We all know how the Dazzlings treated everyone, but what if they wanted to make up for their actions by making new friends? Let's see just how they try to do that at Vinyl Scratch's party. That is, if they survive the night...
(Profanity because of Aria's mouth. )
I really enjoyed this story a lot, especially the prank calls on Shining Armor and Button Mash, I do kinda wish we got to see what happened when Shining went over to Cadence's home though I've got a very good hunch what happened. xD
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That's why I left it up to the imagination. There's loads of ways it could've gone.
Glad you enjoyed it!
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Gotcha! So true about that.
You're very welcome.
A review for YOU.
This is such a fun story! The dazzling becoming somewhat neutral in the show could have led to something awesome like this!
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Right? Shame it never came to pass.
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Frankly, that is one of the great things about this site, you see/read things that didn't come to pass in the show! I really really loved this, Great☆Work!
This was hilarious, Adagio is my favorite siren; Aria is probably a second followed by Sonata.
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Thanks! Glad you found it funny! Aria is my number one lol.
Read because I noticed the sequel and it looked good, Glad I did, now back to what I was planning on doing.
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Thanks friend! Be sure to leave a comment on the sequel too!
I got to admit this story was something. The dazzlings learned about the people, also in the process they still are learning about friendship but they are kind of becoming better people that way and had new friends. The story in this is pretty good and so far the writing is great. One more thing to add to that is keep up with your best story telling.
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Thank you very much! I appreciate the feedback! I didn't like how the sisters didn't get a chance to redeem themselves in the series so that's why I wrote this.
Be sure to check out the sequel to this story and leave a comment there too! https://www.fimfiction.net/story/506354/family-begins-with-you
Pretty understandable and I completely agree that the dazzlings should get the chance to redeem themselves.
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I read the story and I'm a little curious about something; who is Flurry's dad? Because from what I got in the story Cadence and Shining are still just dating, unless I missed something very obvious.
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I aged Cadence and Shining a little.
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This is what a reformed Aria looks like: not evil but not above a good prank.
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Yeah I did my best to keep her tough side while softening her up a bit!
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Anyways good job and thanks for the follow.
great job on story
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Thanks a lot! Be sure to check out the sequel!
- MLP: FiM
- Equestria Girls
- Adventure
- Sci-Fi
- Slice of Life
The Sirens devote themselves to protecting Canterlot City and each other as they come to understand human holidays and traditions.11239411
I will when completed
Dang my guy a little too hard on flash don't you think and I always thought Aria would take a martial arts
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Don't worry--he gets much better treatment in this story's follow-up!
- MLP: FiM
- Equestria Girls
- Adventure
- Sci-Fi
- Slice of Life
The Sirens devote themselves to protecting Canterlot City and each other as they come to understand human holidays and traditions.And yes, Aria knows how to kick some ass if necessary.
Cool
Fun story. I can't find anything wrong with it! Well done.
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Thanks! Be sure to check out the sequel to it!
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/506354/family-begins-with-you
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It's next on my list!
I dunno how I feel about the story tbh I feel like they were WAY too forgiving to rainbow dash for making Aria think her sister's were gone or tombstoned in all honesty I probably would've dropped her as a friend but also I feel like it was good Aria finally showed her feelings Linda conflicted tbh