How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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dees ants be pansies. only got lucky tht the blimp was flamable.
Good stuff
I am almost disappointed these ants do not have the usually biology of having two functioning brains, one inside the head and the other in the body that keeps it going without the head until it dies from lack of food and water or whatever. But then that'd just make things even worse with headshots not working. Is an awesome chapter nonetheless.
This iteration read well, flow was good. I believe I followed the action and where everypony/birdy/ant was.
slid
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The first versions were baaaaad.
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Ants do not really have two brains. They do have neural clusters. But if you destroy the head, they can't fly and can't do much in the way of movement. Removing the head really is the best way to immobilise them, I did a lot of research into how predators deal with ants and the results were universal. Ant predators removed the head to stop the ant. All movements at that point are reflexive.
7160295 sadly, all the good generals where sacked, on the german side. Cept Rommel, the magnificent bastard.
This was great. Thanks Kudzu
I read this and think "Great! action! updates!" but then i remember you saying something a few months ago about how this big arc of the story would be ending "soon" with someone dying/a funeral, and i get worried for Ripple and Scootaloo.
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No, no, no... the story ends with a funeral.
And this arc ends soon.
Well, no sign of Ash Tanto yet so I'm fairly sure they're safe.
Even if he was something tells me Ash might be more afraid of Bucky than failing at his job.
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Oh alright, i suppose i misunderstood. I thought someone was going to die at the end of this arc, then there was supposed to be a 5 year time-skip.
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Chrysalis died.
This was really good
Actually, if Rumble don´t control the fires, and if the spiders don´t patch the gasbag, it won´t flow at all.
Good stuff, Kudzu - this is the best battle scene you've written yet, all your hard work really shines. Glad to see you making output again, I was gettin' askeered
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Second part should be up soonish. Needs editing.
The chapters must flow.
fire arts sound cool, but ultimately a typo.
I was going to say something about flying ants being a thing...
a filly should have more sense