• Member Since 26th Jan, 2013
  • offline last seen Nov 17th, 2015

Jagged Fox


Luna has been anticipating Nightmare Night since she heard that it had been created while she was gone. After making a trip to Ponyville, the place from which she had been freed, she finds herself rejected by everypony. Well, everypony but Rainbow Dash, that is...

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 95 )

This is sssooooo un-Rainbow!

"I'll never tell! Muahahaha!!"

Dude, that wig is sweet! So many colors...

:rainbowlaugh: all those lines cracked me up a little the simplicity of RD's thoughts is :rainbowderp:...... Uh....?

You're missing a speech mark where Rainbow is asking about whether Luna uses the Royal Canterlot Voice around Celestia.

Also, good story. I love different POV's. :rainbowkiss:

2345936 Oops! :derpytongue2:

2345908 Thanks! It is now in that group. Eeyup.

2346196 Uh...boy/girl? Sorry, but I'm kinda :derpytongue2:

2346211 I am a mal, I think...Gender check! Yes, it does seem that I am, in fact, mal!

2346349 I was just comparing the two options you gave me...:derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2::rainbowderp:

Very nice story so far. I like that it's Rainbow helping Luna adjust, as well as being the more well read Rainbow.
I hope Rainbow doesn't end up teaching Luna to prank. That can't end well...

very very good.please countinue this.

2346502 I'm not gonna give spoilers, but this section of the story is kinda predictable. And as for Rainbow reading more, that's the point where the story starts to diverge. I wanted to write a story where one event changes everything! Yes, chaos shall ensue...

2347311 I will!

2347297 Don't judge him/her too harshly. You didn't know what gender I was, and my profile sort of screams "Male"! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Yours is Rainbow Dash, so of course people will tend towards the actual gender of said character. Wow, that was weird! Okay, so you're a dude. Check.

2348857 actually not many people think m a girl :rainbowderp: most know I'm male from the start


only thing that gets a little annoying is that you keep using 'people' instead of 'ponies'. otherwise I like this a lot

2349407 I figured you were probably male since you picked RD Godmode, and most bronies are male anyway.

2349568 :rainbowlaugh: Oops! hehehe, I sometimes forget about that... :rainbowderp:

2351035 how am i suppose i would know what gender you are?

At which rate do you wanna upload chapters?
Or just the random-interval-way? :trixieshiftright:

2358636i'v see ya around this site.your pretty awesome you know that?

2358974 are you just kissing up to me?


I demand more, said "more" is defined as around 3k words per week, updated regularly, and with a fresh basket of yeast bread on the side. Otherwise, you can supplement the basket with U.S. dollars or another 2K words. Failure to comply will result in your banishment from every website or public building that you will never visit, and your banishment from participating in any activity that you would never do in the first place.

2359739 I'm thinking every week plus any spare time between all my stories.

2359060 is that a bad thing?cant i just say someone is awesome without being acused of something?

2365101 This seems suspicious. But he has a point. I have seen a comment by you on just about every fanfic I've read.

2367071 are you sure it wasn't also SolidFireStar? He has the same avatar as me

2367519 It actually is a little weird to be honest.

2367522 I don't know what to say to this so.....


2367546 .....

2367616 I'm random :derpyderp1::rainbowkiss:
can I show you my Thu'um?:yay: yay! *blasts a guy over a mile away*


2369787 helping psycotigas brainstorm some ideas for a fic and let me tell you, it's awesome!

2393187 Yur right, of course. I'll have one posted late tonight, still working out the story plot. I'm debating how far to go, as well. It's teen, and I intend to keep it that way on this one, lol.

2393233 Hehe, thanks. I probably wouldn't do the best at clopfics if I ever went there, especially since the few times that I've had in my own life wouldn't be easy to blatantly show off for the world. I have a few amazing memories with a girl I really loved (though she didn't actually return the favor, it turned out.), and wouldn't want to just hand it out.

2393426 Vulpine?! :rainbowlaugh: You have quite a lexicon going there, lol. I usually just say "fox", you lupine! I may be lazy, but I'll still catch the rabbit in the end. :pinkiehappy:

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