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The Phoenix and the Windigo eh?, will Twilight rise from the ashes ? and will bucky will be gone once Unity is archieved? hmmm
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That is the subtle implication of Bucky's lifespan... yes.
In the immortal words of Saint Tereza: FUCK !
5483918 Bucky will probably do like Platinum, using paitings on the future? mmm? *Foreshadowing Intensified*
lol code names, i like bucky's
Spike's gonna play the horn!
Unless my eyes lied to me (or something else about magic of music or just... making the tale apocryphal) he knows how to play the piano...
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Yes he does. He has those marvelous fingers.
Also useful for the trumpet.
So, is this new model reliable at all, or does it get choked and clogged if not properly maintained? Are we talking a PPSH or a Kalashnikov here? Or is the rate of fire lower than either of those?
I assume the new weapons are gatling/machine guns rather than a blunderbuss/shotgun. Looks like Daddy alicorn is playing silly buggers even more, trying to get Bucky to 'do his job'. I bet this is going to piss off Keg Smasher as well. Bucky just needs to drop the New Year's Foal spell jar on this group of idiots. They want to play with new weapons... then they get to be kids.
FOREVER!
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I'm willing to bet they're more along the lines of the gatling or the Browning rather than a Kalashnikov. Remember that the rifles and pistols they've seen/have been using are more similar to the weapons of the late 18th through the 19th centuries. Well, at least as I remember the descriptions, at any rate....
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The new gun design was a lever action rifle with cartridges. Improved gunpowder...
These... well, you will see what these are.
5483995 I was just giving a general analogue for reliability. The PPSH was a generally unreliable gun prone to jamming and even stripping the bolts that held its magazine in place, while everyone know the AK as being extremely reliable and sturdy.
I was just asking if these guns were at all viable on a large scale rather than in desperation.
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Ah, misunderstood the intent. Sorry about that.
it is weird to be honest. you've made guns such a major part and threat in your story.
in mine it is completely opposite. guns are not effective at all, least in terms of actually killing the target. mainly cause i took the slapstick of the hsow into account and worked in an idea with magic. put simply wherever magic flows, which is pretty much everywhere in a pony, that is a spot that is tougher than you would think and magic will in general act as life support and try to repair. basically magic redirecting from its normal function to sustain its 'host' if you will. and has other stranger effects.
put simply bullets wounds are less life threatening, if sitll very serious, when you have an eldritch force that hijacks your biological systems to keep you alive.
5484003 We're all fuck-ups and we all fuck up every now and then, hermano; no need to apologize.
War were declared....again.
A bit closer to home.
Did not take long to introduce the machine gun, eh? The assassin's were no doubt confident their attack would ensure a retaliation by Bucky.
I suspect a trap to lure alicorns and powerful unicorns out. Lessons learned from Griffonholme?
Hmmm...me thinks the Mirror Travelers are trying to start a fight on ground they have prepared.
Or it could be a pizza delivery gone horribly wrong.
Dear Luna. Either they've invented the Blunderbuss or they invented the shotgun.
More likely the shotgun. Why? Less time to reload. The blunderbuss took a while to reload, but still less time than a rifle.
code names = check
improved guns = check
assassinations = check
new SBI = check
new OC's = check
a lot in one chapter
5484047 No, I imagined someone invented a semi or fully automatic weapon. Either magically powered or possibly gas. :/a
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Yeah, not at all...actually, it was unnaturally fast to reach that level of development....
Very suspicious.
My chase-sense is tingling...something is telling me there are major powers behind this war powering up conflict...and I´m not compltly sure if it is "only" Galaxycorn.
Spike should learn the saxophone.
I think saxophone is the best instrument ever.
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Well, the gas is out. The weapon sprayed bullets.
So it's either a fully auto weapon, maybe a crank gun, or a shotgun type weapon, again blunderbuss.
Honestly, it probably is the full auto weapon.
5484136 Oh no, I meant, gas powered system.
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Well, if it is, then it's not natural progression.
That would mean someone else is influencing the advancement, as natural progression would have taken a while to reach a gas powered system.
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Hello Rage Reviewer! How ya doing! If you want a good story, might I recommend something else in the rage review folder? Perhaps something you will be less biased towards? Oh wait... that's not possible... never mind, sorry.
