How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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No mention of typos this chapter.
holding ? satin finished heavy duty cardboard box [ a ] ?? Typos are the sneaky snakes of the literary world.
Just my luck, the one time I find a typo is when you didn't ask.
Needs a double quote after sir, not a single.
(Looking at prior comments... don't worry about you not saying it, I'm just playin'!)
Aha. Applejack is learning the value of discretionary honesty.
Wasn't... there a character either in her family or almost-so that did that? One with a romantic relationship with Applejack? (Silver Shill)
Coming ever closer to that 700 mark.
I have feelings about that.
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Don't be skeered.
700 is either the coronation or its absolute de-railing by an outside power.
I'm keeping an eye on you, Kudz.
Two, at certain times of day.
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Or both! Portal opens up in the sky and an evil lance strikes down, impaling poor Applebloom just as the crown is about to be put on her head. Because Kudz is sadistic.
'his and Cheerilee's'?
Ya know, I kinda understand Bucky's conscience giving him a hard time about the killing, but at the same time it was the Element of Obedience. Im sure it was a twilight seeking missle inside a fake alicorn. I bet you dont become the embodiment of Obedience for nothing...
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You say that, but then I look up and read "This chapter was joy to write." in the author's note. As far as I remember, and I do have a poor memory, we are missing an "a" here.
They are clearly just hiding today. But we cannot let our guards down for even a moment.
Yay! I get a leg!
I can walk around looking for mushrooms when I'm not busy killing ponies! YAY!
If I could like this story again, I would.
Five more.... Five more chapters and it's 700... : (
With Friends (and family of one sort or the other) like These, Who needs Enemies?
I feel a bit sorry for larch.....
I think he is about to be overwhelmed.
I didn't expect to catch up so quickly...now I have to wait for updates like everyone else. :(
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so so much. kudzu for given the main 6 a POV I am rewarding you a hug and a cookie coupon obtainable threw one patreon account.
Larch (still not sure if it is Lar-ch or Lar-ck) is either going to love it, or just go with it.
6405788 Lar-ch, as in the tree: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Larch