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Didn't see any tpyos, but I had a good laugh at the descriptions of Sparky's voice.
“Coming in soon?”
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Because there's nothing quite like an internal cumshot to unwind at the end of the day.
And nothing like my utter lack of subtlety to ruin any jokes to be made.
.............. so you exchanged sunset becoming a monster because of the element of magic manifesting her inner evil.......... and just made it a demon inside of her?..........
you had to warp and twist and work around a lot of lore to set that up....... and to be honest i can see why. you have come up with a pretty good idea overall....... though ultimately t a price.
by the end of the day this sunset shimmer had it off easier than the show one. reason why is ultimately her evil behavior can be attributed to an entity seperate from herself. she is in fault of letting the demon in, just as luna is in fault. yet the demon manipulating her actions alleviates many counts of that blame. her attempted murder of twilight especially.
she can end the day saying the demon is gone forever.
the sunset of the series had nothing to support her. the demon was not a seperate entity, nor was it part of some deal. it was a manifestation of the evil in her heart, the evil refused to see. she protected herself from it with many layers of delusions and little lies, justifying her cruelty with self entitlement, and isolating herself from others.
after the demon was unleashed, sunset shimmer was completely destroyed. all of her lies were torn away and she was naked and exposed to the elements of the world, helpless and broken. all she had was remorse and self disgust, without even the twisted comfort of knowing that it was a force from without that made her do those evil things.
to lose yourself to another is a terrifying ordeal. to lose to your own demons is even more so.
what you are working with is good, yet it lacks bite compared to what the series sunset shimmer endured.
Wait, when was the Belisama and Barley scene? During the talk Celestia and Sunny set are having?
not sure if that was part of speech pattern or not, but here is a pyto.
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... You realize those two things are typically interchangeable, yes? Especially depending on what theory of demonology you subscribe to. While I will say the initial Bucky-Sunset meeting held more promise than it delivered, I must return to disagreeing with you. This is not a valid point to raise a concern on, as it doesn't change anything with the base character.
It was Sunset's inner evil that led her to compact with dark forces. So... no matter how you look at it, it's the same thing.
5302209 what i meant is that the sunset satan of the movie was sunset's evil let loose out of her own control.......... more so she was a corrupted variant of alicorn. mini comic reveals that she was trying to become an alicorn.
sunset satan here is a seperate entity to sunset shimmer herself. it is a different being that left a bit of tiself inside of her and took over....... my primary issue is that it removes the majority of her guilt in these events. she was wrong to let the demon in yet cannot be heald fulyl responsible for its actions.
however in evil within sunset shimmer, she was just wrong period. everything she told herself, the lies and delusions and self service, torn away violently in an instant and leaving her a fragile, ruined form in a crater. she might not have actually killed someone, but she was pretty much destroyed that day. and become all the stronger for it.
5302209 simly saying that it just feels weaker in comparison to one another. sunset was left with no one to blame and nothing to protect her from reality. sunset in this story had some comfort in knowing that the evil thta was set loose was a seperate entity.
will admit the idea DOES work. it does. and how it has been portrayed works in the story. however it is at rather steep price with what characterization sunset can be given here, and perhaps it is a bit of personal disappointment that the sunset we saw at the end of rainbow rocks will not be making an appearance. more so it clashes pretty strongly with rainbow rocks as well. and that is the method they are using to get her back to equestria to begin with.
sighs. maybe i was just expecting a very different portrayal. i was expecting to see sunset shimmer we saw in rainbow rocks returning to equestria to help heal it..... sunset shimmer i got is so far fairly characterized yet at the same time....... sighs.
5302288 ............. see the comparison....
Thanks for dealing with the pain and pumping out another chapter. I love what you are doing here, there are just so many things going on at once. I love the complexity, and that your characters develop with logic. And that you basically encourage conspiricary theories by constantly reminding us that no pony is what they appear to be necessarily.
I'm starting to get voices in my head for each character.
Bucky- Victor Freis (In Armor- Mr. Freeze) [Arkham City]
Barley- Sheogorath [The Elder Scrolls]
Sentinel- Button Mash (Though a more serious interpretation of the voice)
Belisama- Aela the Huntress [Skyrim]
Lugus- Ulfric Stormcloak [Skyrim]
All other characters have either generic head voices, or their voices from the show.
