The night at the gala was ruined and Rainbow Dash is depressed. Though it seems her night will be mended by an unlikely source...
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A Fox in Equestria
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aww, that was cute :D
although i've been watching so much adventure time it's hard not to read it in that universe's princess' voice XD
oh well, cool story bro, needs more sequel
1993001 daaahahahahahaha that's new XD
nopony's ever called me m'lord before, well, there was that one time, but we don't talk about that anymore
I liked it alot but i think you should make it longer. You have so much more you could do with this.
i love it.i have an idea for this couple.i have the summary.does any one want to here it?also can i put this in my newly formed group called rainbowluna?
1995060
Sure, I guess.
1996148thanks
1993067
Like what? That cliche theme where Equestria is outraged that Luna fell in love with a mare then they fix everything and live simple lives? No. Sorry, but I made this a short one-shot for a reason.
lunaDash *Squee!!*
I'm imagining Celestia coming into the room
"Luna! What have I told you about molesting our subjects?"
"that you Tia not me!"
"errr right I'll just leave you to along now"
Celestia backs out the room, stops outside to lick one of Luna's guards before trotting back to her chambers
Dash spoke up "wow that was weird. Does she really molest ponies?"
"one thousand years alone tends to lead to um sexual needs"
"remind me not to be in the same room along with her!"
"agreed!"
You need to add this HERE
This is the seventh of its kind on this site Seventh there are only seven LunaDash fics!!
1997038
You see: I am a certified dumbass and do not know how to do that. If you could tell me, or better yet, do it for me. I would appreciate it.
You just join the group and add your story I
It's not that hard
There ya go wasn't so hard was it?
1998382
I only broke one thumb.
It's ok I broke two hands when I tried
And then Celestia walked in with Twilight and the others to find out if Luna - as Princess of the Night - knew where Rainbow Dash was at the moment. Most awkward night ever.
In all seriousness, beautiful story and very well written. ...although since this happens at end of season one, it makes me wonder what happens differently in Luna Eclipsed when Luna comes to Ponyville...
1996431
Alternatively, no one makes a fuss which leaves Luna very confused, and then Celestia has to explain just how progressive such things have become in Equestria...
Or, also alternatively, Luna is so worried about how this will effect things that she and Rainbow keep their new relationship a secret - poorly - with humorous results as their friends/family pretend not to know for their sakes.
1999099
Sounds like too much work.
1999506
Which part? Celestia and the others walking in or rewritting Luna Eclipsed to take this into account?
1999531
Just writing in general.
I have finals all this week and somehow forgot an entire semester of algebra.
1999550
Ouch.
Well, what about next week when finals are over?
1999611
To tell you the truth: I wrote this about a year ago and just got around to publishing it. If it had gotten a bit better of a turnout I may have done a sequel, but it didn't, so I think this is about it.
Though...
The original idea was to ship all of the mane 6 with Luna. I just never got around to it (plus I suck at writing for Rarity). But I may try to go through with that plan.
Maybe.
Not likely.
But possible.
1999645
...you posted it yesterday. How much more of a turnout were you expecting?
If you enjoyed writing it, then write more. If not, don't.
Don't base what you're going to write off others expectations.
1999661
I was expecting hundreds of fans to accept me as their supreme overlord.
Just kidding. And I think writing is what made me so bad in school in the first place. Don't get me wrong -I love to write- but sometimes it takes up so much time I end up wanting more than thirty likes for it and damn I sound like a whiny bitch when i'm tired.
Yaaaay! That was fun.
1999693
No problem. Personally, when I have a story in my head, I HAVE to write it or it will never leave me alone. But it's okay, write when you have time and motivation...but base it off you, not others.
1999645 I like the idea of a sequal of... lunadash? rainbowluna? what woudl this be called? I dunno, but it is almost as good as Twidash to me.
It felt a little disjointed,
but it was still extremely adorable. 7/10, will fave.
2000379
Rainbuna
Heh.
While I did spot a few typos this story was well-written and I loved it a lot. The pace moved a bit too fast at times for my liking, such as when Rainbow and Luna first interacted, but other than that it was great, with one of my favourite ships!
Best pair ever! Is there something wrong with me for thinking that. It's Luna not celestia, so it's okay. Yet no one makes these stories! Curse you minds of authors! In all honesty awesome story we need more lunadash
Aww, so cute.
I think you managed to portray both of their characters well. Lunadash is amazing, promoted to second favorite ship. 
I'm just about to start reading this but I have to mention that every time I read the title it makes me start singing, "Whalers on the Moon" from Futurama.