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DR-Fluffy


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Jun
13th
2018

My computer is fixed, and why I'm going to forget how to write. · 7:05pm June 13th

First off, sorry for the short chapter after such a long wait. I've been on a major procrastination binge, because the last part of the story is going to be a pain to write and I've been going out of my way to avoid writing it. That said, I've finally manged to scrape enough money together to get my computer fixed, and once I get it back I won't be doing anything but playing game for the next few mouths. So I wanted to get something out before than.

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Thanks for the follow, I really appreciate it!

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Good enough not to fast not to slow. Can't wait for the full one to finish.

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Thanks for taking the time, I forgot to add that chapter was only a rough draft so there was likely some grammar errors I missed, or entire sentences. :facehoof: Sometimes...all the time, when I type my fingers don't keep up with my mind so I end up repeating words and the sentence just become a mess.

In your option how was the pacing?

Overall the Story is good I give 9.5 out of 10 the drama and the mysterious factor builds inside the Story is good except for the typo need to fix other than that everything is good.


Typo error need to fix
permeation To permission
Exsalent. To Excellent
egger To eager
heir To hair
scncse To science


Sentence need to fix or rearrange

and her last link would Equestria would be gone forever To and her last link to Equestria would be gone forever

I have read your story on your latest blog here's my thought.

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