How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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So I guess some sewer rats and gators got fused by some kind of alchemical compounds and also maybe some kind of plant or a alchemical concoction that had seeds or spores from a plant with properties like those tentacles in order to create those Sewer Lurkers.
water drained drained out somewhere below these typos are making me feel really drained
It looked like it was part rat and part aligator [alligator]
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Or a rat and an alligator made sweet, sweet love down in the sewer.
Crocodent? Arcanodile? How about a Fuzyhectopod.
This sentence is kinda fucked up and I'm not 100% sure how to fix it.
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Weird... I corrected that and somehow it got reverted back to an earlier draft from gdocs.
Not sure what happened. It happens sometimes though. I do a lot of copying and pasting between various documents as I prepare the finished product. Ugh. Sorry. I just looked at the work prints and most of them were correct, but not the main chapter workprint which was the finished product. Ugh ugh ugh.
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Do you use 'import from GDocs'? I know some people have had issues with it missing chunks and/or otherwise messing things up.
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I stopped using that a long time ago.
I now copy the document and then paste it into the window. I then indent everything and give it a final touching up.
Making mistakes is one of the better ways to learn, but you do have to survive making them. Still, Sentinel now has a better idea of what he's dealing with and what he's working with. With that knowledge, the second pass should go far better.
Found a typo in the tunnel:
Missing "I". That's not how to praise Odin, Kiara.
6005597 think that is kinda my point. if those kind of spells were so signficant, they wouldn't be so readily available to ponies. less tiwlight sparkle knowing em, more celestia letting her keep such books in the public library.
then again i view mind control magic are pretty damn flimsy in the mlp universe....... mainly cause how discord's own powerful magic got brushed aside so easily by a backdoor method.
Drop the comma.
...so that's where the rats are...
Hey, here's an idea. Seal off ALL access to the sewers bar two, then throw an orb of fire down there, sealing that entrance off right away. Fire should fill the sewers, and burn anything down there to ass. With only on entrance/exit to the sewers, there will be somewhere for the pressure of the exploding gasses to escape too,, and they can be standing there to deal with anything that tries to run.
6006094 I wouldn't call that 'sweet' love.
Oooh, ratagators!
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....nah.
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Or Crocadents.
Ah yes, the dreaded self realization that you are totally horned.
Wasn't there an image from the future of a scarred, one-eyed Sentinel? Methinks he's in the making.
i just have to say it... i love violet, you will know what i mean soon
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Given all the other racial hybrids we've seen? Entirely possible. Who knows, maybe some of those alchemical compounds were super pheromones.
6006290 Actually, Sentinel will mess up again BIG TIME while fighting Sombra´s shadow by his own...there is where he´ll lose his eye.
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Nope.
Sentinel will lose his eye to necromancy.
But not from Sombra. He never tells his girl how he lost his eye.
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Ah, I see. Still, I imagine the scarring, at least, begins with this mission.
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Um, this mission?
Burned to crisp by Sombra's magic, leaving scars over his withers. Getting shot several times. Nibbled on by rats. And now burned by paralytic acid.
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*shrugs* who knows what types of chemicals or whatnot are down there, and what kind of venom the sewer lurkers may have. Lunar Pegasi are tough, but not invincible. Permanent scarring, even if unlikely, is not out of the question, yes?
Smoke the beasties out, close all but two airways, both as far both horizontally and vertically as possible, light a fire at both ends, let physics do the rest
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Did you perhaps draw any inspiration from mossdogs? While they are different in many ways, they share many similarities as well.
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