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Jmaster49


Avid writer, watcher of anime, player of games, and chef in my spare time.

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This story is a sequel to A Dazzling Sleepover


The Human World is seen as the dumping grounds for Equestrian threats that are too much to handle. The biggest, most notable example of which was the Sirens who are now regular human girls trying to get by.

Thankfully, it wasn't that difficult.

After becoming more friendly with the other humans of this world, the Sirens are starting to comprehend strange new human traditions and values such as Thanksgiving and Christmas. However, as Equestria's magic starts to corrupt parts of the city, they have to weigh dealing with their own lives alongside defending against these threats.

Including anything else that just so happens to get left over from Equestrian conflict...

Landed on the Featured Tab on 3/7/2022 and 3/17/2022! Thanks everyone!

Chapters (162)
Comments ( 183 )

Great start, I can't wait to see where this goes!

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Thanks friend! Things are about to get crazy!

Interesting so far. This is an angle on the sirens post Rainbow rocks that I haven't seen so far. It seems like they have something akin to the rainbooms where they get some kind of ability due to their latent Equestrian magic. Possibly only manifesting now that they've accepted friendship and are developing interests. Looking forward to seeing how it goes.

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Well it's certainly something like that. You'll see how their powers develop when new problems arise. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks! Things are about to heat up soon! :pinkiehappy:

Interesting, super powered Dazzlings, I approve. If you haven't already read it, I did something similar in my series Sirens of the Night

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Thanks! I'll be sure to check that out sometime.

In the meantime, I hope you enjoy seeing the sisters kick butt!

The story starts good, but elemental control/generation? Kinda boring. I also can't see a conection bitween the sirens and their powers. Their former magic was about sound, manipulation and agression. Nothing really translates to water, wind and lightning. And they also don't fit their personalities in my opinion.
Plus, first time and already trying to combine their power? Either you keep it real and they screw up big, because they know nothing about their powers, or they already have perfect control about them what means their is no need for personal growth in this story.

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There's going to be an explanation for why they've acquired these abilities. I already have it thought out. As Sirens who cause storms and conflict, these powers represent the raging water of the sea, the violent winds that knock ships around, and the lightning that shocks anything caught out there. Major components of storms.

And don't worry. They aren't going to have full control over them right away and will need help mastering them. This is a low level demon, but they're going to face harder ones soon.

Stay tuned and find out more! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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I stay by my point that elmental powers are done to death by now.

โ€œThat couldโ€™ve been anything!โ€ Twilight protested as the Sirens giggled. โ€œYou donโ€™t need a spellbook to accidentally summon a goat monster from another dimension!โ€

That sounds oddly specific.

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It's happened more times than you might guess. ๐Ÿ˜‚

๐Ÿ‘, great job. I wonder what Blueblood will think of all this.

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That's exactly why Wendy was there. She's going to make sure her master gets all the info on Adagio. ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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You'll find out who he is soon enough. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Itโ€™s peculiar to think that a teacher has to ask permission to allow students out of their seat so long as theyโ€™re not wandering the halls

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She's always willing to make new teachers feel welcome!

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Given the crazy crap that has gone down at CHS in the past, Aidon wanted to cover himself.

Oooh, Sonata has buttons that Zeph has pushed. I'm hyped!

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He's gonna regret it if he tries messing with Dash again. That's for sure!

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Thanks! What's your opinion of the Professor so far?

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Well yes. But there will be an explanation as to who he is soon enough.

Remember when the sirens first arrived to Equestria? They came from "out of nowhere" too. ๐Ÿ˜‰

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The overanalytical part of my brain is trying to figure out where the demons are coming from, their names don't sound particularly Equestrian.

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Don't worry guys, these "demons" are all monsters and creatures from Equestria that have been banished to the human world. What exact creatures are they? Stay tuned. ๐Ÿ˜

I wonder how long it will take for Blueblood to realize that Wendy is using him.

The Human World is seen as the dumping grounds for Equestrian threats that are too much to handle. The biggest, most notable example of which was the Sirens who are now regular human girls trying to get by.

Really? I thought they only did that with the Sirens and the Memory Stone.

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In the canon? Yes. But this story is going to show off other individuals and artifacts that were banished here via my own original concepts.

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It goes both ways if you think about it. He's merely using her to get what he wants also. Neither of them realize it just yet though.

This story so far is a good introduction for the main characters. The insight of the dazzlings what their doing in their hobbies and little bit of their jobs is just perfect.

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Thanks! I hoped that this served as a great hook for the rest of the story!

It denefititly did and I will still read rest of your story.

โ€œWhat is she doing?! She needs to head to Master Blueboodโ€™s store! Ooh, she's going to get reprimanded for not following his rules! What could be more important than serving him?!โ€

In this case? I would say anything else.

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Yeah lol. Wendy is a major stickler for the rules.

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Now do you see what's going on? Alton was a shadow pony that was banished here.

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Seems like a convoluted way to reveal it. Some hints spread throughout the story would have helped.

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