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Tranquil Serenity


I am a proud one-shot writer who loves Slice of Life tales and hearing from readers who enjoy my stories. Click on my blogs for an MLP poem.

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Guh, so sweet and cute.

Ah, Beatrix Potter does seem like the sort of author that Fluttershy might like, though what she makes of Mr. McGregor is hard to guess. And a rare story about a young Angel Bunny, before he grew up, learned to read cook books with exotic salads in them, and become the fluffy curmudgeon we all know and love. Cute little story. Definitely a thumbs up :yay:

Aww, simple and sweet!

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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I'm grateful you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

Nice, short story to pass a few minutes during a lazy Sunday morning, its atmosphere topped off by the light snowfall outside. While the fluffy cuteness there definitely did warm my heart, I cannot shake the feeling that something is missing—some sort of moral, a bit of lore or something interesting or unexpected about young Angel Bunny. Something to make the story unique and memorable :twilightsheepish:

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Mmm, well I guess it just turned out to be a little fluff piece. :rainbowkiss: I'm glad you liked the descriptive aspects and found it cute though. :derpytongue2:

You seriously write the cutest stories on this site!

Just curious who is your favorite character to write about? I also love that you didn't make Angel a jerk like so many others unfortunately do.

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Aww! Thank you! :twilightsmile:
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Mmm, well I find that I've written the most stories about Fluttershy and Rarity. So I guess I find them the easiest characters to write about. :pinkiehappy: Thanks again! :rainbowkiss:

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No problem :) If you are ever up for it I think you'd do great at Mama Twilight/Spike stories!
Also nice Zootopia pic!

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Well, it indeed is a bit of fluff. I just think that it’s a shame that a good story will be forgotten in mere minutes after being finished by the reader :derpytongue2:

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Different things are memorable to different people. 🙃

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Very true words. What stands out for you in this story? :twilightsmile:

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It highlights the warmth between a young Angel Bunny and Fluttershy who cares for him by reading to him and tucking him in. I think sometimes people remember the feelings a story invokes, and not so much a grand event in it. :scootangel:

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For some people, simplicity is appealing. I enjoy a short story that has no problem to solve, no villain to defeat, and nothing that really requires thought. There's something relaxing about just being put into a simple moment without it being something unique or standout. I guess it's like being taken to another world in a way that is more relatable. Because most moments in life aren't unique and memorable, but they are the ones we experience the most. I like to experience those moments too, in a fictional setting, through stories like this.

Hopefully that explains the appeal some. It's not for everyone, and some people may enjoy this kind of story for different reasons than me.

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I don’t need a grand event to feel that way, per se. Maybe the story was too short for me to invoke that feeling and that kind of atmosphere, maybe it was something else... :twilightsheepish: But yes, I can see where you are coming from with that. It was nice talking to you :ajsmug:

Well that was freakin' adorable... Good job.

this is adorable. Even though Angel Bunny can be a huge jerk he is still a fluffy adorable little bunny

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This was some cute fluff.

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