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In the distant future, Twilight conquers most of the known world, and does so without once having to harm one single sapient creature.
Simply /)^3^(\
Dude, keep it up.
Serriously, do keep it up. The more you post the closer I get to hugging you. No jokes.
HUGS FOR THE GOOD AUTHOR!!! BONE CRUSHING HUGS OF ADMIRATION WITH A SHARP TWINGE OF JEALOUSY 'CAUSE I SUCK AT WRITING!
I'm very surprised this story isn't more popular than it is. (Based on the total number of ratings, anyway.) Might be because of the sex rating? I dunno.
Can I be taken prisoner to please it sounds so great in ponyvil capital of the world
LOOOOVE IT!
(Also congrats on being featured again!)
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Chapters like these are like candy to my soul.
I love you I love you I love you I love you
4397391 Come to the dark side, we have beer, backrubs, and of course, cookies.
i am waiting for Bucky to snap and totally dominate those two (Not rape, but taking charge) showing that he is not as weak as they would like to think.... just my thoughts cause that would be really cool to see.
So, if mares hold all the power, and she married into the house, the she has no power. Am I right in saying there are no other mares?
Because that means they can't get Celestia to do a thing, most likely the same with the other houses.
As for just getting rid of her, maybe Celestia should have, to show the others the crown has real power and no time for those idiots.
I'm totally going to steal this someday.
That pony pile was adorable.
Berry and Bucky are sooooo screwed now.
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Aaah the dreaded Twilight Prison Camps, where prisoners engage in brutal combat to settle which one of them is interrogated first.
Where the only Law is in the hooves of the ruthless wardens that punish bad behavior with complete lack of back rubs for three days!
Where substance abuse is high and the dreaded Sweet Apple Acres Cider flows aplenty.
Truly, tis one of the most adorkable times in Equestrian history.
4397391 Let The Friendship Princess conquer all the lands xD, but nice chapter <33 and my god poor bucky and berry. Derpy can be outright scary if she wants to x3
4397904 It'll happen...
and when it does I will be shouting from the rooftops.
Yeah, nothing most noted for having long, thin, pointy bits should be used as a base. Long, thin, non-pointy bits, also known as columns, can work, but not pointy ones.
Is that a standard Poissaww distribution?
On the subject of pony particles these pictures may interest you. Well, the ones that aren't of Ferengi.
As for the chapter, pegasus erections honestly frighten me a little. And make me wonder if Derpy had a crush on Applejack when she crushed Town Hall.
Meanwhile, it's good to see Celestia suck it up. I guess Primrose has that effect on ponies. Besides, it should be hard to intimidate someone who's lived for centuries and remembers every sordid detail of your family's history.
Looking forward to more.
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New chapter incoming.
Cadance on train with Celestia discussing herd marriage.
Here you go, free
cracksample to hold you over.4398351
4399077 YES MORE CRACK...err...story...um...
*turns aside and dumps the chapter sample into a pipe, and smokes it*
Another story that I read (Cultural Artifacts) has the protagonist believing that Celestia will kill him if he hurts Celestia's ponies. In an earlier post, I contemplated asking the question "Why doesn't Celestia just gather all of the members of House Avarice and Clan Pickled in one place, then drop a miniature sun in the middle of the gathering?" I wonder now, maybe I wasn't too far off.
not a complete fan of this chapter. Mostly because of the description on pegasi. it kind of annoyed me. However, the story is still great.
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What exactly was the problem?
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to be honest, the description was sound but i disliked it. in all honesty, mostly this:
I honestly feel sorry for Bucky. I couldn't have a relationship where i'm being tossed around like a doll by a woman whenever she pleases. If i was a colt and THAT applied to pegasus, i'd be a unicorn or earth pony chaser.
this is merely my opinion and i decided to voice it. I'm not hating the story whatsoever. I did like how Sparkler called him dad. That made me smile wide. I just didn't like that tidbit of information there.
I just took had to take a break in the middle of my read-a-thon to tell you how much I have enjoyed this story so far. I give it 5 s, 3 , and a .
But seriously though, wow have things escalated since my last "read-a-thon" through the first ten chapters. I must admit, much of the (implied and not-so-implied) sexuality caught me off guard (how is it that I keep missing that little sex warning?) IT IS NOT A BAD THING.
Your physiological and psychological descriptions are pretty interesting, but the biggest thing that made this story stand out to me (besides now we have a war on our hooves) is the inclusion of polyamory into the culture of MLP, supporting it with the sex ratio imbalances and basic survival instincts then having a whole history built around this aspect of pony life. With all the world that you built with the murders and ponies declaring war and unfair treaties, Equestria doesn't really seem like the cheerful utopia that some other stories try to portray it. Makes for an interesting read.
As for Berry's actions, I think she did not need to attack Bucky's mother. I was absolutely mortified when that happened, but now I am going to see how this "war" will unfold. I also felt that Berry was standing on a bit too big of a soapbox when she was on the train ride home, but part of how you wrote it saying she "ranted" made me think that it was intentional. I was beginning to think it was getting a little preachy.
With all that said, this has been one of the most engaging fics I have read since I joined. I will keep my eye on this one.
(Also, is a gassy girl, isn't she? That and her "naughty words" make me )
I've noticed a pattern that I absolutely love. First, a very detailed explanation of pony physiology, and then how that causes riotous laughter. You explanation of the wing-boner could've appeared in a textbook. And I still can't get over the Royal Canterlot Belch.
4397469 Good, good, use that jealousy to make the hug tighter, constrict your prey, steal from them precious air... and don't forget to nuzzle. Muzzle to neck contact is essential.
'You have daddy' -> a daddy
Whelp, there goes my snuggle theory...right out the window along with my Nobel Prize...
42 chapters down and it gets better with everyone love your work !
That author's note...
I demand diagrams!
On a side note, I'm not sure why, but my headcanon is that PLSS is part of the Chaseverse.
“It wouldn’t bother me if Piña called you daddy,”Berry said, collapsing down on top of Bucky’s barrel and crushing him
She pressed her face into her mother’s neck inhaled deeply, smelling her mother’s scent
1. Forgot your spacing. Also, possibly implying that Berry is fat?
2. Forgot your comma here.
I... Uhh...
4397391 ...Is it at all odd that I can actually see that happening in canon?
I cracked up twice during this chapter, which is quite an achievement for its size.
Make me cry and you're the best god damn writer on this site.
He sounds like a lovable chap~
Can you teach me this oh so wonderful thing?
Nice chapter man, hehehehe eue
...Welp, RIP Bucky's pony-making bone.
Nothing burns quite like the sun.
the shear fact that you can give a believable and biological reason for a Wing Boner makes you God plain and simple
7494066 he'll if it's alright with the writer I might just use that it's bloody brilliant
Now I'm wondering what the angle of repose for ponies is.
So bucky gonna get the toast with cheese i see.
"Hush Nail, I'm speaking for you"