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Tranquil Serenity


I am a proud one-shot writer who loves Slice of Life tales and hearing from readers who enjoy my stories. Click on my blogs for an MLP poem.

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Comments ( 19 )

*Cocks shotgun.* So...who made Scootaloo sad?

Welp.

B R O T H E R. GET THE FLAMER.

THE HEAVY FLAMER.

9761915
Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon I'm guessing

This was adorable and the song really shows Scoots hopes and dreams. Maybe it would be a nice touch with Rainbow at the end? Kind of like Flight to the Finish

9761939
Yeah, the lines are direct quotes from Flight to the Finish.

9761941
I'm glad you felt the song did what it was supposed to. Well, I did want to it be its own story, and having Rainbow pop in would probably make it just feel too much like a rehash of that Flight to the Finish episode. This is supposed to take place afterwards. The idea is that the issue Scootaloo fights with - others saying she can't fly and her fearing she can't - is ongoing. But she has friends to support her through it. :pinkiesmile:

9761950
I see... well thank you for sharing. It kinda did almost feel like a rehash of the episode. At least you used an original song I think instead of following the song of said episode

9762107
Well it had similarities, but it also had differences too. :applejackunsure:

9762142
True. Still I enjoyed the read:twilightsmile:

Very nice! Even if that Episode was long ago, you really showed the meaning of that for Scoots. Frankly, I hope they make an episode where Scoots finally flys

9762254
Thank you! :twilightsmile: That would be a nice little happy ending for her. I guess we'll just have to wait, watch, and see. :raritywink:
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9762264
Indeed. And if not, we fans make her in our stories. There are many stories of that after all already

That ending scene was sweet. Poor Scoots.

9761939
*Puts down shotgun.* Eh, I guess that would be a bit extreme.

9762551
Glad you liked the resolution. :twilightsmile:

Yeah. :fluttershysad:

Everybody should have such nice friends like Scootaloo.
Great story. I have a few goals or dreams like Scootaloo. #1 is write good stories. #2 is be able to communicate with strangers or native speakers, watch movies, read books, write stories in English language.

9774977
Thank you. :twilightsmile: Best of luck with that. :pinkiehappy:

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