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mandy1412


Spanish girl trying her best to write in english.

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Sunset has a little accident involving her bike and the Dazzlings, some get hurt, some insults are thrown and someone threatens a lawsuit.

Comedy ensues.

Inspired by the incredible work of Justice3442.

Rated "Teen" and tagged with "Sex" because Adagio, and "Profanity" because Aria.

Artwork by Me.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

So far great story and great artwork!

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Thank you so much :raritystarry:. I'm glad you liked it. :heart:

Ooh, very interesting... I will be keeping an eye out for more. :raritywink:

Keep up the good work ya silly, and great artwork! :twilightsmile:

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Thank you so much as well :twilightblush:. Just trying my best here.
Hope to update soon :pinkiehappy:.

I know this will go off in a comedic manner...but I still kind of want to watch from a safe distance.

………………………………. (sets up a table) place your bets on how long till all the girls finally snap. :ajsmug:

They say a puppy could cheer up the blahs!

This looks pretty good.

“Please, like she could kill you even if she tried, remember the Spanish Inquisition? Not even a bunch of religious freaks could touch you.”

Aria smirked at this remembering better times “That’s because I expected them,

Nice Python reference, looks like a good start.

Reread this, it's still funny.

When I saw the artwork, I imagine my OC, driving a modern pickup truck and sees them stranded, I would say: "Hey girls, fancy a ride with the British Speedfreak?"

I recently came across this story and was hooked. The premise is interesting, I thought the characterization of the girls was good, the humor was funny and I was intrigued by the mystery of the accident. But now I see that it hasn't been updated in four years and now I'm downhearted.

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