• T Iron Wing and the Demolition Crew

    The Crystal War, as seen through the eyes of its most formidable soldiers.  · KingMoriarty
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  • E Captains Crash

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    In the midst of the Hearth's Warming season, Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy are preparing a feast for their friends. But what happened to the hollandaise? Who erased it, and will everypony have to face it? (A little bit of Holiday fun.)  · WishyWish
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  • T Spring is Dumb

    Rainbow Dash definitely didn't do anything wrong. Rarity is the one who's wrong. Rainbow Dash is absolutely, totally, a hundred percent sure of it. But then why did she just buy a wagon load of apology bouquets?  · HoofBitingActionOverload
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  • T A Sunlit Journey

    After developing a new portal that can explore other dimensions, Twilight and Sunset are pulled into an adventure, where they meet even more doppelgängers of themselves. Together they have to save the day, and learn about each other in the process.  · Oroboro
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  • T Sunset Isn't Your Color

    Two years ago, Fluttershy spent a month as a teen fashion model. Her career was cut short by the bullying of Sunset Shimmer. When Fluttershy is offered an opportunity to rejoin the industry, Sunset sees a chance to make amends.  · Oroboro
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Ch-ch-ch-check it!

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#910 · 4d, 12h ago · · ·

Hi am sole sorrow i see you did a reveuw of mybstory can i pleaze ehere can I find It thank you and sorry i am using my step dads phone so maybe it doing autocorrect haha

#909 · 5d, 14h ago · 1 · ·

Thank you so much for reviewing and recommending my "Winter Wisdom!" It means a lot. :twilightsmile:

#908 · 2w, 3d ago · · ·

>>2414189 Great, that's perfect:pinkiehappy:

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I know PaulAsaran takes requests. I think MLPMatthew(numbers) does too.

#906 · 2w, 3d ago · · ·

>>2411140 By the way, I hope I get an "experienced review" on my short story about 1433-1464 words long called "Trixie and her wagon will make history!!" But I neither gotten commentary from any readers nor did I've ever gotten advice on how to do better the next time around. Can you point to someone who can read it or even read it yourself:twilightsmile: I like some criticism.

#905 · 3w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2411140 I'm immensely more proud of it and feel it's actually the better of my two fics:twilightsheepish:

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I'll throw it on the list. :) It sounds fun, at least!

#903 · 3w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2410918 I was wondering whether maybe you would read my other fic Eeyup

#902 · 3w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2410918 Mistakes happen:twilightsmile:

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