• Member Since 26th Jan, 2013
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Jagged Fox


When Gummy finally realizes what his true affections for Pinkie are, he decides to tell her. However, he is entirely incapable of speech, and must resort to other methods to tell her.

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...Woah. That was pretty amazing. :pinkiehappy: Never seen Gummy x Pinkie before. But I think it's cute. :derpytongue2:

I feel like this story should have more parts to it. It would be a shame for it to be a one-shot.

2168169 Thanks! Yeah, i haven't run into one either. That's part of why I wrote it. :twilightblush:

2168214 I considered that, especially since I have run into a lot of stories that I wished had more parts to them, lol. :facehoof: But I decided to put out at least a couple one-shots before I write a novel. I've run into just a few too many awesome book length stories with not nearly enough views, so getting some experience and followers first wasn't a bad idea. Also, every journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step. I need to get the momentum picking up before I try something crazy. :rainbowdetermined2:

Although, I must say I did enjoy the story. Bravo, good sir.

2169523 Thank you kind sir. I hope to keep improving with time, and the only way to do that is to write some stories. :pinkiehappy: I never came across any Pinkie/Gummy fics, so I decided to give it a go. Lol, I now know why. :twilightsmile:

FINALLY got around to reading your story: it's been sitting in my notifications folder for a while now.

I like how you gave voice to the pets, especially Tank and Angel. I also enjoy the fact that you made Tank quite wise despite his apparent slowness, and secretly enjoyed how Angel is a total dick. I always thought that too, and evidently I'm not the only one.

It was short, simple, well-written, and an idea which I don't think I've ever seen before. Some grammatical and flow errors aside, it was a pretty good little story, especially for being around 2000 words (I find it close to impossible to do anything less than 10,000...but you know me...)

Well done! I feel like I should start writing little works again...I now have an insatiable need to write stories with feelings and sadness and tears of joy and elation!

Gah! You keep doing this to me...why do you keep doing this to me!!?? :rainbowwild:

2173228 Alright, you got me. I made this story to point out what everypony thinks. Angel is a dick. He was in the series, and in about half the fan-fics that he plays a role in. I do this because I'm a dick and like to torment people by deceiving them into thinking it's gonna be a shipping fic! MUAHAHAHAHA!!!! :flutterrage:

Well done ol chap! :moustache:

Good job, mate. I hope a sequel is created.

2177655 I'm considering it. Maybe from Tank's perspective? That could be interesting... :pinkiehappy:


Comment posted by Ryanzombies01 deleted Feb 28th, 2013

2192444 Wow, these reactions are kinda weird. I mean, I thought that this one would just be another short ship, but I guess everyone's wanting a longer story. hmmm. I think I'll consider it. :pinkiehappy:

2332198 lol, planning on it. I'll release a chapter with a link to the sequel once it's complete. :pinkiehappy:

2343914 I was just watching cupcakes a minute ago (I know, I'm a freak, so what), and I did notice that he isn't in it, lol.

Not too shabby, that's for sure. Like pretty much everyone else says, do a sequel. Just do it.

Great story. Didn't end sadly or badly. Just the right amount of everything. Gummy sure does sigh inwardly alot, huh?

2393334 Yeah, I over did it just a little on this one. Honestly, if I was in his shoes i'd do the same thing.

Poor, barely sentient, toothless, little bastard...

2393899 No sympathy, huh? Go figure...:applecry:

Gods.....this......this was beautiful, talk about the tragic break of the heart for Gummy but I'm very glad he tried, he knows he can't be anything more then pet and he accpets that....though he wishes otherswise, but it also makes me wonder if both Gummy and Tank will live as long as Spike or not.

1000+ points of respect for Tank, seriously even though I loved him at the start the fact that you made him a sage is amazing. Angel is a bastard, then again I always liked the idea of him more as an enemy or foe in stories then an ally, just seems to fit him a bit better in my eyes, depending.

Damn, I would KILL to read an Angel/Fluttershy story of romance and I very, very much love this romantic if tragic story of Gummy/Pinkie. This really deserves the feature box and I'm honored to read such an amazing peice of work, I'll be watching you, can't wait to see what else you come up with.:twilightsmile:

2404601 So many words...thanks for the complements! :pinkiehappy: Yeah, I've been so busy lately, I've been delayed in posting the sequel, which has the other pets and their little attempts at showing their true feelings for their masters. And Tank being the wise one would also make sense because he is by far the oldest, relatively speaking. Where rabbits and dogs live like ten to twenty years, turtles can live hundreds.

2421008 My pleasure:twilightsmile: That is completely understandable, I can't wait to see more of them:yay: I never though of that with Gummy and Tank, very badass:twilightsmile:

2421133 Yup, they'll be the longest lived, if biology were to apply.

2421196 Besides Peewee and Philomena of course:facehoof::rainbowlaugh:

I liked this story, have an upvote good sir

Aww... That was really cute! Especially when Gummy wrote the message... :applecry: It was kind of sad, but then I guess it couldn't really have ended in any other way.

I would've been interested to see Angel's attempts to woo Fluttershy. :rainbowwild:

2430348 Oddly enough, he might well be more successful. You know Fluttershy, after all.


Is that a 'Banned From Equestria' reference by any chance? :rainbowwild:

I really liked this story! It was funny and kind of heartwarming at the same time.

I just think it ended SUPER abruptly; especially since in general story structure, you finished the first act and started the second, then suddenly ended it out of nowhere.

5820410 I wrote this more than two years ago and was just a freshman in college at the time. While this excuse doesn't justify my actions, it does give a bit of perspective.

Aww....I haven't seen a PinkiexGummy ship before, this is amazing and so adorable.:heart:All aboard the shipping train.:trollestia:

Aha! A new ship to add to my fleet! All aboard the SS Gimpy!

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