5302297 Oh look, you made a second account. That or you and that guy shop at the same idea store. Hell, even your pics are the same. I call fishy business.
What's up with your fingers? I don't remember reading anything about it.
5302514 ..........the fuck are you talking about. i am not the only guy back there that was finding the whole gunpowder thing an unrealistic situation to deal with............ and why would i be bringing it up again?
more so he is shouting like a lunatic rather than articulating a thought.
5302544 Fair enough, though you're rather bad about being too overly negative. Honestly if that's how criticism is suppose to work then it's a dying medium. People have started seeing critiquing as a pass time for entertainment, but it's lost a lot of respectability because people like you lack the ability to at least seem understanding. Wanna stop being called a troll? Lighten up.
5302514 Umm, just so you know/don't remember, that is the default pic for new users, some ppl (myself especially) are too lazy to upload a pic/look for one they like. Actually, I might do that now...
5302563 It's pretty easy, I mean, I figured it out so there's your evidence. :P Go for it mate.
900,000 words!!!
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Now that I think about it, Rising is now connected to primal fire magic, like molten magma. It actually makes some kind of sense that he would find rocks attractive.
5302575 Well, the hardest part was remembering where my computer put the picture after scanning it to the laptop. Now I wonder why I never trie to upload a pic before.
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Because picking a silly picture may leave a terrible impression on others that will follow you for years to come? Just spitballing.
If only you had a dollar for every word...
So... The sound of rocks can be seductive? Sounds like a fetish.
I'm guessing sentinel will be going with DT on one of her session soon...
5302676 That picture is actually the one and only time I've tried to draw any of the characters from the show. I am a terrible artist and I know it, but I will not use someone else's work for myself, even if it's an avatar. (Note: I have no hostility even if it may seem like it, I am just a very verbose person.) Edit: And I am officially so tired I'm stupid, rereading your comment allows me to see that you were talking about why I never uploaded before, not my current pic.
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Rheumatoid arthritis.
Very glad to see Celestia and Sunset reconcile, and to see that Celestia is willing to make her own decisions. Autonomy can be scary after so long being given the answers, but she'll get by with a little help from her friends. Both of them are growing up.
Also, character growth all around. And I'm glad to see someone respects doctor-patient confidentiality, even if the doctor himself doesn't.
Looking forward to more.
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And now I'm imagining Maud Pie trying to seduce Sparkler.
Drop the s.
I call bullshit. Celestia knew exactly where the Elements were hidden, because she was the one who hid them. If she didn't, she wouldn't have sent Twilight to Ponyville.
Sadly, from my own experience, that's not always the case. Someone I know - or knew, better said - developed an eating disorder. I visited her - before, when our other "friends" found her too boring to be around any longer, and after she got into a clinic - and called her whenever she was allowed to use the phone. But no, after she finished the therapy, I dissolved into air for her, and the other "friends" took over again.
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Well, she did know where they were, but not how to use or reactivate them. She wasn't connected to them anymore.
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Despite being disconnected, Celestia knew exactly what it took to use the Elements. What did she want Twilight to do while she was in Ponyville? She wanted her student to make friends. Not because Twilight's an asocial bookworm who needed to get kicked out for the day, but because she knew that friendship was the key in using and reactivating the Elements.
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Tia and Luna took the Elements from the Tree. Don't know what they had to do to get them, if they just had to pick them up or if they had to go through trials like the Main Six did. But I guess our dear Lord of Chaos made sure they didn't have it easy. And maybe helped them unintentionally by doing so.
Twilight had to reactivate them and create the Element of Magic with the infamous spark.
But generally, you're right.
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That would be amazing and complicate/strengthen Bucky's family frankentree even more!
5303068 I'm sorry. I wish there was something you could do.
5305766 Alright, say Florida is just made of refugees from cuba and cuba no longer exists and is just a snowy tundra. Yes, he's pretty much king of Florida. :I
we had passed the 900K mark
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Speaking of Animorphs, this chapter was also something i highly enjoyed reading.
Most Excellent.