How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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“I remember when I met my new mother, the last mare my father married. My other mothers pinned her down and twisted her wings to make her submissive so my father could force his way into her as she screamed,”
You got one too many I's there.
This certainly sheds some light on the... Cruelty... Of some ponies on the isles. ()
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good to have lost back
...why is he still alive? I don't care if that's the 'done' thing, what he did can be seen as murder. Guess I'll have to finish him off.
Omg, I find it rather funny that they fear Bucky will break her. I don't care how hung he is in a few months a foal is coming out of there. Ohh, care should be taken, proper lubrication, proper stimulation, and lots of care. But come on ponies, the vagina is a mucle that needs exercise too.
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Less a worry ´bout being able and more a worry ´bout whatmay cause to the poor abused filly if she hurts too much during the act, if i understood correctly. She grew to trust Bucky but it is still a newborn trust, that can vanish pretty fast if they don´t take proper care. And she WILL have a baby, she dindn´t yet. And even Derpy, who had a foal, had problem in their first night.
Kudzu, may i make a question ? I´m starting to feel that Ripple is more adult, or hurt in being a adult, more then appear. Can you say anything ´bout this. Actually, i have the feeling that she is more mature then even Loch....
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Ripple is trapped between. She is a year younger than Loch. She still has moments where she wants to be a foal. But, because of what she has seen, she was forced to grow up far too soon. Now, she can't be an innocent filly foal any more, but she isn't an adult either.
The main difference between her and Loch is that Loch is an introvert and Ripple is an extravert. Loch will occasionally say something, when the mood strikes her, and Ripple will just say whatever is on her mind. Both of them are of about the same as far as maturity goes. One just expresses it more than the other.
The change in the isles are a good thing. It's obvious that quite a bit of what needed to be done has been done. Regardless... I do feel for Bucky. Oh, I'm quite sure that he wants this as much as they do, but his wounds are going to make it difficult. In truth, I'd be surprised if he ever fully recovers. I'd almost expect him to become somewhat like Dr. Gregory House. Brilliant, driven, and consumed by an ancient pain. He does have something that helps with the pain. The mead, the wine, the beer, and any other alcoholic beverage he is able to consume.
Hmmmm... Regardless, I shall enjoy reading what you are writing
Ah, logistics. An essential consideration.
Also, damn. I know life is cheap on the Isles, but you'd think they'd take a little care so as not to help the wolves. Of course, Ripple's father seems like one of the worst of the lot... but he might not be.
In any case, looking forward to more.
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You see that's the problem, there is very weak trust here on the part of Derpy and Berry. They trust each other but not Bucky or Thistle. One of the joys of intercourse is in learning about your partner and yourself, so limiting the experience of others is rather selfish. Which is Derpy's concern, she is projecting her self onto Thistle and deciding what is best for her regardless of the feelings of Thistle or Bucky. I think there should be dialog and Derpy can express her feelings but ultimately it should be Thistle who decideds. Pain is a part of life and no one should fear it, and if care is taken the easing of pain can be quite pleasurable. But to simply deny her the choice no matter what just feels wrong.
Also during pregnancy a females body goes through changes that loosen the vaginal muscles to alow for child birth, it would actually be ideal for Bucky to attempt penetration during this time. It's a rather unique experince, the Vagina is less restrictive but engorged walls are softer. Through this usually in the later stages sex throughout Pregnency is beneficial.
4779396 Nice reply.
You see, Derpy´s is worried ´bout being shelfish herself in that same matter. That´s why she is insisting in having a talk (this appears in, at least, two different occasions in the recent chapters) to set things up. In my opinion, again, in MY point of view, that it´s not necessarily right, bit it is the way i feel, when she says that she may (again, it´s not settled yet, she is still thinking ´bout it) not allow Bucky to go full with Thistle yet that is Derpy thoughts ´bout what she can do to make things easier and less stressfull to her new herd-mate. Mayne, when they talk, things may go in a different way.
I would love to see Thistle stepping up and saying she is able to hold, and she have trust enough in the herd to know that they would not hurt her, in any sense.
Moon Mirror was her name. Before she was married, she liked to fly at night. After she was married, she bled for days. She got infected. She got a fever. She never flew again. Because she died,”
You should maybe think about adding a dark tag with things like this in the story
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I just hope that stuff won't appear too much.
But a good story needs it's dark parts.
And in my opinion it's in just the right amount in this story.
'just dont think about it'
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Goddamn you over-pondering brain.
I don't want to sight the world on fire...
I just want to set their parents on fire
seriosly, what is it with all of them having terrible biological parents?
4784135 I think everyone has terrible biological parents. Except the ones who don't...
Lost chapter time! :D
Hahaha!
Nicely done, nicely done!
And damn I am hating all this crap I learn about how Stallions use Mares >:T bastards.
Nice job.
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