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NintendoGal55


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The little moments before and after Fluttershy was made up to be a clone of Rainbow Dash during "Magic Duel". With their futures at stake, Fluttershy knows that she herself has to try hard as well to pull off their trick in order for it to work. The little boosts that come in the form of Rainbow's love and confidence in her are usually part of what she needs.
Warning, pure fluff.
Co-written with Flutterdash7, rated for suggestive dialogue.

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Comments ( 37 )

Warning, pure fluff.

Reason enough for me to start reading this.

My gosh, I forgot to take my daily dose of Flutterdash! This will suffice.

1855538 Hee! Me too. :pinkiehappy:

1855559 I'm glad! XD I hope to be able to provide FlutterDash fans with a much-needed dose. Goodness knows I needed some, too!

As stinging as the plucking was, Fluttershy appreciated her mare’s efforts to make her feel better. It made the process a lot easier to bare.

bare should be bear

“I know... I know...” The cocky mare soaked up her lover’s praise, grinning/

The slash should be replaced by a period

Awww.. that was very cute
..and a little funny!

Well done!

I'm going to be silly and an ass, and post a bunch of things poking fun at a few lines. Enjoy!!

Dash puffed out her chest a big with pride as she continued, briskly painting her way over to where the butterflies sat on the mare’s flank.

Translated: She kissed Fluttershy's ass

“Of course! This will be fun.” She gently lay her fillyfriend on her back, nuzzling her the whole way down.

Pinkie then grabbed the popcorn, and whispered, "This is getting pretty hot!"

She spread her hind legs a bit to grant better access to her midsection.

I have two for this one:
- Fluttershy whispered, "Take me in front of everypony... now!!!"
- It was only then that Rarity saw the can of paint, and realized that it caused sterility.

an identical clone of Rainbow Dash.

As opposed to a nonidentical clone? Hmm... guess that's what Spike is...

First, the left contact was inserted, with Rarity using her magic to gently hold both eyes open wide, and then placed the contact over it.

It was then that a sudden banging on the door startled Rarity, instinctively shoving forward with her magic as hard as possible.

Sniggers drifted across from the direction of the farmers at this question.

I'm sure there's a racist joke in there somewhere...

With the power of friendship, ingenuity, and trickery, they could surely overcome this great threat.

And don't forget the lying!!

Falling to the ground, Dash continued the kiss, slowly laying her fillyfriend on the road beside her, losing herself to her lover as the passion quickly built.

You know... I was technically kidding about the whole "Take me in front of everypony." line, alright?

A voice rang out from across the road. “Hey Bon Bon look at this! Wow, I guess Rainbow Dash really IS in love with herself!”

Nah, it's just a one night fling.

“We are not to speak of this ever again,” Bon Bon said sternly.

"But can we... clop to it?" Lyra asked. She then died a terrible death.

“Hmmm... Two Rainbow Dash’s playing in my house?” The athletic prankster could imagine a few opportunities presented therein. “I can live with that.”

Little did Rainbow know, Spike, Scootaloo, and the rest of the Rainbow Dash fan club were waiting for her in the house.

“It’s back. It suits you better than rainbows do...”

"And that's why I'm dumping you."

“Can I see the rest of my Fluttershy?"

NO COMMENT!!

“A-Are you sure? ...Have you ever removed a contact before?” Fluttershy asked in a nervous squeak, trembling a bit.

"No, but I'm pretty sure I can do better than punching your skull in with magic accidentally."

All that she could see and feel was the two of them, within their little love cocoon.

If Fluttershy did go into a cocoon, would she turn into a butterfly with three small Fluttershys as her Cutie Mark? Hmm...

“You have a very comfy bed...and I’m more than aching to snuggle...” Fluttershy cooed sweetly, winking and kissing her nose.

It was then that Rainbow realized she was going to need a cold shower... a very, very cold shower.

“...How does next spring sound?”

"You didn't get my hint about rainbows not suiting you... did you?"

It was a whole new step in the right direction toward their futures.

Except for the meteorite that was now crashing into Rainbow's house. That was a slightly wrong step.

1855760 XD Oh, don't make me come over there!

1855807 Hush. You laughed and you know it.

1855827 I did not! I was furious!!!! FURIOUS!!!!! :flutterrage:

XD Yes, I did. Glad you had fun!

I don't forgive you for the dumping. Not cool. :twilightangry2:

1855851 :rainbowlaugh:

And you're forgiven! :pinkiehappy::derpytongue2:

I love that image...:yay::heart::rainbowkiss:

Dawwww:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss: too cute but i like this shipping for its cuteness:pinkiehappy:

This's cute. Yes. Love. :pinkiehappy:

Most waffy, and yeah, entirely made of fluff. Good show. :yay::rainbowkiss:

Super fluffy, no joke! I enjoyed it, but I would suggest going through your first paragraph again. I remember it for all the wrong reasons.

