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Many major edits have taken place. I don't know what happened.
Some of them were me, some just came out garbled.
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Hmm... Celestia and her 'Ponyville Project'... Granny Smith must be in on it, as she was there when the town was founded. And I was wondering when/if the CMC were going to be brought into this little 'experiment' of hers.
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Granny Smith knows nothing about it.
Celestia co-opted a nice fresh city and began to lay down the foundations.
Judas Priest, you're updating faster than the cyclic rate! Love the story, but just make sure not to burn yourself out with all the updates.
what exactly is the crusader experiment? or will that be explained later?
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Watching the Crusaders. Waiting for something to happen.
The last time the three tribes came together in intense friendship, Hearthfire happened.
Not much has happened since. And Celestia wants something to happen. Anything really, that will affirm her personal beliefs.
What? What do you mean they are not going home to shag? You make them go home and do that right now, mister and/or missus!
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Bucky totally does not want anypony knowing that he is a virgin
And things are going to be painfully awkward when they move in that direction.
Don't worry, Berry Punch has a solution.
4339595 Interesting.
Love the story lad/lass. Bloody brilliant work. The updates pour in like clockwork. Just promise us you won't burn yourself out. XD
Wild! Down the road I wonder how Bucky's jerk-face parents will take all that plus Clan Pickled. Mwahaha!
Did gun b good. Oh wait, it already is awesome!
4339595 The apocolypse! This is the crusaders after all.
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That is probably the worst kept secret in the story. They both stronger than him. It's not like he can stop it. He is theirs now.
I always knew Thunderlane was going out with both sisters. I am sure Rumble is fine with it.
4339498 Okay, just wondering, how long after was this from Nightmare Moon? Especially because Luna substitute taught Bucky and I'm somewhat sure that Bucky graduated more than a while ago
I can't brain right now somebody halp me
It's one thing to read that Ponyville is basically an sociological testing bed. It's quite another to see one of the senior researchers report to the project head. I know it's all for the best, but there's still a lingering sense of creepiness about the whole scene.
Still you addressed the question of why Luna keeps entering the Crusaders' dreams, which was quite nice.
The rest of the chapter was a nice palette cleanser. Ponies in love being silly with one another, not knowing of the machinations surrounding their lives. Really, those lives are going to be complicated enough without the schemes of princesses.
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Ah, I see. But the flame was only lit because the three needed to defend themselves. You can pile a bunch of logs together and soak them in gasoline, but that alone won't ignite them. Celestia is either neglecting one of the factors that led to the original result, or she's refusing to accept the risk that that factor entails. Or, you know, I'm wrong. That's definitely a possibility.
In any case, looking forward to more.
I had seen this on the featured list originally but had skipped it because of the word snoot. Ended up reading it two days ago and I was impressed. The ship is believable as well as very enjoyable. The awkwardness and misunderstandings push all my buttons in the right ways. The best part about this story is the world building you're doing. I love the interpretation you have of the different tribes' interactions. It's what hooked me in and hasn't failed to deliver yet.
Thanks for the interesting story. Keep up the awesome (and speedy) work.
This is turning very let's say clope:twilightblush
I somehow wait for the moment, when Bucky maybe ask them what perfume they are waering.
I like it and i like it, that Bucky take his little Revenge here, i want to see more Unicorn treatments like this
I want him to do something, what made them speakless for a moment, something, what let Berry know, even he could be a little bit shifty in this kind of things
4339672 I second this!
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In a sense, yes.
My left leg was internally severed. Only the skin was left holding it on.
Fixing it went poorly, I have to use a prosthetic that binds my whole leg below the knee into an unmoving lump. I still have my foot, but I have phantom pains below it. Feels like somebody is holding my foot over a fire and cooking it. And I cannot pull away.
And then there are days when my leg decides to play the accident over and over on a loop, the nerves broadcasting the breaking, ripping , and shattering pain over and over again, every few seconds or so, telegraphing that something is horribly wrong with my leg.
I hate it.
Writing is a good distraction. The pain is still there, but I can focus my mind away from it.
I started reading this story late last night and just had to finish it in one sitting. I am thoroughly enjoying how you've given each tribe their own cultural identities, and the fact that somewhat bestial instincts play a large role in their societies, for better or worse. Though I will say that I agree with some of the past reviewers remarks that unicorns at large seem to be culturally inferior to the other two- which I get is the idea, and it looks like an issue that is very gradually being resolved through Celestia's benign manipulations in Ponyville. I gotta say, I'm intrigued by the "Crusader Project" and hope you might expand on it a bit in the future, instead of having it be a one-off reference.
