The Only Twilight

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A broken-spirited Spike waits for news of Twilight after an accident lands her in the hospital, dancing on the fine line between recovery and the unspeakable.

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WhitewolfStormrunner

WhitewolfStormrunner #3 · Jul 1st, 2019 · 3 · ·

Okay.

Just take all my feels and my tears.
I wasn't using them.
Not at all.

Lovely, heartwarming story, btw.
Loved it.

Tranquil Serenity

Tranquil Serenity #4 · Jul 1st, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Thank you so much!
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WhitewolfStormrunner

WhitewolfStormrunner #5 · Jul 1st, 2019 · 1 · ·

9708958 You're very welcome!

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Lets Do This

Lets Do This #8 · Jul 1st, 2019 · 2 · ·

This is nice... a gently maudlin slice-of-life that has a pleasant conclusion, and gives Spike and Rarity a rare opportunity to be close with each other, through sharing their feelings about a mutual friend.

I do have some line edits and additional feedback for you, which I'll send you as a PM, as requested.

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Tranquil Serenity

Tranquil Serenity #10 · Jul 1st, 2019 · · ·

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Thank you. And I appreciate your using PM as requested.

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Discord The Narrator

Discord The Narrator #12 · Jul 2nd, 2019 · · ·

This looks nice, so I'll read it.

Also, I have seen two removed comments from someone called "Herald of Opera". What did he say?

Tranquil Serenity

Tranquil Serenity #13 · Jul 2nd, 2019 · 1 · ·

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The removed comments had to do with grammar, I guess they didn't see the Author's Note saying to direct them to PM. There wasn't a brawl or anything, I just deleted them after the information had been exchanged.

Discord The Narrator

Discord The Narrator #14 · Jul 2nd, 2019 · · ·

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Oh, ok then! No worries.

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #15 · Jul 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

This is so beautiful, so moving. Sometimes we can take the ones we love for granted, and we don't realize until almost too late what we'll miss if they're not there.

Tranquil Serenity