How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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Earth Ponies spend their free time writing horse erotica , also can't Moona help Berry ?
Should be "have".
Salutes No excuses, Captain! I have just been slacking on my hunt. I feel I'm not blood thirsty enough, sir! Permission to torture myself through physical fitness?
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Or maybe it should be sexed, crazed maniacs
Now I'm forced to wonder just how large these wyverns are.
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About twenty five feet for the male...
A little larger for the female.
Should be 'before we head out', I believe.
Looking forward to the upcoming hunt
I love your usual write style and, in my shit opinion, I think there are moments that will require a return to the old ways...but this style is IMMENSILY more fluid and organic.
5496137 Can you give me volume, as well as length and wingspan? Your measure of 25 feet was not specific.
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Wingspan would probably be about twenty feet on the male. Long slender body. Think big long skinny lizard with wings for front legs.
it's not a bad writing style but i honestly prefer your other one more. it gripped me more, made it harder to look away and easier to ignore my brother.
I never claimed to be a good person.
Ah, yes, the benefits and risks of the pony and birdy pile...
Sometimes, you get your muzzle pounded and the other time, you get your pound muzzled.
5496172 You missed a wonderful opportunity to say Volume: Loud
I feel this new writing style a bit more descriptive i guess. I realised you write rather gruesome dreams (the frozed to death the whole family, get eaten by another pony, and now getting teared apart alive while seeing your own kid killed)
Also i like that not everyone accepting the ideas Bucky and his family holding, and they give voice for their opinions. Its makes everything more realistic in my opinion
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Are we talking like Yian Kutku, Yian Garuga, or Rathalos & Rathian style wyverns? Or any other wyverns from Monster Hunter that might fit the bill?
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I don't know enough about any of what you said to answer. None of that is familiar to me.
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Yian Kut-Ku
leguideduhunter.fr/mhf2/bestiaire/kutku/yian_kut-ku.png
Yian Garuga
img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140902020152/monsterhunter/images/d/db/FrontierGen-HC_Yian_Garuga_Render_001.png
Rathalos & Rathian
i.imgur.com/9mOwv.jpg
5496255 I hope you find these helpful then. http://monsterhunter.wikia.com/wiki/Rathian http://monsterhunter.wikia.com/wiki/Rathalos http://monsterhunter.wikia.com/wiki/Yian_Garuga http://monsterhunter.wikia.com/wiki/Yian_Kut-Ku
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I find both writing styles to be good.
Your original style is more personable, more "in-the-moment", that's what makes your characters so memorable, because we are RIGHT THERE with their thought processes.
IF it has a downside (big IF), it would be that it 'takes up more space', as it were. It takes more words to write.
This new one is broader, more descriptive. It has atmosphere and really sets the scene.
The only potential issue I see with it (again, another big IF) is that it is more detached from the characters.
Instead of seeing it through their eyes, we're seeing it from a stage.
My opinion in summary, if you are so inclined:
This new style is good for the big stuff; environments, settings, large-scale events.
Your old style is good for the small stuff; the one-on-one interactions, thought processes, Bucky's dreams/nightmares/ethereal travels.
Even if you only stick with one style, I'll still read.
Hope this helps.
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Both can be merged.
I was wondering why this chapter felt different until I read the authors note. I agree that it's a bit cleaner but I rather enjoy your other writing style. It flows well with how I read and I forget I'm even reading.
I am enjoying this style of writing. I took notice of it a few paragraphs in.
I believe the correct spelling is 'ordinance'.
As of right now I have read 1/2 of this massive story.
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An i am a mere week behind. Lets see if i can over take you hmm?
7205503 and I a week behind you.
7231870 And I almost 6 months behind you.