How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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Poor Sentinel... and poor DT, if he decides to shun her for his own guilty conscience.
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Dragonfire messages were blocked for a while. If you recall, Twilight was unable to communicate with Celestia during part of the collapse.
.............. this is why you do not mix equine with predator. you get messed up shit like that going on in their heads.
that is like some serial killer shit there. fortunately sentinel is smart enough to realize, oh this shit be fucked up.
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I really wanted to highlight the fact that Sentinel and the lunar pegasi are not at all like their fellow equines. There has been lots of hints, but this was the part of the story where I drove it home for the people who missed the subtle clues.
And I feel bad for writing it.
5100464 ........... i cannot help but think that is overtly specialized kind of magic to be able to just block. the magic put into spike's fire can slip through dimensions even. seems like it was designed to prevent that possibility........ which makes sense considering twilight is her personal student and all but a daughter to princess celestia. both personal safety an dher potentiality being a target.
man.... Sentinel is a psychopath inside. I seriously didnt knew if i started to read the correct story at first, it was so fucked up
both sorts of desires
Oh god, incoming teenage hormones...
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No, not a psychopath. Clear out that line of thinking.
He's an apex predator. A carnivore. Diamond Tiara is an herbivore. She's food.
There is a conflict of instincts here. Is a pony more than their instincts and base nature? Can they overcome the beast within and be something else? Or are they brute bestial animals, a slave to carnal desires?
Yeah, the dream was fucking creepy, but I figured it was a dream fairly early.
Also the Barley scene was great. I love the Shetland swearing.
... And Sentinel also has instincts he's afraid and ashamed of? The potential comparisons to Spike increase even further.
Son/assistant/protege(?) to newly crowned royalty.
Saved their parent from Sombra's shadow.
Hard on self for failures.
Uncomfortable hostile-to-ponies instincts.
... I'm looking forward to them meeting.
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Welcome to the Chase, be prepared to run.
The next chapter is called UNHANDLED EXCEPTION.
5100475 there is being very different from them and then there is basically making them the werewolves of equestria.
though i would say normal predators do have a distinct difference in wehre sex begins and predatory impulses ends. else they would often try to kill their mates. then again these fellow have predatory instincts shoved into a body that is mostly equine overall.
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Well....That was unexpected....And odd...Sentinel's reaction to his dream was rather interesting though.
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The need to protect what his innermost instincts want him to devour.
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So in the future, we are going to see an epic stuggle how Sentinel try to overcome this instint in the sake of others?
Does every lunar pegasus who try to be part of the society have to bury this to be considered as normal beings?
I really liked the Sentinel but after this little dream..... i dont know how to feel about him ....maybe later it will be explained a bit better or something and i can forget it, but until then, Pina became the number 1 best pony in the story
To all of you saying the sentiel is going crazy or turning into a sociopath, keep in mind that he is a preditor while ponies are prey, it is only natural that he is confused as to what he is suspossed to do with them, it is just like us looking at a peice of meat and thinking about devouring it, it doesnt make us sociopaths.
And another key element is that he TOLD somepony about it straight away, meaning that he doesnt want those feelings to grow
Mmm... Kudzuhaiku that was... I know the dream was supposed to be disturbing, but unfortunately I have a slight Vore fetish, and the fact that I knew it was going to be a wet dream. I really couldn't help but be excited for Sentinel. I'm kinda hoping he develops a neurosis about intimacy from this. Something like this can mess with a young males head.
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Every lunar pegasus struggles with this desire. Luna made them equines again, but only in the barest sense. Make no mistakes, they are predatory monsters.
Now think about Luna's Myrmidon training. What do you think Luna is doing with her Myrmidons with that kind of training?
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And it was a nightmare that scared him senseless.
Clearly, not sociopathic behaviour. Not something he wants to act on.
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I was wondering if there was somebody with a vore fetish that would get turned on by this.
You monster.
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Um, translation?
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If every lunar pegasus have this same problem how there was no incident before, that a lunar pegasus went feral while the whole nation collapsed? or at least i dont remember anything like that written in the story (i can be mistaken of course)
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if im right its say chapter 255 but not sure
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Most hold it in through their sense of duty, loyalty, and sense of obligation that is so deeply ingrained into all of them. It comes from their connection to the moon, and therefore, a direction connection to Luna.
If Luna's mood changes, she could let go of the leash.
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Chapter: 255
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Oh. Is there something wrong? Clarity in communication please. If there is a problem, I need to know.
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Nothing's wrong, you just need to learn binary.
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when there was a mob attack against calestia if im remember right luna went a bit mad back then. How did that effect them? That was a pretty big mood change.
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Well, there was a previous comment about an error for the next chapter, I was worried.
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No, Luna wouldn't let go of the leash over something like that. But Nightmare Moon might.
Some resisted...
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That was a joke regarding memory handling. An object's memory isn't supposed to go beyond a certain scope, if it does, you get an error.
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Im pleasantly surprised you have answer for evertything, you really thought this whole story through. Im amazed about the details
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Trust me, you have nothing to worry about.
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Well, that too. I was more referring to the fact that he went to Barley, and actually talked about what happened. It kinda put a different twist on his personality. Not a bad one by any means, just different than before.
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Yes I am ashamed, but not because the vore.
Its because it's Sentinel. He is the enbodyment of male adolescents becoming an adult. So it's more about identifying with him and his experinces, and the pain of realizing his sexualy might be bit different than other colts. That he has dangerous urges and learning to accept and deal with that fact. I am ashamed only for the fact that I am happy dispite his suffering only because it means he's growing.
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Sentinel is probably the single most complex character to write for.
I have to run everything through so many filters to keep his character a certain way. It requires a tremendous amount of work to manage his complexity.
5100552 exactly
Ripple should meet and train with a chase verse Bruce Lee.
You could call the Chase verse Bruce Lee. Spruce tree.
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Um, actually, I thought about naming Lugus' and Yew's hippogriff Spruce.
Just for that very reason.
i don't see Sentinel doing anything wrong, as Kudz said, he is a predator and for him at "his age" he has mixed ideas and feelings
sexually active Sentinel is going to be fun, now we need to see what he'll do near DT and what he'll do once bucky is home
5100610 heheh. If it hadn't gone over everyone's head, that joke would be pretty funny.
Weird to write? That's most confusing erection I've had in weeks.
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It was hilarious. It's a shame there aren't more of us on this site.
Ah yes...the first wet dream...very lucid, wet dream.
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care to explain?