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Actually, now I'm picturing Celestia as a Warhammer 40K commissar.
The typos are out in force today! Retreat, retreat!
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Something is wrong with this sentence and I'm not sure how to fix it.
remove the comma, unicorns’ (plural possessive)
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The only thing I can come up with in response to that is "Drive me closer! I want to hit them with my horn!"
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I'm not feeling so good. Sorry. I'll fix these right up. Having trouble concentrating.
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Meant no offense by it, was just making the obligatory typo joke. Hope you feel better soon.
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I knew you meant no offense, I was just explaining why I was so off... I felt bad about it.
If you want a realistic representation of Germany's air force the stolen airships must fall out of the sky the moment they start to rise xD
I mean, we invented helicopters that can't fly over water or jets like the Eurofighter II...
"Hey this story looks interesting." Stares at chapter and word count. "How? Why? You must be setting some kind of record here."
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If you sort stories by longest, this one shows as #1, but it says #2 in the stats.
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I figured you weren't feeling so good, it had been three days since you last posted a chapter of this, though you did post chapters of two other things in that time.
I almost want to see a line where Bucky or Celestia yell, "IT'S A TRAP!!!". lols for all who get the reference!
Poor Rumble, being run into the ground by his mother while hearing things about his birth he likely doesn't want to.
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It's longer than most big multi-book novels.
6142958 If someone doesn't get that reference, that person has been living under a rock. In a cave. On the moon. One of Jupiter's moons.
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Except... Celestia is the Emperor and Bucky is her Darth Vader... or something. I don't know.
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I'm sure she has a set of golden full-plate when she has to get into the mud and blood. Looking quite especially like the God-Emperor.
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I would still enjoy seeing it!!. Lols. Especially,since we all know there's an Admiral Pony bar some where amongst the fleet.
6142958 I don't see Celestial as a very good Mon Mothma or Bucky as a good Ackbar.
More like Palpatine and Anakin...
6143011 should we be playing the Imperial March when we get a written flyby of the Fleet?
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Something like this for reference,
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Suggested rendering of her pony form.
Well that was a bloody grim speech. I understand the value of caution and understanding the high danger the enemy poses but some word of encouragement is essential for moral to not suffer. Right after this meeting one of those merchant admirals will speak to his most trusted friend about what was said, the chef boy will overhear and tell the potato peelers how even Celestia thinks they are doomed, soon the entire kitchen knows how the enemy is 75 000 strong with 500 airships and have an alicorn of their own. From there the rumor easily spread to the crew. Then some Pegasus who carried over an extra rope to one of the next ships will run his mouth and it will spread like a fucking cold over the entire fleet.
Then again, this would probably have happened even with encouraging words because a civ would be fucking terrified reguardless but this sure doesn't help.
"We are dealing with a foe that was trained under the conditions of total war."
Now I want to play Medieval Total War 2 again.
JoJo's Bizarre Adventure has ruined any description of someone wearing an officers coat for me.
Hmm...
How much ORAORAORA could Celestia put out, I wonder?
'than them' or 'outrun them'?
I would have been less happy with this.
Actually each time I read "Run him 'till he pukes. He already has, even" I think "So... basically... cruelty training? You guys are assholes."
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Running a recruit until they puke is pretty standard fare in most police academies and military boot camps. It isn't cruelty at all, it is the beginning of a transition, teaching a body how they can push beyond pain and fatigue and keep going. When you run under a stressful situation, like someone chasing and berating you, your body floods with stress hormones. These make you sick, make you hurt more, wear your body down, and generally the stress hormones make you weaker.
Puking actually releases a number of compounds, including the ever so useful adrenaline and a flood of natural pain killers. It is why sometimes a person with a migraine headache feels better after throwing up.
Training a future soldier or police officer to push past these natural weaknesses isn't cruelty at all. Do you think enemy combatants will stop, ease up, and stop causing a stressful situation for a soldier just because he asks politely? Come on guys, cut it out, I feel nauseous! Stop harassing me and saying you're going to kill me as I run for my life!
Eventually, with training, the human body learns to transition past the puking stage (Most of the time) and go right into the recovery stage when the body floods with stress hormones, but this takes what appears to be abuse or even cruelty.
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Aha. That is far better reasoned than what I imagined. See, I just saw the stupid guy who says "No Pain No Gain!" "Well... yeah you need to ignore the burn of your muscles, but... pain is a useful signal from your body." "NO PAIN NO GAIN." "You could seriously hurt yourself if you just... ignore your body's natural feedback." "NO PAIN NO ARRRHGHABER GAIN!"
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What Flitter is doing is the ultimate act of love. She's being hard so Rumble will survive. She's taking it upon herself to get him over the hump and get him strong. She knows that being soft won't help Rumble in the long run, so she's not holding back. Telling Rumble intimate details about his birth is incredibly stressful.
All DA got is an admiral Luna.
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6143675 As someone who has gone through hell week in football and basic military training...it is considered very good if you push beyond your limits enough to puke. A drink of water and you are able to press on. The human body is an amazing machine.
Knight capitan Kudzu, sir.
Where is the Fan art of our
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Yes. I still have my leg, but I require a prosthetic to make it functional. It was internally severed just below the knee with a type 5 tibia plateau fracture that turned about six inches of bone to powder and shards, some of which had to be surgically removed from around my ankle. Try not to think about that too much...
6145346 Sounds like a challenge to deal with. I would say I am sorry that happened to you, but I am not a fool and apologizing would not restore it. I say you are stronger for having to deal with this extra challenge.
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I had a skull and bones pirate flag stenciled to my prosthetic leg.
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So I'm cool with it.
Celestia would make a Grand Admiral, with her white coat and gold trimmings.
So this will be like the naval battles of old except with flying ships and augmented pegisi and Lunar pegisi. Other than that, time for a sea shanty *sings*
why do i feel that Bucky would react like Edward Elric from FMA if he were called in anyway of phrasing the word short
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This might be tasteless, and if it is I'm sorry, Kudzu, but i'mma call you peg-leg from now on.
OK. So I read to pins and needles and had to ask, is this not normal? I deal with this every morning after a good sit. I blame it on the toilet seat.
It's crazy to think of Flitter as basically a Hardcore Drill Sergeant who is also Rumble's mother! I mean DAMN!! O.O
6146213 Well that's certainly one way to make a prosthetic leg about 20% cooler
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All of it.