How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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The parents can sympathize, the rest get to find out what they can look forward to.
Remember: if you don't report typos, the errorists win.
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The puns! Why do the puns hurt so much‽
You have not seen an indignant look until you see the look that a cat can make after a direct hit
from your temporarily undiapered son..
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No pain, no gain... or so they say.
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*snerk*
Kudzu... You write the strangest things sometimes...
I have to wonder if the story will progress long enough to see Cadence grow up.
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I am really sorry I was not fluent in cat at the time. I'm sure my vocabulary would have increased tremendously.
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Taking the trial wouldn't bring Shining Armor back... unless he was an alicorn and he did something extraordinary in connection to what he embodies.
I tend to somewhat dislike Shining in most stories, but now I just feel bad for him.
5402821 With how fast Twilight is growing? I wouldn't be at all surprised.
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Twilight grew due to extreme magical use.
She is not constantly growing... just during the train arc and the griffon arc.
She is now Princess Luna sized.
Bucky still has a longer horn though, which frustrates her.
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Horn envy. Now she just needs to get an ungodly expensive sports chariot to compensate.
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I can't help but notice that The Scorned Mare is only about fifty feet long. I just had this new naval destroyer commissioned for me... it's a full one hundred and fifty feet in length.
Bucky: My horn is still longer.
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It's not the length of the horn, it's how much magic you get out of it! Wait....
5402859 Doesn't vaporizing a giant dragon with a big bang attack count as "extreme magic use"?
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Yes... but in this case, it completely obliterated her body.
Cadance accidentally herself and the dragon. (sic)
Im crying... Oh shit... I'm laughing my ass of... Sweet Celestia kudz... You know how to write grim dark and epic comedy. I can stop laughing
5402765 join now to the Kudz anti typo special forces... So errorists will never win
Damn, nice turn-around from 406. This is why I love the Chase- Kudz is constantly exhibiting his full range of story-telling styles, working with wonderful descriptions, dialogue use, and vocab
And that is where she learned to make those explosion noises.
Kudzu, I am very disappointed in you! You missed a perfect chance to make things grosser and have Lyra yell "The goggles, they do nothing!"
.......... i really have no idea how to react so far. maybe too much has happened to fast or i am just completely confused on how all of this unfolded. and i am still not following how things lead cadance blowing herself, and her own foals, up to kill a dragon that somehow got past the crystal heart because an evil god told him to be evil and kill everything. and now equestria is down a power house. and i do not remember what happened to the crystal heart in all of this mess. yet no one seems to be taking into account the mirro walkers are still a threat with mostly unknown faculties, and now they are down an active defender.
something just feels off about all of this. like there is some major piece missing or even a bit of information just does not add up at all, yet i am not sure which one anymore.
just when i thought iwas catching up i find myself completely confused over what the hell is happening anymore.
Buccky to Sombra "So how exactly do you do that shove a city in a hole in time spell?"
Sombra "Why?"
Buccky "I need to shrink it down to about the size of a pony and about 15 years"
Sombra "ah saving shining for cadence I see"
Aww.... wow, Shining Armor... you didn't even see it coming. Suddenly left behind by the force of immortality... That's heart tugging.
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Please cite canon source where it explicitly states that the crystal heart blocks all incoming dragon attacks, or even suggests it is capable of such a thing.
Please? Pretty please? Surely you have something to go on with the way you keep going on about this endlessly.
I had to do my sisters diapers once...
Now when I see vomit or poop, all I see is processed food, nothing to be disgusted about.
It was a little horrible...
5403108 I'm not entirely sure lordofmyth is in our type of reality, I'm afraid. That, or he's utterly convinced of his own head-canon and is unwilling to see another. Ever.
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Ever.
On a lighter note, and more relevant, I have mixed feelings on this chapter. (1. Gods, poor Bucky's familes, foal poo. (2. Sweet gods, poor Shining Armor. Someone give that stallion a hug, NOW.
5403108 i would if i ever could find a video just showing sombra blasted to death by the heart. what other conclusion could there be? be like the mane six going after the elements of harmony, and it turns out they just promote harmony and have no use against enemies of equestria.
this isn't g1 where things are but shallow mcguffins. the mcguffins are multipurpose upgrades in fim.
just something feels off about all this. i WANT to focus on the tragedy of what is going on here. i want to focus on shining dealing with the losing cadance. and what happened with cadance, and what bucky endured and all that jazz. but i just got this nagging feeling that something is just off about all this that is keeping me from it.
Thank you for the wondrous description. It was an excellent idea of mine to be eating while I read it.
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i do my best.
Now I'm wondering if Cadence will have memories of her old life. And if she does, how will that affect her development?
I spotted an instance of "Celestria"; dat errant "R," man!
Well, this does explain the foal in The Chance. You never did name her in that little short story, Kudz, you devious little devil.
