Raponezel: A Taste of Freedom

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Living at the top of a secluded tower is a beautiful pink pony with an extremely long mane. She waits forlornly, her pet baby alligator by her side, for her mother to return...

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IDontWatchMLP

IDontWatchMLP #1 · Jun 4th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Tangled × Pinkie Pie?!

That just works somehow.

Tangerine Blast

Tangerine Blast #2 · Jun 4th, 2019 · 1 · ·

This was pretty darn good

Sigma666

Sigma666 #3 · Jun 4th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Nice

SunflowerSwirl

SunflowerSwirl #4 · Jun 4th, 2019 · · ·

Raponezel walked over to the open window and rested her chin on the sill, looking down and out at the treetops of the forest that surrounded her tower. In her feverish worry, the thought had occurred to her to go looking for her mother many times, but... well, she had never left her home before, and Mother Gotland had always been strongly against it. "Never leave this tower, Raponezel," her mother would say. "The world outside is a horrible place! Filled with the cruelest of ponies who would only harm a sweet young mare like yourself. You must stay here and content yourself with throwing parties for me."

Happiness keeps her young?

Tranquil Serenity

Tranquil Serenity #5 · Jun 4th, 2019 · · ·

9662155
Glad you think so.

Tranquil Serenity

Tranquil Serenity #6 · Jun 4th, 2019 · · ·

9662210
Aww, thanks!

Tranquil Serenity

Tranquil Serenity #7 · Jun 4th, 2019 · · ·

9662234
Thanks!

Tranquil Serenity

Tranquil Serenity #8 · Jun 4th, 2019 · · ·

9662476
Hmm. Well it's open to interpretation. Of course, the motivations could be very different from the Disney film too. 🤔 Thanks for reading!

WhispersInTheDark

WhispersInTheDark #9 · Jun 4th, 2019 · 1 · ·

This was almost unbearably cute! And it's going in my Group

Tranquil Serenity

Tranquil Serenity #10 · Jun 5th, 2019 · · ·

9662719
Awesome! Thank you very much!

MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #11 · Jun 11th, 2019 · 1 · ·

A shame this wasn't continued. Would have been interesting. Tangled Pinkie Version

Tranquil Serenity

Tranquil Serenity #12 · Jun 11th, 2019 · · ·

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I actually started this story back in January of 2018 and got to about halfway before I ran out of steam. Recently I managed to force myself to figure out a way to finish the other half and turn it into a half-decent short story, which is what you see here.

It's pretty rare that I find myself passionate and full of enough ideas to keep with a single story long enough to turn it into something with more than one chapter. I guess there's just so many different interesting stories one can tell, and I tend to lose interest and move on to the next idea fairly quickly - hence the one-shots.