How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
Page generated in 0.059 seconds
Total duration
744 users online
671,093 hits today, 2,244,100 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
thought
extra to
Why do I get the feeling this might be an understatement?
I want to start this story, but that is aloooooot of Chapters Is it worth the read?
6504126
Depends who you ask and depends on what you want out of a story.
6504135 well develop characters and a good solid plotline. Thats what im looking for
6504126
Oh no, not at alll. It's not like we've stuck through it since early on or any- yes! Yes it is worth the read. Read it! Enjoy it! D: Have fun!
6504148
Over 500 characters and a long plot line.
I feel this song embodies all of the relationships in this story.
Every time I listen to this song it reminds me of this story
the few problem statement makes me more than a bit worried.
you have been posting in your other stories rather consistently though so i do not know the nature of these issues. could be jsut with the story or with real life.....
should we worry?
sorry if being intrusive >_<
6504135
I don't understand.
Is it problems like "the power's out!" or problems like "what name should this character have?"
6504126 The beginning is a little slow, but the slice of life moments are really good. The authors writing has improved dramatically since they started this story. So if you are a stickler for quality writing, it will agitate. The Isles arc is kind of long and slow, but afterward everything moves at a good pace.
I gotta say, I was reading another story and and the amount of typos present was appauling... It felt so good to read a The Chase with your level of skill. Not that the other story was bad, but it definitely was distracting with a typo in every other paragraph.
The weather has been a bit rough in your neck of the woods. I hope all is as well as can be expected
6504148
In my opinion, the man has a plan and is currently leading us readers towards his ultimate goal. His story has distinct arcs and changes flavors as the story progresses, but overall, I feel he's done a very nice job of world-building on top of the original MLP universe. Additionally, his characters are fun and well developed - both the ones from the show and his OCs.
This is one of those stories that if you like the beginning, just keep reading and eventually you'll get caught upM. ost of us who've caught up are completely hooked.
Come! Join us!
BTW, Kudzu, just sayin' here - the tribes are mixing better than ever before, and that's good. And yes, there's a war on, but it's been a while since I remember any Pegasi just being Pegasi and having any chases. That's what got us in to this mess in the first place, and that was a lot of fun just on it's own merit! (Maybe Dinky needs some a good run with somepony.... heh.)
6504126
It is. Just pace yourself and it will be good.
6504153 The plot of this story is so long it can even twerk by itself !
BTW, have I ever told how much I LOVE the way you mix the show canon, turns it upside down, at make it even greater ?
Flutters vampirism !!! I almost forgot that !!! Amazing, just amazing....the sinergy level with your story, while barely changing anything from the show itself, is unbelievable ! And you do that again and again...
6504774
It's springtime!
6504126
Most emphatically yes! this is one of the best stories on this site, if not the best. There are other stories that I think a lot of but in terms of world building and character development this is a the top of a very short list. Not to mention that the hunt for the ever more elusive typo is fun.
So MTG white/black. I think it's for her own good so we are totally allowed to do things that would normally mean we don't respect her!
Maybe every character should be considered to have a bit of black in them, given that it's so common they ignore morals if it's inconvenient/more effective not to.
6505123
Sentinel was being funny. He's not very good at it.
for the life of me i can't remember who Brennus is.
6505470
Brennus... go back several chapters.
6505470 Her soon-to-be sister...Lugu´s wife is pregnant.
Yes, I just forgot Lugu´s wife name. Yes, i know it is in the today´s very chapter, but I´m lazy.
6505483
6505490
Ah, good. that was annoying me that i couldn't remember.
6505501 It´s okay...it´hard to remember who Brennus is...the long forgotten ancient godess of the Hugs.
Peekaboo will be her Palladin. She will hug all the enemies to a sweet crushing death.
6504126 i have gotten non-brony friends of mine to read this story, sure there are moments that we hate but it's a story! A damn fantastic one too, if you don't read it, you are missing out...
way to break the tension Peekaboo
where*
6504126 This story is worth it. I've read over 800 Chapters and it's STILL super amazing. Frankly Kudzu is a GENIUS and I have no idea how he does it!
6504126 it is very much worth the read, and i started after the story was actually finished. I wish that it didn't have to end! But that wouldn't be fair to kudzu, making him write until the end of time...