5403222 ........ dude you use the concept of rape as a crutch in most of your stories. and you made a story that not only had a nearly crushed nation pull nukes outta their asses, but somehow muster enough forces to finish off equestria rather than defend their own vulnerable borders.
kudzu is confusing me with his themes and i even have criticisms with his ideas at time. yet he has yet to do something that was as farfetched as discord being killed by things he could turn into toilets at will, and suddenly be revived as a rule 63 version of himself without warning.
5403108 i want, and do, enjoy the story quite a bit, yet there are so many times that some concept pops up that just seems........ off. ........... sighs i need to start picking and choosing though. there was really no reason to have so much conflict about the whole filthy's death situation. the lunar ponies are an old and odd one......... the discord and fluttershy stuff is simply a case of non comprehension of wtf is going on there.
rest of it was about missing information over an extremely long story.
this one with cadance, along with the element beaerers........... just something feels off about it all.
5403307 I'm not debating my story, which I never claimed was perfect, on another's comment board. but you need to show more respect to other writers. none of us are perfect writers, and we dont claim to be. phrase your questions as questions, not insults.
Eurgh... seeing Shining Armor not miserable makes me uneasy. Expressing that loss is something he would need to heal, and seeing him be happy... focusing on the good is great, it seems more like he is simply unable to be... well... selfish enough to let himself express his pain. And in that he's not going to heal.
5403394 Maybe he just hasn't come to grips with what happened to him (I don't mean for this to sound like an accusation, it's not and I'm sorry if it come off like that); I mean one day he's living the dream, he's the prince-consort of an Empire, married to a (well by pony standards at least) very attractive mare who's even thinking of adding another mare or two to the marriage equation, and he's going to be a dad soon. And then the next day his home is likely a crater, his wife and foals are disintegrated, and he's critically injured as well. He probably hasn't come to grips or the realization that yes everything that happened to him, did indeed happen. What's he going to do now: as he's homeless (probably), his wife/love of his life got reincarnated as a foal (but he still lost his foals) and who know's what else he lost in that attack.
On that note I would definitely not want to be any mirror traveller in the Crystal Empire right now as if the public at large find out about the part they played in the assassination of Cadence they'd probably be lynched by the grieving masses .
. . . We need this to happen:
CUTIEMARK CRUSADERS FOALSITTERS YAY!
OK Cadence time for some noms... oh sweet Celestia the peas smell it's not washing off.
Scoots where's the baby?
she's right over... Horse apples.
*giggle from above*
*looks up and sees pea colored hoof prints and a pink foal covered in green walking on the ceiling. squealing in delight at being spotted the tiny princess flies into the Treebrary's main room dipping pea goop the whole way*
oh that is soo not fair. Rumble catch her!
*the shared coltfriend does so acting on instinct and experience from taking care of his sister*
good catch Rumble I'll go draw her a bath, she loves baths.
I suspect she gets messy on a account she has to get a bath after.
*all three young mares had the same thought as they watched Rumble interact with the foal sized Alicorn.*
'Rumble would make a really good father.' *Sensing the feelings the shared for their Stallion the foal smiled mischievously. Her horn glowed brightly bathing all four teens in pink light, suddenly their teen hormones were quadrupled feelings of Love and Desire flooded their minds. Only Rumble's indomitable will and love for his mares allowed him to restrain his lust.*
Rumble: Sorrygirlsgottagowashmyhairithinkineedareallyreallylongshower.
*Rumble placed Cadence at the girls hooves and rushed out a window, little Rumble flopping out to wave bye. All three mares unable to contain their blush.*
hey girls, are you thinking what I'm thinking?
That Cadence is better than love poison and with her we could ship any pony in Poniville?
Yeah let's go with that.
*The giris looked at each other a feeling mischief overcoming their desire. Cadence liked the look her three caretakers shared, spreading love was her reason for being after all and she sensed that was exactly what the wanted to do.*
One time, Daniel went to the restroom and didn't flush. His baby brother Bruce got into the toilet and came out covered in wet toilet paper and poop. Both my siblings and I were drunk. The next twenty minutes consisted of three grown drunk men trying to bathe a fussy, poop covered baby.
You know, this is very close to a current issue with the UK forces. and I'm all for it. If women can do the job just as good as men, then let them.
5403231 Hey, moron! Read what the fuck you just wrote! Sombra wasn't a fucking dragon, he was a pony!
Ohhhh, that is really sad, and I don't know WHY!!! i need help.
5403394 remember at heart he is a canterlot unicorn, they are taught to repress emotions. He is trained to not show "weakness" in public.
Oh my god. Poor Shining Armor. I can't even imagine where his head is at. Even if Cadance is alive, he just lost his twin foals that were growing inside her previous form.
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Oh sweet moons i didn't even....... I just died a little on the inside.
I was on the cusp of feeling something...something meaningful.....aaaaannnnd now the tragedy has killed it. Im dead inside once again.