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Nice chapter, I don't know how but it says I have the first view. i.imgur.com/Bgm0GFr.png
So I guess if Kudzu looked upon Bucky with both the eye and cloak he would appear as a Skeleton made of typos?
I've had my face smashed in by a truck door, and that wasn't as on the nose as this.
Fear and wait, but do not despair. Your hero, just as your enemy, grows stronger each day. While Sombra's shadow is the manifestation of fear, it is only a spirit and relies on others. Sentinel is a foal, a small and weak child. But the thing about children is they excel at growing, learning, barging ahead undaunted. He will grow into your savior before long, a member of the strongest race among ponies and son to the cleverest unicorn. Sentinel Winter's child is coming...
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Which is how Diamond Tiara has Persimmon...
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What?
5761987 You'll have to explain your curiosity over my statement.
5761997 maybe I'm just a silly American 20 yea old but I don't get the reference
Once more, we see the strength of family in action. After all, even if one pony cannot defeat something, another may yet be able to.
Of course, even families will be hard-pressed to deal with an army of screaming invaders they're genetically predisposed to welcome...
5762001 There is no reference, aside from the direct quotation, which is a not so subtle hint about black carapaces on equines, and the only equines with carapaces I know of happen to be changelings. This means that, as it was hypothesized within this fic, the changelings are cursed or otherwise diseased ponies or zebras , or at least started out that way and bred true, carrying on this affliction into subsequent generations. From this, one can infer that it may yet be possible to cure the current changelings, if such may be possible after the soul-bonding Chrysalis has performed.
All in all, I found it heavy-handed.
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Or it is a species of crimson fish.
5762074 Which is the unspoken possibility, and entirely possible given how blatant you have been.
Changelings from plague? I always imagined them as twisted products of windigos.
From previous chapter which I didn't get to reading before this one was posted:
Especially if the sub dungeon contains mummy hormones, which cause you to start shouting Kali-ma and grabbing the hearts of others as well as a compulsion to be wrapped in strips of linen.
Now for this chapter:
I like that Bucky says what we have all been thinking. Invasion of the foals!
I spotted a typo.
Was at work earlier and while thinking about this story, I thought "you know what would be a great way for gryphons to relearn the arts? Limericks!" They're both a poem and song put together, and easy to create. So, I started brainstorming some at work, and here are my 2 favorites:
There once was a pony named Bucky,
his power of frost, it was key.
He froze us with snow,
twas cold, don't you know?
And that's why he's called the Ice King.
And:
There once was Thistle the kelpie,
who when swimming, felt she was free.
Til one episode,
she felt she'd explode.
And that's how young Bell came to be.
These were fun to make, and made work less boring. Might make others for different characters or chapter events in the future.
Noooo! The Typos has invaded the author note!
Caused earth ponies to grow black shells? Better buckle down kiddies I feel I a sub-plot coming on!
Wait, what? Changelings came from a plague?
5763450 It was hinted, already, several times, that some tipe of curse may be responsible for the creation of the changelings. The foal THINKS it was a plague, but could be the result of a curse, or magical manipulation, or something else.
'Cantaloupe', actually. This typo is one of a set of twins - the second one is found just a little further down, just before the line break.
So the Changelings were created because of a disease. Interesting....