You may know of my power, but you may never know my limits- ?????
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Adagio and the others accidentally knocked out Sunset Shimmer. Now they have to masquerade as her to avoid another rainbow blast.
Since they are the closest in hair color and Adagio is a sly fox, she must pretend to be Sunset on the free day of the Mane 6.
Meanwhile, Sonata and Aria are trying to revive Sunset as time goes on.
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Heh. This was funny and kind of cute, if a little bit rushed. Fear of getting Rainblasted really opens the door to shenanigans, doesn't it?
7292669 You bet.
Reminds me a bit of this comic.
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Funny story if a bit too short and rushed.
7293356 Adagio was holding a bat to fight with.
Couldn't be too careful in her case.
7293370 Ah ok, thanks
7293373 No problem.
7296484 Thank you.
The concept was good but the execution was a bit flawed, I recommend a proof reader, They do more than just point out grammar and spelling, a good one will help you to expand the story and make it flow more naturally. Keep going though, you have good ideas.
7301029 Thank you.
...Two problems with that statement, Adagio:
1. The rainbow beam wouldn't work without Twilight Sparkle, as far as you know. In actuality, it wouldn't activate without either the Element Bearer or Sunset (considering what happened when CHS and Crystal Prep clashed), but...you wouldn't know about any angelic transformations.
2. I'm certain that if you explained it was a complete accident, caused by you opening a locker door too quickly and hard, they would understand and not think it was deliberate assault.
Don't most schools have security cameras? Why isn't this incident caught on tape, to prove the Dazzlings are only guilty of forcefully opening one of their own lockers?
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I believe they accidentally K.Od her at their house, but there would be a camera somewhere to catch them. Then again, maybe they were lucky enough to only look like Sunset when she only left the house XD
Perhaps they were afraid the Rainbooms would only see them as nothing but trouble, which connected with other stories, isn’t impossible. They don’t quite know eachother as much XD
As for the 1st detail, in this story, Twilight comes to visit the Rainbooms on some weekends, so the chances of her being around for a friendly and fun day are pretty high.
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...Oh. I could've sworn I read 'locker', but...guess not.
Also, I posted that when I started reading this story, so...
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Lol
Yeah she's so be dead if she were awake now that the sirens know she gave them nicknames they dislike.
Yep and it's kinda obvious what she's about to do.
Well at least she didn't leave her naked.
Wait how did she do that just now?
And hope the girls will find out that adagio is Sunset.
Damn it sonata.
Yep, you can say that again.
Why is my gut telling me they dressed Sunset in adagio's clothes.
How are they not pissed off or upset at her after what just happened!?!?!??
Wonder who that was she decided to put to sleep?