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Monster Hunter Pony Version for Ps4
As a reader, I'd say that it worked well. The immediacy of what was going on with Ripple was excellent at driving this chapter. This is what I was talking about in my comment on your experimental blog post. This is giving the depth of the character, letting us ride almost in Ripple's head. It's a nice departure from a snippet here, a snippet there. Both writing styles (your usual and this) have their pluses and minuses. Your usual is great for pulling the story along over longer time frames, where we need to be bouncing from POV to POV. This one is great for that single character focus.
M... Don't have any particular problems with the writing. Good chapter... We had slain the Dragon
I liked it, a very fast paced action chapter. Now I'm dizzy from reading faster and faster with each paragraph.
Keep experimenting, it's very interesting.
Caught a typo, sir! *salutes*
Double space.
too
concrete
Oh, so the raptors are winging it?
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**snerk**
5497136 Did you not think of that?
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I did, I didn't write it though because I was actually being a smidge serious when writing this chapter for once.
5497154 What's the fun in being serious? I'm writing a fic where the EQG Six play GMod Prop Hunt because I felt like having a laugh. Tomorrow, Lucky424 and I will make another fic where they play Mount Your Friends. All fun, zero seriousness.
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Oh, I write very silly silly silly things.
Like the Cake-Pie gangbang.
5497115 On a wing and a prayer at that.
5497168 Which I say is another opportunity for fun, like Twist hearing that drawer being stuck and goes to help bang it out, only to see Pinkie and Cheese or The Cakes rutting on the countertop.
5497178 Better than being on a cross and arrow.
Oh, so it's the monstrous nightmare kind of wyvern.
Tenses again. Either "ing" those "ed"'s or make it another sentence.
Ripple is so cool!
You built a nest in the wrong neeeeeigh-borhood, bitch.
XD I imagined Ripple saying it just like that in like... kim possible's voice or something. Had me laughing for a while.
*grave
Also i feel this new writing style near perfect for scenes like this.
Honestly... I can't see the difference.
Now, and more importantly... what happened to the male wyvern?
Writing seems brilliant as ever to me.
"I dunno yet... I am not honestly not sure how I feel about this... so I guess the jury is out. Input?"
Not honestly not sure?
Does that mean you're sure about the writing style?
Is there a difference? I only see 1. Good writing, bad story 2. Bad writing, good story 3. Good writing, good story 4. Bad writing, bad story 5. Brilliant
Style doesn't really catch my eye.
As for my scale this story has hit every single one but #4
My Little Monster Hunter when?
In every Godzilla vs [KAIJUU] film, there comes a point where actively inviting Godzilla into Tokyo to deal with the other Kaijuu is the better option than not inviting Godzilla into Tokyo, as things can't possibly get any worse.
Requesting that Loki do something crazy is like inviting Godzilla in.
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The "godzilla threshold" if you wanna look it up on tv tropes