:yay::heart::rainbowwild:

FLUTTERDASH IS BEST COUPLE!! :rainbowkiss:

THE FLUFF
*DIES FROM FLUFF OVERLOAD*

Also, I'm loving this continuity thats building among the flutterdash fics! :yay:

Took me a bit to get back to reading in Fim-Fiction, something about not being stressed from work seems to make it less of a need, but when i did get back i find some Snuggly & Nibbly.

While this one is certainly good some of the grammar mixed me up for a bit, and this installment pretty much requires having read the others for a full effect.

Still this entry did not seem to forcibly inject diabetus into my brain. It just was not over-saturated sugar in text form. Not a bad thing but not what i was expecting. This one is more bedroom eyes and tug of war than candy injection.

The pranking was just about priceless, just wish Lyra had off hoofedly mentioned trying out the whole painting swap thing to tease Bon Bon some.

Anycase, it was great to catch another entry in Snuggly & Nibbly. Though Nibbling wasn't really addressed in this one much if at all.

this was so great! thank you nintendogal55 for being existent! you make my life a whole light brighter!:twilightsmile:

This is the BEST flutterdash fic iv'e read yet and enjoyed every bit of it Very nice work:rainbowdetermined2:

I can't help but wonder if this is and "Hurricane Rainbow Dash" are at all related to any of your other stories, perhaps one that actually details the origin of their relationship. (I'm going to say "Crude Misconceptions" for example because it actually has some pre-relationship romantic tension rather than the two already being in a relationship, but I still haven't gone through all your Flutterdash fics yet :P)

This story litterally gave me a sugar-rush. I felt hyper while reading it. You turned me into ....well.... :pinkiehappy: <---that. You turned me into that while I was reading this.

I don't know how you did it....but this story managed to get really saucy and hot....without being pornographic. Steamy but tasteful.
That happy middle between "endearing":twilightsheepish: and.....horse-sex. :twilightoops:

2026597 Most of the time, the stories aren't related unless maybe one is a sequel or follow-up. It's hard to say, really! XD They're all pretty much their own story!

But "Worry" does connect with "Pegasi Introspection", considering that events from the former are mentioned in the latter. XD Perfect On Paper has a character seen in "Worry", but is not actually connected to it.

Anyway though, thanks! Glad you had fun! :pinkiehappy:

XD Oh, then you won't like Heated or Ponyville High School since both those stories have explicit sex scenes. ESPECIALLY the former. XD But beyond that, I definitely can step back and make something tasteful and steamy without making it sexually explicit. :twilightsmile:

Anyone who says they don't like a good clop is probably fibbing. Like me, I was fibbing! ....though I did say "good" clop. Hitting "mature" for the rating content and "sex" for the desired mature content in the filters...along with my usual preference of filtering out tragedy, human, crossover, and other gunk I don't like....yields nothing in the results. And clopfics I've found elsewhere were just....bad. Very bad. There was one clopfic I liked that was a Rarishy, I think it was called "Ribbons and Lace"...or was it ribbons and frills...? I don't even know who wrote it I'd have to look it up again. That one was a good example of a clopfic where I actually liked the story .....but when it got to the actual sex parts I just found it uncomfortably juvenile and wrong. >_0. Oh well. I'll check out "Heated" or "Ponyville High School" first chance I get.

2026807 XD I see what you mean! That's understandable. Bad clop, or rather, just badly written sex, is pretty annoying. There's just no care in it and that's the real problem. I've seen clopfics that are less than 2,000 words and all I'm thinking is "How in the world do you condense a sex scene to be THAT short?!"

But anyway, Heated does have a lot of sex scenes, but I can assure you that it's a lot more about the bonding and the emotions between Rainbow and Fluttershy.:twilightsmile: Because that is the entire point, coming closer together than ever. In Ponyville High School, there is so far just one sex scene. XD They will be a bit sporadic throughout, but they will be present as we go along. :pinkiehappy: And again, like in Heated, it's meant to be emotional.

Additional head-canon for the episode! :pinkiehappy: Wonderful story! :twilightsmile:

This is so amazing :heart:

Loved this story so much. But um... the one part I really felt the pain was when she was plucking her eyelashes.... omg ow D:

It would be interesting to see how the wedding goes (wink wink) aww come on i know you know what i mean... i can haz sequel :pinkiehappy:
:yay :heart: :rainbowdetermined2: Forever

I found it a good read, romantic, cute and a little bit funny all at once. :twilightsheepish: I liked it, however, I do have to point out that you used the term "Bold" a whopping seventeen times to describe Rainbow Dash. :applejackunsure:

Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.

callback to a certain exchange back in the Crystal Empire

Wait, is this what I think it is?
Great story! (as usual)
~Wywint

Yes, it's fluff. But fluff can be good sometimes.

I really like FlutterDash, and you're one of the best authors that writes it. Another good one.

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