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Great story, I read it all in one sitting. Can't wait for more.
Well... that was certainly interesting. Oh, and thanks for the rather disturbing thought at the end there.
Well, that completely defeats the purpose of therapy. Either Bucky never had private sessions when he could share this, was browbeaten into never doing so, or unicorn "therapy" has entirely different mores and goals.
Probably the latter. Seems like what what unicorns call psychotherapy is designed to make them more neurotic.
In any case, looking forward to more. Though hopefully, this time the story won't update as I'm writing a comment.
And remember:
imgs.xkcd.com/comics/dignified.png
So... Berry's becoming no better than those foal-napping Amazon mares?
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I don't understand this comment.
4358258
Well, with your author's note and tone I read this chapter in, I asked an honest question because I think I misread something. With how controlling she's becoming, it's like Berry Punch is about to go Straw Feminist... I asked because I wasn't sure and wanted clarity.
Hope that explains my inquiry.
4358270 Yeah i kinda got that feel from this chapter to and from the notes. Maybe im just jumping to conclusions ?
4358280 I'm sure we are just jumping, but we shall see. *keeps mellow*
4358270
Berry is going to become an equine feminist.
Non homosapien.
So, check your baggage at the door, toss away your current ethnocentric and species based standards, and hold on!
4357567 I like the blacked out bit there -- go derpy!! - tho I swear you should have some sort of competition between Berry and Derpy for buckys first ride ;)
Would be cool if pegasi had a traditional competition for the right to mate - would make things interesting.
haha bucky would be freaking out the whole time watching them from the sidelines XD
4358340 No, no... Straw Feminism. It's basically those that go beyond 'equal rights' and go straight for 'women's turn to dominate society and deny the rights of men!'. That's the 'extreme' of it anyway. TVTropes has a quote.
"There are now women politicians, women soldiers, women scientists, women astronauts. But our mission is only half-done: we still haven't prevented men from doing those things!"
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No no no, that's HUMAN!
Discard it.
Seriously, how would any of that apply to equines.
Maybe hey really need tto work on it, because Bucky seems to be a special case, but Berry can´t wait till he want to see it can she?
I think i am really a Unicorn, maybe a bit like Bucky, i just don´t feel like talk about these things everyday and don´t like to boast with it, like others do wich i know, but Bucky is really a bit mental kinky. I just think that´s But than again i like Berry how she is here, she is really something.
4358385 Okay, let me rephrase, because all you are doing is pointing out species difference and not answering my initial question if Berry is becoming a hypocrite-feminist, whom isn't so much 'feminist' as 'mare domination'... which would make little sense as Mares are already dominant. It's the males that are pretty much 'banks' in herds.
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Equine feminism has nothing to do with dominance.
4358396 Neither does human feminism. But again, you then have the Straw Hypocrites whom take advantage of it to further their own gender-hating ends.
4358270
How many straw feminists want the D?
4358417
Valid argument!
Actually, I've started constructing equine feminism around labour distribution, collective bargaining, and motherhood.
And from Berry's point of view, monogamy infringes upon mare's rights.
4358417 I'm just over-thinking it.
4358426 Let's just wait and see what the next chapter tells us.
thanks for the update!!
I love how berry is just so damn blunt, a nuclear explosion is more subtle than she is
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She's a Shetland Pony.
4358754 he Shetland pony is a breed of pony originating in the Shetland Isles. Shetlands range in size from a minimum height of approximately 28 inches (71 cm) to an official maximum height of 11 hands high (107 cm) at the withers (11.2 hands for American Shetlands). Shetland ponies have heavy coats, short legs and are considered quite intelligent. They are a very strong breed of pony, used for riding, driving, and pack purposes.
Shetland Ponies are hardy and strong, in part because the breed developed in the harsh conditions of the Shetland Isles. In appearance, Shetlands have a small head, sometimes with a dished face, widely spaced eyes and small and alert ears. The original breed has a short, muscular neck, compact, stocky bodies, and short, strong legs and a shorter than normal cannon bone in relation to their size. A short broad back and deep girth are universal characteristics as is a springy stride. Shetlands have long thick manes and tails and a dense double winter coat to withstand harsh weather. Different breed registries have different height standards, but the outside ranges are between 7 and 11.2 hands (28 to 46 inches (71 to 117 cm)).
thank you wikipedia
4358761 question: how do you post so much, so often? I would die if I tried to post this much.
4358761
Specifically, in this instance, she is an analogue for being Celtic. And all that goes with it.
She's a crazy bad Scots-Irish sort that takes no prisoners and entirely too self satisfied.
4358772 I am aware of the more drunken, blunt characteristics of that culture-group being primarily Irish myself
4358769
**Shrugs**
4358778 good 'nuff for me
Great chapter! I don't know whether to feel sorry or feel jealous of Bucky's current predicament haha. Perhaps both.
I don't think this story can hang onto it's Teen rating for much longer!
This is something that haunts all males if spoken to them....
careful of those double ' marks. Also, I feel very sorry for Bucky, but maybe its a wound that needs to be opened to be healed.
I did not need that disturbing part at the end.
Regarding your Author's note: Wait, what? Feminism? I thought it was the mares who had the control-- they were the ones killing each other's foals. They have the royal power. I would think that there would be a masculist movement in equestria.
The last sentence reminded me that Bucky has only done one thing involving two types of naughties: He came out of his mother's vagina.
Bucky, go buck someone for bucking sake.
Dear god, Berry.....X3
4434119 'he came out of his mothers vagina.'
Did he though?
Unicorns are terrified of messy biology.
It seems entirely likely that teleportation would be used instead.
No pain.
The mess can be entirely dealt with by the doctor.
None of the labour of labour.
4579912 There is this cord inside that attaches the mom to the baby, it'd be really weird to see how that teleportation spell worked with that variable mixed in.
To the writer of this story....
I love you so much right now! This entire story is gold! I CANNOT STOP READING! its like writen crack... I've no idea what crack is but this is the wordy verson of it...
I try very hard to never think about Berry's scary points. It'd scar me for life.
And this example of 'flipping the script' is hilarious.
That last paragraph....
I think I'm just going to avoid my mum for the rest of my life now. Scarred.....
This is seriously the best derpy ship ever. (Granted, I haven't really read derpy using UPS, but whatever)
Berry is saying......
Well, that's some mind soap I'm going to be needing soon. Gj Berry.
Ooooohoohoohoo, I can't be the only one who's loving this Derpy right now... jeebus cripes on a stick.
This is amazing, hehehehe. That bit near the start with the foal snatching by dragons... interesting...
Nice job!
Gg, son. Im dying of laughter.... aaannd now i'm cowering in embarrassment because what Berry said at the end just sunk in.
Vagina Dentata, what a horrible phrase
Vagina Dentata, Regret your choice in Lays
It means no Penis for the rest of your days
It's a Penis free, Beef Cavity
Vagina Dentata
It means no Penis!!!
someday I'm going to find an actual recording of that, and I'll feel just as terrible as I do when writing it
Church bell?
Did you mean heavily fortified?