I'm sure there is something else out there that you might be interested in rather than starting trouble here. Thanks.
Wait, Shire Isles? Who the fuck are those? Seriously, did anyone important die or is this just an emergency about the guns?
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Shire Isles. The location of several places. Like Trottingham.
5484201 I took a look at this without that in mind, and that's what I got. Wasn't trying to start any trouble, just giving my blunt opinion about this.
5484214 So no, no one the story currently cares about has died. Good.
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And I very politely suggested that you keep looking. You clearly don't like the story, that is fine, you have stated your opinion, the charade needs to go no further. There is nothing to be gained by wasting your time here.
I am very happy that you read three chapters. Thank you very much for reading those and spending some of your meaningful time here. This clearly isn't your cup of tea, and that's fine. I really don't know what your cup of tea is, so I really cannot make any worthwhile recommendations or offer suggestions to help you.
5484216 Hello, you don't know me, but it doesn't matter. I for one think your opinion is bullshit. You have nothing worth arguing and are simply explaining your own pet peeves as if they matter. You aren't worth getting angry over, but know as my own very personal opinion, I think your opinions are garbage. In order to keep from being a hypocrite I expect you to take my blunt criticism and turn the other cheek.
That or you can prove yourself wrong and respond. Please, I want you to. Prove me right and make my mother fucking day. XD
Some people, I swear.
5484229 Ooooooh, right, the peaceful approach. God, sometimes I hate how passive you are. -.-
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No harm in being nice.
5484231 the story gives no hints that the Pegasi are to be hailed like they are throughout the story. The first few chapters are just some biological stuff. Also there's so much that could be replaced for an actual story to happen, instead of just getting every single character's viewpoint on an event, which IMO feels like a lot of padding.
5484244 I know, I know, I refuse to fault you for it, just... god, what's your personality type? I can't make heads or tails of it. INTP myself.
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Hmm... nope. The biological stuff doesn't happen until a few more chapters in. The first two chapters are mostly dialogue with a little action.
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INTJ.
5484245 It's a world building epic! What in the world do you expect? Details have to be put in to build a world! However he goes about doing that is neither wrong or right! Quit stating your opinion as if it's a fact. SMH
5484261 My internet is a little faulty as of late so I can't look into detail about that, but I know from studies that J is judgement. Wish I still owned the library book I got these from. :/
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INTJ. The Mastermind.
INTP. The Architect.
5484275 Raises his brow Mastermind eh? Some how that makes talking with you a little scary. XD
Also, Architect is dead on...... I freaking love design. Childhood toy? Mother fucking legos!
5484265 I feel that he's giving out too much information sometimes that drags on way too much. Just a sentence or two could cover a lot.
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Actually, the primary complaint about the first two chapters is that they are too terse, too brief, and do not give enough information, Everything feels rushed and kinda skimpy. And I would agree. If I wrote them again, there is a lot I'd do differently.
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5484284 Yes, it could, but it's a different take. A deeper detailed experience that, as stated by the author himself, is fairly flawed. But, never the less it's still worth the read in the eyes of the people who enjoy that kind of style. You were warned coming into this story, the first few words in the god damn description tell you there is a chance you won't like it! What. The. Fuck. did you expect?
5484294 though with the first two chapters, nothing gets done except for the chase. Really they could be summed up in a few short sentences, and you said yourself that around chapter three was when the actual story needed to get underway.
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Now now. Best just to explain what he did wrong and send him on his way. If he turns into a raging asshole like the others, THEN you go for the throat. Until then, let's try to be polite?
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And in the first three chapters, there is none of the complex biology. That comes later. Sorry, but you are wrong. I don't think you've read them at all... I think you are relying on what you've read elsewhere.
So please, just stop wasting time and move on.
First two chapters, The Chase. Chapter three, the Cheerilee perspective introduction.
Sorry. That's it.
5484310 from chapter one
5484300 I get a little excited in my arguments. :) I don't go for the throat, I like to drag out the conversation so I can have time to think of new creative ways to insult a jerks intelligence. It's fun and makes the argument interesting. Is it a petty and pathetic kind of excuse to be awful and attempt to feel superior? Why, of course it is, that's why I do it.