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Mystical Rainboom

You may know of my power, but you may never know my limits- ?????


Adagio and the others accidentally knocked out Sunset Shimmer. Now they have to masquerade as her to avoid another rainbow blast.

Since they are the closest in hair color and Adagio is a sly fox, she must pretend to be Sunset on the free day of the Mane 6.

Meanwhile, Sonata and Aria are trying to revive Sunset as time goes on.

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Heh. This was funny and kind of cute, if a little bit rushed. Fear of getting Rainblasted really opens the door to shenanigans, doesn't it?

:rainbowlaugh: love it. Was a little confused at the ending part

But she had one thing to do...
She threw the bat in her arms into a closet.
"What was that?" Rainbow asked.
"Nothing." Adagio said.

7293356 Adagio was holding a bat to fight with.

Couldn't be too careful in her case.:derpytongue2:

The concept was good but the execution was a bit flawed, I recommend a proof reader, They do more than just point out grammar and spelling, a good one will help you to expand the story and make it flow more naturally. Keep going though, you have good ideas.

Adagio explained that if the others found out Sunset was attacked by the Dazzlings, they'd come after them and blast them.

...Two problems with that statement, Adagio:
1. The rainbow beam wouldn't work without Twilight Sparkle, as far as you know. In actuality, it wouldn't activate without either the Element Bearer or Sunset (considering what happened when CHS and Crystal Prep clashed), but...you wouldn't know about any angelic transformations.
2. I'm certain that if you explained it was a complete accident, caused by you opening a locker door too quickly and hard, they would understand and not think it was deliberate assault.

Don't most schools have security cameras? Why isn't this incident caught on tape, to prove the Dazzlings are only guilty of forcefully opening one of their own lockers?

I believe they accidentally K.Od her at their house, but there would be a camera somewhere to catch them. Then again, maybe they were lucky enough to only look like Sunset when she only left the house XD

Perhaps they were afraid the Rainbooms would only see them as nothing but trouble, which connected with other stories, isn’t impossible. They don’t quite know eachother as much XD

As for the 1st detail, in this story, Twilight comes to visit the Rainbooms on some weekends, so the chances of her being around for a friendly and fun day are pretty high.

...Oh. I could've sworn I read 'locker', but...guess not.
Also, I posted that when I started reading this story, so...

"It's no use!" Aria shouted.

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