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EagleOfDeath15


An open mind is like a fortress with its gate unbarred and unguarded

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Clavier Melody, protégé of Sapphire Shores, has a crush on Adagio. He's gradually developed this over the years ever since he's first met her at the start of Canterlot High. It's been four years, they're both a week away from graduation. Things will take a different turn for the both of them on one night that'll turn their lives around either for better or worse.


Reader's Note:


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Warnings:


The story has been given the label, Teen as the story may not be suitable for children.
The story has been given the label, Sex just in case due to suggestive content and innuendos which may be present.


Announcements:


Special thanks to:
DilEmmas4U for giving me permission to use her art as the cover image.


And to:
Requiem17 and LightningSword for helping me with proofreading and editing.


And finally, to the art contributors:


Xebck
Sonicfan1345
Fbksru521

Chapters (27)
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Comments ( 527 )

Well, I can see somewhat where this is going. I'll keep an eye out.

Comment posted by EagleOfDeath15 deleted Aug 17th, 2015

6326399 Thanks for reading! Hope you'll like the story as more chapters are added in. :pinkiesmile:

I looked at the image and...nnmy brriaonn= rbroeke ededdne mmm

toooooooo cute gbrnemwmmm..:applejackconfused:

6326484 I feel you. Sonata's just adorable hence my inspiration to write this story. Believe me, I got many ideas planned ahead haha. :rainbowlaugh:

This was beautiful...:pinkiegasp:

It's so beautiful I'm crying. :raritydespair: I am a very emotional person. Good job :twilightsmile:

6326580 Thank you! It means a lot to me that you've enjoyed reading it. :twilightsmile:

This was beyond words. You did a brilliant job, and I can't wait for the second chapter. :pinkiesad2:

Dang d00d. I don't usually drop a like on a story unless it's finished but this is a refreshing new idea and I'm excited to read the rest!

i feel like things moved more quickly then they shoud have

6331824 That may be so but rest assured, you'll probably see why. Possible sequel/prequel in the future or something else. That's all I can reveal.

she randomly extricated a cupcake from her puffy pink hair.

I feel like that will be a continuous thing.
Faust is god? LOVE IT!
Flash Sentry has character? Even better!
my predictions for story's future - Clavier didn't use protection and 9 months later Adagio gives birth to Aria (and Sonata if twins)
what are other people's personal thoughts of the Dazzlings? Mine is that they are all sisters but Adagio is the eldest and almost plays the role of a mother, Aria is the second born, punk, sister that's constantly being mean to her siblings but respects Adagio authority (most of the times. Finally is Sonata the youngest sister, fun and hyperactive, and with sisters like hers she is able to take most of their verbal assaults (as sisters do) but sometimes when things get to bad she will break down into tears.

really enjoying this. keep up the good work man

By the end I should say "BUSTED!!"

Funny chapter overall :rainbowlaugh:

6344508 Thank you and I'm glad you're enjoying reading the story. Means a lot! :twilightsmile:

6344626 Thank you. I always try to the best of my effort. :moustache:

that was great. I really like where this going. if I was Clavier I would have just jumped out the window. plus it wouldn't have been the first time I jumped out a window. also when you're a guy you have to learn to survive jumps like that because sometimes its either "close encounter of the grassy kind" or confront the family. me, i'd take the grass over that anyday

This was brilliant; well done!!! I was laughing the whole time. :twistnerd:

Wow. So many sappy feels at the start of a fic...
FINALLY, SOMEONE GETS IT RIGHT!!
I'm eager to see how long this ship can sail with all this dealt with so early on.

6344912 Welp, cat's out of the bag already. Thanks for the suggestion though. Much appreciated.

I have a strange feeling that Clavi's related to Octavia.

I figured that 'Dagi would be the most mature of the three in any universe featuring the Dazzlings. I also didn't expect Flutters to have a strong sense of smell.

6346839 Dagi can be when she needs to be. This'll likely be present further in the story. As for Flutters, she did fall face first onto the bed after all.

6345198 y...your name. It... it hurts my head...
:applejackconfused:

I'll admit, it felt kinda awkward with all the characters standing around in Adagio's room as long as they did. I want to say that I think Adagio would've had more control over the situation, as she is a very headstrong/leader type, and here are all of these girls snooping in her business. (so to speak) But your take on Adagio doesn't seem quite the same as what we've seen in Rainbow Rocks, at least to some degree. and considering this is an alternate universe, I'm not sure if any of the characters are getting an intentional personality change.

Regardless, I'm going to track this story and see how it unfolds, as it seems promising. :raritywink:

6363278 Thank you for your review.

Since it is set in an alternate timelime, there will be times when Adagio takes control only if on some circumstances e.g. Further suspicion.

Furthermore, her personality's more kind, caring and loving and takes charge only when she feels the need to, not always. This could change later, in the story as the story progresses deeper

Some characters such as the Main Six and Sunset will retain their personalities so that readers are more comfortable and familiar.

Thank you and I hoped you enjoyed reading the story so far. :twilightsmile:

6373097 The next chapter's not far off from completion but will require proofreading and editing before it's published. Hope you enjoyed the story so far. Please bear with me. :twilightsmile:

Flashback

i think you mean Bradback :trollestia:

Such an excellent love story. WHY AREN'T THERE MORE LIKE THIS!?

6374056 Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :twilightsmile:

6374009 next time plan on reviving me after killing me! :rainbowlaugh:

This was really good. Its nice and slow and works very well with its romance its doing.

6378503 Thank you. The flow is an important factor to consider. However, I can say that the wait won't be too long before the main events. :trixieshiftleft:

6378587 The flow is always important. Great story! Please keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

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