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And thus we are left, for now, without reaction from Cheerilee or Filthy Rich.
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Aw, come on mang, how much do you want from me in a single day?
My grammar giblet is hurting, not that it worked all that well to begin with.
4324620 Lol. Sorry, it's just that I don't like loose ends.
So long as this doesn't end with a parent trying to rape their child, such as some certain fics do, I will be okay for now.
Holy shit you are an absolute fucking machine how are you managing this
oh ma gerd i love you for updating this so fast
4324620 you...in one day... how
When do you sleep? Geez.
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Those the gods wish to destroy they first make sleepy.
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Accidental pun-ishment.
Fixed. Whoops.
ALL OF MY YES.
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You are strong.
You're pumpin' the chapters out left and right.
That's amazing!
so many horse words!So fast!
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He compressed it with countless newtons worth of force, causing it to superheat and go into a near liquid state, his magic holding it together as a sphere.
good chapter, I like the set-up. and the fact that I called it on all three fronts last chapter. whoo!
dear god man rest thy fingers, and let thy creative beast rest as well. I know what its like to be possessed by the creative demon now and again, but even they need sleep!
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No, posting chapter of new story, will be done soon. Be on lookout for new story. Yes. New story. Mwhahahahahaha!
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........I have been possessed by that demon to, he be nasty.
*flies of to type*
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Well, for bees, you use a blanket, or rain clouds for the pegasi. We know ponies have hoses so that could help. Or, you run into the cloud of bees and grab the kid and run the hell out to somewhere that would help. Pegasi tackle problems with a strong offense, they'd get the water or blankets, while Earth ponies go for defense so they'd try to grab them and take them to a water fountain or river.
Sometimes i really hate Celestia if she try this to somepony, she is like the child protective services.
But i like the chapter and i think it is ok, that Bucky go a bit into the "i think i have a marefriend" course.
4325959 man i HATE CPS!!!
Yes, Filthy should be lucky, but I don't think we've seen the last of him.
And now Dinky has a father figure in her life. Perhaps that's all she really needs?
4326155 Somehow i like Berry Punch^^ I would bet she tinks about the next meeting as a 3 person date.
All I can think of is Nic Cage. NOT THE BEES! OH GOD, NOT THE BEES!!!
"Hello do you like bees!"
"SIMON NOOO!"
That is what came to mind when that started, RIP Magicka play-through, RIP
4331247 I bet thats what Diamond and Silver would scream if it happens again lol
Here have my thumb
Bumblebees? Really? Of stinging insects, you chose the most chill and friendly to be a bad thing?
For shame, bees are awesome.
Love this story, to bad Dinky didn't summon a swam of Asian giant hornets.
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If the bee's managed to kill Diamond Tiara, this is what she would be forced to listen to for eternity...
Wow, dude. Just wow.
When I first read the description of this story, I didn't really think much of it. A quick little laugh, I thought. It honestly didn't look all that interesting. I didn't even notice the length at first, and I'm glad I didn't, because a story about (as I assumed) Derpy chasing around a stallion to comedic effect would get boring after a chapter or two. But not only did just the first chapter reel me in with its intriguing take on the different perspectives, every subsequent chapter just introduced more and more interesting concepts, events, takes on the characters, backstory...
I really wasn't expecting such a... an... something so profound and interesting, and so heartwarming, and so... just god damn, all around great. And now, not even a fourth of the way through what has been written so far, such a curve ball being thrown in, (with Dinky's magic surge and all) I am just left flabbergasted, and I have to express it.
This story... it just has everything. I have been reading it all day. (yeah, I'm a kinda slow reader) I love the characters, I love the biology stuff... And I just can't fucking wait to see what happens next.
And 40 more chapters at my fingertips?
Hanging on to every word here Kudz. (Do you mind if I call you Kudz? Well I'm doing it anyway)
Keep making great art.
Hmm... I remember picking this little story up a few weeks back. I was utterly confused in the first two chapters, but told myself to sit back and see how far it goes.
You hit 60 chapters and I picked back up at chapter 3...
And here I am today. With you spewing more chapters out "while" I am in the middle of reading one. GOOD ON YOU!
I do have to say I like the unicornian class of magic. This is something I will add to headcanon.
Does that make Rarity a class 2 or 1?
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Considering the number of dresses she can levitate at once, I say Class 2.
Curious: because of twilight's high magical abilities, was she a class four even before she transcended?
You have a motherfucking gift dude, to get these scenes planned out, written, edited, revised, and then posted sometimes three times in a single day just blows my mind. Not only that, the story isn't shoddily built and i love it!
Have you ever, at the speed you write, actually worn a keyboard out?
But, Twi's an alicorn albeit recently. Is she like, class 3.5? 3.7?
Getting paid by a Princess to take care of those he cares about? Seems awfully familiar to Noctilucent's situation in Princess Luna's Suicide Solutions, which I read before coming across this.
4795441 she is new to the job title so she is more or less 3.8 when in control and 5 when she is using her alicorn powers to full capacity like during the season 4 final when she pretty much went god mode. Probably. Or we might have a new princess sunbutt.
4796821 I love getting story recommendations in comments. (you mentioned it by name, obviously it's good enough to remember)
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Sorry couldn't help myself.
Bees?
One of the strongest cards in the deck. Unfortunately I have never won a round with it.
"Bucky awoke, feeling something cold and damp laying over his face, a cool
dampcloth had been placed over his forehead and his eyes."You repeat damp twice. You should consider putting another word in its place, Like moist or wet
If Twi's an alicorn, shouldn't she be a 5? Element of Magic, after all. Although I suppose it'd take a while for her power to grow to levels of her status, near enough as she may be.
5132338 I think this timeline begins before her ascension.
You're doing it again.
i feel like people use contractions more when speaking. Still a very good story, but this irks me a little bit. To quote xkcd, you know when you're walking in a dream, and you misstep, and get jolted awake? Little things like this sort of snap me out of the story and remind me that I'm reading something.
My God. The Bees!
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I'm not good with english dictionary and grammare so...
Is this acceptable?
4406077 that thing is the king of nightmares for spheksophobics everywhere... including me O.o..... keep that thing away from me!!!