Something I really want some closure on though is Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. I get that they are pretty cruel due to their poor upbringing, but they are still children and they were pretty severely injured- even if the incident was instigated by them. I'd really like to some resolution for them both, but so far the closest we've come to that is Filthy Rich coming to some very damning conclusions about his mistakes in raising DT, and nothing related to Silver at all. Anyway, this was my first review and it's pretty much in regards to the whole fic, not just the last chapter in case that wasn't obvious. I hope to see more updates soon!
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Closure is coming for the schoolyard incident.
The Crusader Project will be a fixed background theme. It is central to the story.
Only some unicorns lag behind others. Rising Star and family are well adjusted and decent folk, and more scenes with them are coming, I promise. I will tease a little and say that they are all some of the most down to earth sorts to be found, good ponies, and all of them type twos or thereabouts.
There is a scene coming where the neurosis, repression, and the general way of life for type threes and higher is going to be demonstrated in horrifying detail.
Filthy Rich will have more time, but these are all fading into background elements. They were there to set the stage and to introduce the major players and the supporting cast. And now that the major players are firmly established, most (though not all) of the supporting cast has been brought into play, it is time to move the story forward slowly and carefully, leaving behind a lot of carefully hidden clues and more misdirection on my part, so things can be revealed or explained later.
And thanks for the Derpy Seal of Approval. That made me smile!
Wait what? They're going to slowly build a relationship like reasonable adults?
What bullshit is this? I learned from Disney that only need like three days before you're ready for happily ever after.
Do you even fiction sir?!
But seriously , nice chapter, I like Celestia's plans. They are really benign but the code names and 'operations' make them sound like some real black-op s**t. Not sure if done tongue in cheek or not though.
Onwards!
Your Celestia is creeping me out so much... good intentions are one thing, but I wouldn't want to live under her.
Hmm, what are you up to Celestia?
I like this but at the same time i dont i am confussed
Heh... fusion is unicorn bravery... I've had thoughts about that before. Including a very easy freezing spell: Create matter with energy output by your horn. That matter will have very little energy, thus being very cold. Immediately the air around it will also become very cold, to the point where it could freeze the oxygen in the air, at least for a little while. Positively lethal, and very little energy expenditure.
Oh, Celestia is religious.
Fuck, the world is doomed once she finds somebody that doesn't agree with her in a seat of power.
Twilight Sparkle sat looking a the plaster casts
Twilight’s eyes went wide and became focuses
Are you brave Mister Bitters
moved her hoof up to the webbing of his inner thigh, were it connected with his torso
and was old enough to understand what they where
1. At.
2. Focused.
3. Wait... Bitters or Biters? I forgot.
4. Where.
5. Were.
Nope, never made plaster casts before, never knew about them until I had my leg in one because honestly, my school never practiced this sort of thing, just regular water colour and crayon arts
I'm just here to comment!
And also you misspelled this parts
I dunno
I dunno
Idunno.
I'm stewpead.
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Skyrim reference?
The fan art for this worries me.
4341874 Whoa... I know this is an old comment, but fuck dude, ouch! D:
The worst injury I ever had was almost getting an artery? I think, in my arm near the elbow, severed by a hook.
That was fun... I also fell on my face and nearly broke my nose.
no stitches Dx I was too late and it had to heal naturally, now I have a fug ugly scar on my arm.
Awesome work on this chapter dude, hehehe, it was great!
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It's official then. Busting your leg improves writing.
My 2nd place record for writing was when I did a number on my leg. I managed to get to my computer and prop it up, then didn't want to move so I stayed up most of the night writing to keep my mind off the pain, and taking advantage of the hollow plastic stool in my room so I wouldn't need to take a 15 step trip to the toilet.
I was better in a week or two though. You made this post over a year ago... are you any better?
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So in over a thousand years, there hasn't been a single other close friendship uniting all three tribes?
I'm just going to point this out:
Bucky and Derpy have known each other less than a week.
Bucky and Berry have known each other a grand total of three days.
Berry and Derpy have been friends for a years, but Berry only decided she was attracted to Derpy three days ago.
Yet they are basically all discussing a polygamous marriage, and Celestia, seeing them once, is considering legalizing 'herds'?
...... I get the concept from what i read, but i just got a ruler to the arm.
I made handprints in concrete at my grandpa's farm it's still there and it is dwarfed by my hand now.
4384056 With a name like Loki, I find that rather amusing.
If you really think about it, Celestia is more of a Benevolent Dictator of sorts. Her word is Law. She is practically worshipped as a Goddess.
Personally I'd rather have an Eternal Benevolent Dictator like Celestia, than live with so many flawed Presidents as we have now in the USA. Hell even in other countries, you never know who could end up helping to rule you in the Future, and what grave mistakes could happen, or mistakes left unfixed. At least with Celestia you know you have someone who is genuinely working towards your people's best interests at hearts, and has the power to actually DO something about it.
*looks at 931st chapter button* ya don't say?
And that my friends is when a child was planted.