How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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I started to read this story an hour ago, and I literally just finished reading chapter 19, and then you posted this
Following you by the way
Can someone pass the ketchup, as I seemed to have missed the sauce.
Glad to see that Berry is approaching this slowly and logical, and can't wait to see the morning after!
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I've had people complain about things far less saucier than this, so I've taken to being cautious so it doesn't cause a rash of downvotes from the equine anti-marina league.
And yeah, seems to fit in with earth ponies. Being slow and cautious.
Except for Pinkie Pie.
I still feel like a unicorn, but i don´t mean that i don´t like the other tribes anymore. You just descirbe some things like i would probably react, and i would mostly react a a Unicorn i think. I am just to stubborn in some manner things, personally i would have the same problems as Bucky, would i be in his place if Berry farted in front of everyone (for example).
Ah i like your story, because it keep me thinking and i think you have well considered this things about the ponies.
PS: I think it is nothing wrong with this chapter, i mean because you mention something.
Ah, open communication. It's so dreadfully easy for people to stop talking, and that's where all the heartache begins. Berry Punch is clearly well-versed in romantic comedies, as she's short-circuiting everything that could go wrong before it does.
Seeing just how powerful Bucky is continues to come as a shock. I came into the story expecting just another schlub, and I couldn't have been more wrong.
I look forward to more, especially further background on the history of herds.
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Herd history will mostly come from Berry Punch.
Bucky is a great example of the point I am trying to drive home. Repression isn't just about emotion, but magic a well. It must ALL be held back. Hence the need to drive it into a creative outlet to prevent destruction. Dinky has the potential to be this powerful as well.
It gives the disturbing notion that there are lurking members of society that could potentially explode when pushed over the edge.
Which is why ponies try to be on their best behaviour.
Hardly saucy at all, not that it's a bad thing; I'd prefer to sink my teeth into something juicier than usual when I see a sauce warning.
Still, this meal was quite succulent, even without added basting.
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Sauce is like porn.
Isn't always definable, but you know it when you see it. I had to be cautious due to some recent issues.
How long will the "Teen" label hold? You could always write a spinoff with the clop in it if you want, sorta like how Dash of Humanity did. Also:
Pop a hyphen in there and you're ready to go. I wonder if I should try proofreading...
4338070 I enjoy seeing more of the herd history, also I am guessing the higher the tier the more alarming it is to find a way to vent the magic as to not overload? Or all of them as potentially dangerous at the same level of severity.
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Argh! There was a hyphen the original document!
Thanks for the psychology lesson professor!
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we did just pin him down and violate his sensibilities quiet thoroughly
I’ve walked off from the place and rent a house in town
With time you will be able too
1. Quite.
2. Rented.
3. To.
Hmm... Just the right kind of consistency for sauce. Not too thick and not too diluted... I love this sauce!
Wow, I'm even more socially hopeless than I thought.
Ch 9
Bucky turned to speak the pony addressing him, seeing a salesfilly, who couldn’t be much older than Sparkler.
speak with the pony
Ch 10
He closed his eyes and tried to forcibly squash down these annoying and distracting emotions, determined to not them bother him, not today.
not let them
Ch 12
Bucky had been certainly been stony enough to allow pigeons to roost.
had certainly been
Sparker really wanted to emulate her mother.
Sparkler
Ch 16
reaching out and touching he popcorn kernel with an invisible touch.
touching the popcorn Maybe change the second touch to force? He clarifies the meaning in the next sentence so it still works.
Ch 17
What she did not know what that Rising Star’s words about wanting to get to know what was behind her horn and between her ears had resonated deep within her psyche,
know was that
Ch 18
Dinky concentrated, her horn glowing with faint purple light, the tip of her tongue sticking out from between her pursed lips as the concentrated on moving the crayon inside of the picture she was trying to colour.
as she concentrated
Ch 19
“Derpy really need that, thanks for making it easy for her,” Berry said, smiling.
really needed that,
I've said it a couple times but I really do love this story!
When I first saw this I thought it would be quantity over quality but I'm happy to see that's not the case.
From here on I'm going to mail you edits every 50 chapters or so, instead of flooding the chat with edit stuff.
Oooooohwheeeee... dat bath scene dough... hnnnnnnnnng.
Awesome job again dude!
5076989 You made me giggle like a retard xD hahahaha.
Nice,
I have a better way. It involves alligators!
I may be reading into this wrong, but in case i'm not; that always makes them sound and smell much worse. I'v no idea why this is.
KINK! By Tartarus, I feel like the lightning bolt on RD's rump!
This story is going to get deeper and more serious the further it goes on, isn't it?
6773012 I know I probably don't want to know... and yet, due to morbid curiosity, I can't help but ask: what's your way?
I've noticed. This is fic is a veritable buffet for thought.
Edit: It has also, incidentally, seeded a passing interest in psychology.
I would call it pre-clop. It's hot enough to get you worked up, but nowhere near enough to get you off.
7688513 Psychology has a lot of interesting things to say.
Like Psychology says that people with great Intuition are using their Fast Processing, their subconscious to compile things like body language and previous experiences. So while I couldn't tell you WHY a picture of a Clown in my Psych Textbook had my Intuition screaming, "Danger! Danger will Robinson! Danger!", it turned out that clown who volunteered at children's hospitals was a SERIAL KILLER.
Psychology also says that a large amount of Pedophiles, were those who were sexually abused themselves.
For women, it's good to wear red, because studies show that spicey bit of danger, adds a lot to being alluring to men. It's one of the reasons why red lipstick is still a classic, because it WORKS.
If you're ever interested in some fun Psychology, I'd suggest checking out Psychology Today, as it's written for Non-Professionals and thus uses common language, instead of crazy technical stuff. You can find it at many colleges and even your local library.