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Tranquil Serenity

I am a one-shot writer who loves Slice of Life tales and hearing from readers who enjoy my stories. Click on my blogs for an MLP poem.


Noteworthy's an unsuccessful songwriter and he sees the gray mare sitting there time and time again, unable to bring himself to approach her; the elegant cellist with the treble clef cutie mark. I mean, what would he even say to her? He doesn't even know her name.

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Ayyy, my man, I'm loving this. Haha, god, I've spent time watching similar scenes unfold in not-too-dissimilar settings. And the whole composing/playing thing – yeah, I get this. And people aren't wrong when they suggest I should practise more, compose less (edit: well, not less, but certainly practise repertoire pieces more) – the thing is, as you learn more complex pieces, your compositional palette broadens and you've so much more in the bank to work with. But haha, they aren't saying it quite like ol' Concerto there (I got nice-guy vibes straight up). And the thing is there are absolutely those types in music, although I was surprised how many of the people I study with are a lot more chill. I guess that just makes the up-themselves ones stand out even more, haha.

Great story, which I really enjoyed. Take the upvote!

Thanks so much, Acologic! I'm really glad you enjoyed this one! :pinkiehappy:

And this is what happens when fate decides to intervene, or something...
Cute little one off, and nice to see Octavia paired with some pony other than Vinyl just for a change of pace. Thanks for the smile.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile: Thank you for 'saying something'. :raritywink:

he is just like ,but i will never have the courage to say something.poor me .

It can be hard to approach someone for the first time. :fluttershysad:

You know what? This was so well done. I loved the shy romance and the cheering up. It made me smile. You deserve an upvote and a smile.:pinkiehappy:

Aww! :raritystarry: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile: Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Soviet Power Soldier deleted Dec 2nd, 2018

This is the first story I have ever read where Noteworthy is the main protagonist, and I just gotta say, it was awesome! Love the shipping you chose. They make a cute couple. :pinkiehappy:


I'm in. :heart:

This was a most splendid NoteTavia story, I really enjoyed it. You've got a real talent for this kind of story.

Romance. This could be the start of a potential series.

Ahh! Thank you for the clarification. :pinkiehappy: Romance is what you meant. :raritywink:

A nice little romance fic.

The title sums up the dilemma Noteworthy has. Just say something to her!

When you think about it. It was thanks to that snobbish associate of Octavia that they got together.

Thank you! :twilightsmile: Yeah, the thought occurred to me too. :raritywink:

A very nice story

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