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Tranquil Serenity


I am a one-shot writer who loves Slice of Life tales and hearing from readers who enjoy my stories. Click on my blogs for an MLP poem.

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An uneventful description of Rarity's and Sweetie Belle's bedtime, as well as the earliest bit of their morning.

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Comments ( 20 )

Tranquil indeed. I like this kind of story :twilightsmile:

Well that was pretty good. Keep writing :)

9364597
Aww, thanks! :twilightsmile: Oooo! Starfire! She's my favorite of the Teen Titans - and yes, I mean the older program. :pinkiehappy:

9364707
Mine too! She's so sweet-natured and funny, yet so strong and formidable.

Ah, a nice, relaxing read.

Very good, serene and well described.
The only issue I have:

Rarity cast aside her own half of the blanket, and slid her lower hooves off the bed 'til they touched the carpet. She paused for a moment, inhaling and then releasing a deep breath before taking to her feet.

So she has... Lower hooves and feet? This is some kind of chimera, yes?
:rainbowlaugh:

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I'm glad you liked the tone. :twilightsmile: Haha! :rainbowlaugh: It's sometimes hard to remember to use pony terms every single time. Good catch! :raritywink:

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It's not just terms, it's biology!
:rainbowwild:
Blahhh.

A short and sweet sisterly moment between two characters

Aw, so cute! :3

That was a nice little story to read. :twilightsmile:

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