Life on the Moon is difficult.
The only hope is Ascension. But who gets left behind, and what steps must one take to earn such a blessing? Sophia believes she was destined for it. Wayne can only dream of it. Vonnie fears its implications. Meika has no choice.
Life on the Moon is difficult. What purpose is there in a goal? No one is getting off. The only way to have hope is to Ascend to something else.
Submission for Bicylette's Sci Fi contest 2: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/216150/folder/76395/science-fiction-contest-ii-2023-entries
Ascension to where?
I have to respect the audacity of "Vonnie Kurtegut."
In any case, fascinating stuff, though a very loose connection to MLP. Not a complaint in terms of the quality of the story, but we'll see how the judges feel about it. Regardless, thank you for some great sci-fi.
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Thanks. I know I've shifted to writing more original works so it was hard bringing it back to fanfiction.
I personally feel I can do a lot better with this concept as a fully realized original novelette, maybe even novella.
oof, what a strange and isolated society that is sure to arise from this!
ooh, foreboding! also, indicating an admixture of Russian culture and language?
Scott Pilgrim reference???
excellent way to remind the leaders of the origins of their civilization every day
so true actually. i imagine it to be a very precarious balance, as any civilization not on the world it biologically evolved in would be
oh nice! reduce those inputs to just energy, without it needing to be processed into fragile organics first
oof, so this is what that inevitable foreseen decline looks like from the perspective of a common worker
very… interesting sartorial culture
ooh, very cool look at how the Ascended seem from the non-Ascended point of view!
nice, can def feel Wayne’s inner conflict here
references!
ah that is a great way to hide the truth!
interesting, since i’m the opposite! the stuff i do during the day is what could best distract me from reading awful stuff
ooh, someone from Earth?
hehe, nice
good point
looks like this connection is going farther than between planetary bodies!
hehe, “salt of the Moon”. and yeah, things are gonna get bad!
ooh! works a lot better than “CelestAI” as a name for sure. also very neat idea to gather the very Moonies that are on the fringes of its society for various reasons
great acronym. actually believable, too!
heh, nice callback.
well this was a fun jaunt in this world you’ve crafted, though the connection to MLP is very tenuous. thank you for writing!
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Yes, definitely a strenuous link. Halfway through writing, I forgot it was fanfic since I have been writing primarily original fiction lately. However, I am working on a huge rewrite to expand this story as an original novel, so seeing what aspects of its tones people liked is going to be important for me.
I think why this story has six dislikes on it is a considerable mystery.