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Tranquil Serenity


I am a proud one-shot writer who loves Slice of Life tales and hearing from readers who enjoy my stories. Click on my blogs for an MLP poem.

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A broken-spirited Spike waits for news of Twilight after an accident lands her in the hospital, dancing on the fine line between recovery and the unspeakable.

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Comments ( 19 )
Comment posted by Artist deleted Jul 1st, 2019
Comment posted by Tranquil Serenity deleted Jul 1st, 2019

Okay.

Just take all my feels and my tears.
I wasn't using them.
Not at all.

Lovely, heartwarming story, btw.
Loved it.

Comment posted by Artist deleted Jul 1st, 2019
Comment posted by Herald of Opera deleted Jul 1st, 2019

This is nice... a gently maudlin slice-of-life that has a pleasant conclusion, and gives Spike and Rarity a rare opportunity to be close with each other, through sharing their feelings about a mutual friend.

I do have some line edits and additional feedback for you, which I'll send you as a PM, as requested.

Comment posted by Tranquil Serenity deleted Jul 1st, 2019

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Thank you. And I appreciate your using PM as requested. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Herald of Opera deleted Jul 1st, 2019

This looks nice, so I'll read it.:ajsmug:

Also, I have seen two removed comments from someone called "Herald of Opera". What did he say?:derpytongue2:

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The removed comments had to do with grammar, I guess they didn't see the Author's Note saying to direct them to PM. There wasn't a brawl or anything, I just deleted them after the information had been exchanged. :twilightsheepish:

This is so beautiful, so moving. Sometimes we can take the ones we love for granted, and we don't realize until almost too late what we'll miss if they're not there.

Hearthwarming to say the least. Nice touch with the song

Comment posted by MikiStenbeck deleted Jul 31st, 2019
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