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Aw, little Courier and his chat with Pina and Dinky. Perhaps foreshadowing or implying at something?
You devious rascal, you.
Excellent chapter, also don't think that young colt realize that no matter what he says to Derpy . He is still a young foal in her eyes no matter how capable he is.
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Elaborate?
Firstly, what is Keg Smasher trying to achieve by pissing off Bucky? I'm pretty suer Bucky's magic > Keg's wings.
Secondly... that colt needs a name.
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Derpy is one of those types of pegasus.
I had a hilarious mental image of her dragging him along by the nape of the neck and sitting on him.
Something about broody pegasi that is just plain funny to me.
4485850 Well, there's a childlike innocence in his offer to protect Dinky and Pina from the rats and such, and given how he's been treated by Bucky's family so far, in comparison to how he was before, even tough that wasn't too bad in its own right, I imagine he's fairly attached. Just figured he may have a bit of a crush on the two, is all.
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He has a name. In my notes.
He is specially called Unnamed Colt.
J/K. He has a name. Just not revealed yet.
And Keg isn't exactly trying to piss off Bucky. He's more curious about Bucky's mettle.
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Ah.
He's a good colt.
I don't know why, but I like Courier as a name.
And yes, I did notice the flower. My guess is that it's an application to become another wife of Keg Smasher. It would be funny if Bucky starts getting them, and Derpy just thinks that it's ponies saying "thank you" for something.
I wouldn't be surprised if Bucky discovers that he's going to have to transmute ashes and shortening if he wants to have soap.
4485853 I can see that xD lol
I get the feeling Bucky will have some nasty surprise when he tries to fight those wolves with his wonky horn.
Hm... It's okay.
That white rose has me curious...
Are you familiar with the Scotsman from Samurai Jack? Now that I know about Neeps and Tatties I wonder if his 20 second long insult of Jack was more then just gibberish.
i wonder if bucky's relatives will try to "rescue" him from their clutches
I get the feeling that Derpy is terribly mistaken. And is not going to be at all happy when she finds out just how mistaken she is...
In any case, this chapter has a very enjoyable air of happiness and polite mutual incomprehension tempered by dread. I get the feeling this is the atmosphere you want for this arc.
Looking forward to more.
I have a feeling that Keg is the sort who acts before everything else. A good sort, but the sort that doesn't take things lying down. I also believe that Bucky has his work cut out for him.
Nice chapter, and I'm glad it was longer.
(By the by... I realize that it's two separate universes, but it seems that Primrose is quite a bit like Rookwood's mother from Dance in the Shadow. Is this universe's version of Rook's mother?)
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Canterlot unicorns.
Much like my lunar pegasi, they exist across universes.
Bucky is going wolf hunting? Better come back in one piece because he has a herd to come back to. (Which may be getting bigger, if that white flower is what I think it is... SPECULATION!)
I already like the lil' colt. He brings some more cuteness in the story. Also rains of castmere started to play in my head during this chapter.
So lemme guess, cliche 'light smites the darkness' thing? :P
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Context? Sorry, mental exhaustion, I cannot understand what you mean.
4487772 Dark wolves? :P
I suspect that the little flower is a gift from his wife asking for a little extra attention that night. Are the wolves from Scottish tradition?
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Sort of.
They draw inspiration from many sources.
4490019 I'm just telling you what I know from Hearth's Warming Eve
4485853 The mental image you painted in that scene had me grinning from ear to ear.
Just for the record though: Whenever you make a point to mention hidden details, I go completely bonkers trying to spot EVERY. LAST. ONE.
On another note, the dynamic that the Lad has with Dinky and Piña is just absurdly cute.
I hope they keep Lad! Not sure how to feel about thistle yet, though.
I kept reading Keg 's dialogue in a Scottish accent without really thinking about it. Are the Shetland Isles Scotland in our world?
found two
Half way down the chapter (approx)
,( land) on and clinging to Bucky’s neck shouldn’t that be[ landing] ?
(Evapourate) [evaporate] 7 paragraphs down using double space as an indicator of Pg. Change
Rising Star looked agressive
1. Aggressive.
4768116 Yes
I love seeing some of the regional things the Isles takes inspiration from - for example, I recall my mother using "tatties" to refer to potatoes when speaking of her childhood, things she got from her own parents. I love that the accent I habitually use to read feels accurate.
Of course, it's all a big jumble of Midland and Highland, so I wonder if it will eventually go full Scots or if I'll find reference to Robin Hoof :^)
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*Fallout intensifies*
Awwwhahahaww, I'm liking this little colt.
I shall call him, Bean! :D Until the real name is mentioned.
I'm liking Keg Smasher, just like I said before, he seems like a good sort, hehe.
Wolf huntin' errrright then! :D
Nicej ob once more Kud.
How would this go as a response "You're perfect at the other end of the scale, you both keep me balanced out in the scales of love."
6539342 The lad is a lunar pony omnivore, how bout Hunter? Ooh or how bout Tasty, then if he's adopted he'd be Tasty Bitters?
I am somewhat perturbed that Keg Smasher is adamant on getting Bucky to marry Thistle, never having met him before and going purely on reputation; then in the same day he meets him giving him the right to kill Shetlanders without trial and be immune to retribution.
Maybe if he made Bucky a Armiger after they had talked, and Bucky volunteered to hunt shadow wolves?