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Tranquil Serenity

I am a one-shot writer who loves Slice of Life tales and hearing from readers who enjoy my stories. Click on my blogs for an MLP poem.


An uneventful description of Rarity's and Sweetie Belle's bedtime, as well as the earliest bit of their morning.

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Comments ( 21 )

Tranquil indeed. I like this kind of story :twilightsmile:

Well that was pretty good. Keep writing :)

Aww, thanks! :twilightsmile: Oooo! Starfire! She's my favorite of the Teen Titans - and yes, I mean the older program. :pinkiehappy:

Mine too! She's so sweet-natured and funny, yet so strong and formidable.

Ah, a nice, relaxing read.

Very good, serene and well described.
The only issue I have:

Rarity cast aside her own half of the blanket, and slid her lower hooves off the bed 'til they touched the carpet. She paused for a moment, inhaling and then releasing a deep breath before taking to her feet.

So she has... Lower hooves and feet? This is some kind of chimera, yes?

I'm glad you liked the tone. :twilightsmile: Haha! :rainbowlaugh: It's sometimes hard to remember to use pony terms every single time. Good catch! :raritywink:

It's not just terms, it's biology!

A short and sweet sisterly moment between two characters

Aw, so cute! :3

That was a nice little story to read. :twilightsmile:

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