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You have a failed close italics tag at "something I want"
Most of it is Italicized.
Whoa.
Let the celebratory gunfire commence!
Also... you kinda fucked this up completely, formatting-wise.
Hell yeah! Also, called it! Although I was expecting Dash to be there right at the start, but dragging her out works as well!
You seem to have missed a few key strokes that have italicized half of your chapter.
FINAL-FUCKIN-LY.
and the rest of the typos
his (unless Flash turned female)
spend
crushed
5266535 Daz right.
Wait... did you unintentionally address a common enough pet peeve of mine: the TwiDash Scootaloo adoption fic where Spike is treated... well like usual, at arm's length, not like another adopted family member? And you did it in reverse?
That's amazing.
oh boy here we go. a new world of madness awaits............. why is half the chapter italized here?
........... celestia is not gonna be happy, happy at all for soooo many reason...............
did the fates decide to talk to twilight because of what is gonna happen when they get back? perhaps celestia is gonna start losing it and they need someone else in the know how to stop her?
With "creature" here, the foreshadowing gets far, far more blatant.
The scootalove made this chapter 20% dawww-ier
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I was actually thinking of you and something you said, but I can't remember what you said, only that you said something.
My best piece of work ever.
5266579 O.O That comment didn't have anything all that accusing in it! Oh my god! I knew it! You aren't the grump you claim to be! Ha!!!
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A quiet war has begun. The Fates want their sisters back. Who better to do this than Celestia's student and Luna's protege?
5266710 makes sense. though it makes me wonder what is up with luna if she is not already. she has morethan once seemed to do things that would hamper bucky becoming a alicorn.
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Luna has her own reasons for being upset with the Fates.
Think about the most obvious one. The Fates KNOW the future.
Which means what in relation to an event that took place about one thousand years ago.
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yeah i generally hate divination (at least in the foretell the future sense) on principle of I like free will because most systems without it result in our actions ultimately being beyond our control and therefore meaningless.
on subject of the chapter,
hooray for surprise scootalove and unicorn cleverness to wrap Twilight's herd in the protection of both the Lunar Court and the Griffin Kingdoms. Building The Scorned Mare was such a great move, you're getting a lot of mileage (heheh) out of that airship.
5266787 ...... not sure what they could have done to stop that. making someone spout gobbly gook or an assassin target someone else is not the same as someone being driven to depression and anger and that darknes consuming them.
the fates cannot change people it seems. they have to change something in the environment and redirect others. but the more internal the issue the less power they actually seem to have over it.
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Luna still blames them for not warning her or stopping her. She's having a sisterly spat with them.
She's kinda peeved that they stood by and did nothing, allowing it to happen.
Sisterly spats aren't always logical or make sense, so keep that in mind.
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I'd imagine quite a few...
OH YES SCOOTADOPT :D
Well, remember what you wrote about the toilet........................................
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INTENTIONAL!
5266876 then again it was a sisterly spat that spiraled out of control in the first place that lead to nightmare moon..........
sighs. thatq is why i don't have such concepts in what i am working on. gets way too confusing.
I really wonder how Celestia is going to react as everyone is working against her and her so-called perfect plans that she doesn't share with anyone.
I just realized! We haven't seen a bisexual or pansexual male in this story yet, have we?
If we have I would appreciate a reminder.
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I saved that for The Catch.
Darn it, Bucky!
We will never have the image of Dash being chased by Ripple, AJ and a bunch of tiny griffons all across the Scorned Mare.
I wonder if fully grown Ripple could keep up with Dash.
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Ah, so they no longer exist.
(I never actually read the Catch.)
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Considering the sadistic tendencies the Fates are know for, it would likely be easier listing the number of mortals, and possibly other immortals, that don't hate their guts. But suggesting Luna would have a grudge against the Fates for knowing about Nightmare Moon and not doing anything?
You ever read The God Emperor of Dune by Frank Herbert? The rest of universe feared and hated Leto for knowing everything but his power taught him, ultimately, that clairvoyance was a b!@#$! It's one thing to know something is coming and quite another to be able to act on it. I would think being an immortal of dreams, cursed with unending insight in all her little ponies, and knowing she has to refrain from actively interfering with their lives would make her at least a bit more sympathetic to them in that regard.
If anything, I'd believe there would be more hostility for something they tried to do rather than something they knew and didn't mention. Because when they did act? Actions they took were typically cold-blooded, manipulative, and all their talk of the greater good usually hid that what they did was for their own agendas rather than caring about the welfare of others in general.
Case in point: the instance where they, or at least one of them, decided on redirecting a minotaur assassin against Bucky to prove a point rather than actually warning him of the danger with guns being indiscriminately released to the world at large. Stubborn though he may be, he's smart enough to recognize liabilities when they're pointed out.
I wouldn't be that trusting of them just because they had a shared interest in keeping creation going. If anything, I'd be just as suspicious of them, if not more so, than the creator in this universe.
Basically, deal with all of them like the Fey. Avoid if possible and if not? Do not trust them.
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Just because none are named in the Chase that doesn't mean they don't exist.
What we see is just the dawn of the new era of herds.
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Sorry, I was trying to make terrible joke.
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I keep saying it, the Fates are bitches.
They are a lot like Celestia in a sense. They see beyond the individual and go for the long term goal. Both have different means on how to go about doing it, and both have different end goals.
So much happiness in this.
My exams are later, and I've been feeling like shit due to the pressure.
This makes me feel so much better.
Scoots just gave a 20% bonus happiness.
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Preaching to the choir on that one
5266787 Sounds to me like the fates can only see different possible futures, like the Clayr in the Old Kingdom series. It's up to them to figure out which is the most likely.
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They see a future they like and then try to make it happen. Nopony has ever won a battle against the Fates, which is part of the reason why Celestia hates them. They cheat.
5267361 that i do not understand. if they narrowed their vision wouldn't they become blinded to other futures, including ones that would interfere?
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Bah, they don't cheat. They're just being clever.
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I wonder where their visions of the future come from. They are creations of the Omnicorn after all, what if their father makes fun of them all along?
I mean, the future they try to alter becomes true, well, not exactly as asumed, but the elements are there.
5267361 Unless you want to make someone walk in the footsteps of Kratos.
This chapter was tagged (the weeping wedding) before reading I had a dreadful feeling this would be a Chase-verse version of the red wedding in game of Thrones and rainbow dash and flash would probably die from dome random insurgency attack and then twilight would get depressed and then bon bon, lyra, or belisama would like get shot or something. However now I am totally relieved that this was an emotional chapter rather than a dark chapter
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No.
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They each have a portion of their parent's magic.
When working together, but only together, they have the ability to manipulate reality in a very generalised sense. They peer ahead and see all possible outcomes to situation and all of the various factors it takes to reach that outcome.
They then begin to make those factors happen to force that outcome to happen.
Their magic does not work though if they do not have a consensus between the three of them, so it all has to be something that all three agree upon.
Why am I not surprised Applejack dragged Rainbow to her wedding? It's so appropriate!
Well, time to get some sleep...
*sees that kudzu is online*
...aaaaaaaaand I´ll sleep when I´m dead. F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5...
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