solid. Your writing style is mellow and very palatable, which complements the story content. โ Acologic (A Second Everfree)
I can certainly understand why this was Featured. โ Silver Butcher (Words on a Page)
This is cute beyond measure. โ Shining Spark (Words on a Page)
My man, I like your style: it isn't (what we could call) irritably elaborate, as many are, but simple and effective, not saying too little but no more than it needs to. โ Acologic (Words on a Page)
That was really good! Short, sweet, exactly as long as it needed to be, and a good dose of heartwarming for good measure. Thank you for sharing it with us! โ stillinbeta (Words on a Page)
Short and very sweet, as well as tender, with a fare dosage of impact. Well done. โ Timeless Lord Slayer (Words on a Page)
D'awww... Think I just got that warm and fuzzy feeling. โ The Bricklayer (Words on a Page)
Time to make a bookshelf for adorably wholesome fics because I am not going to lose track of this. โ Icarus_Con_Queso (Words on a Page)
Nice, eloquent, yet so relatable for so many. โ Hungryman (Words on a Page)
This was some pleasantly wholesome slice-of-life fluff. I loved it, and must now go see what else the author has done. โ Esorial (Words on a Page)
Simple, straightforward and resonant. Nice work. โ Amethyst_Dawn (Words on a Page)
Look at this, you've got me reading everything of yours. And it's because, as I've said elsewhere, your writing style is so easy on the eye and mind! There should be a limit on how often I end up saying 'good job', but good job โ again, haha! โ Acologic (Rarity and the Dissatisfied Cat)
One of your strengths I see in all your stories is well-managed pacing via description/narrative. I will avoid saying 'good job' again and instead settle for... well done! (Lame, I know.) โ Acologic (Lean on Me)
I loved the story. And it had a very good ending, but to be honest Iโm dying for more! โ Crossover Queen (A Diamond in Need of Polishing)
These were brilliant! I loved them! Keep writing! โ FabulousDivaRarity (Twilight's Poetry Recital)
Aww, man, this story was so sweet. This could easily be an episode and an enjoyable one at that. I loved this and appreciate the effort that clearly went into it. โ Acologic (Twilight's Poetry Recital)
If I may ask,
Do you have any favorite characters? Like, a favorite member of the Main Six? Cutie Mark Crusader? And Pillar of Old?
Perhaps even more than one character of each group?
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Awwww! Thank you so much for the compliment! I'm glad you like them!
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You're a legend! Love your stories!
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Thanks! I look forward to it!
When I'm inspired I do.
You write pretty cute stories! I'll be following along, maybe giving some thoughts here and there
Also you write stories at an amazing pace