How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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...what is up with pony slang?
4468322
I don't understand your question exactly.
What pony slang and in what context?
And now I dont feel so hungry anymore.
Should Derpy and Berry be drinking? I mean, given all the sex on their honeymoon night plus the spell Cadence put on them to make them be in heat, wouldn't all this alcohol be detrimental to the (albeit very early) developing foals?
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They don't know.
And they would still be single celled at this point I do believe.
4468364
What happened?
4468382 Just have a very strong gag reflex and i was eating /reading this at the same time.
I'm just squeamish is all.
hilarious
side?
That's it. I'm done being mature about this.
Another chapter woo hoo!
Does berry puns doe
4468499
Meh, ewe have nothing to complain about.
As always awesome chapter. freaking hilarious, can't wait for the next one
I have two children (7 and 2 years old) and the very prospect of being in the same situation just make my blood frost. Sure, modern pareting and all, great to read and watch in discovery channel, not so easy when it´s in the real life, with you (me) and in the middle of a crowded restaurant...
I´ll probably remember this chapter when the moment comes to me. Sure, being the social innept i am, i´ll scatt and tremble, but, at least, i have a good example here to follow....
I defy anyone to look at this and say that this isn't love.
4468564
The whole chapter or specific parts?
Love this take on Berry good work waiting, not patiently, but waiting.
4468499 They are Berry punny.
4468502 im not, its just... ughhh they are everywhere
4468502
Yeah, they're not a baa'd thing.
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If we keep this up, we'll have to go on the lamb.
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Awe, you bleat me to it.
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Shear luck on my part.
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Well, there's no pulling the wool over your eyes, is there?
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If we keep this up, people will beg us to fleece stop,
4468764
Wow, way to ram the point home...
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Sorry about that.
Well, with Bucky and Berry heading back to the Isles, the lamb will lie down with the loin...
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I'm sure you're just making a mutton out of a molehill.
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You ain't got the chops.
Or the mint jelly.
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I'll bet you think you caught me a sheep at the wheel.
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Perhaps you should go get some fresh aries.
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Tell that to Commander Shepard...
4468812
Still ruminating on your crimes I see.
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Meh, I am still on tup of this contest.
4468875
You should be a comedian. The crowds would just flock to you.
This is a great premise, and reminds me strongly of the cultural misconceptions I experienced with my wife when we first me (she is Taiwanese, I am European). There are many actions or signals that can be misinterpreted by people in different cultures, whether european/asian or unicorn/pegasi.
My only complaint would be that you seem to have focussed on the positive aspects of pegasi/earth pony culture, and the negative ones of unicorn culture. I'm sure all three should have their own positives and negatives. Unicorns, for example - much like Asian culture! - would likely favour the Family over individuals (hence arranged marriages) and have a greater respect for teachers, academia and knowledge.
All in all, though, a good take on the inter-tribe conflicts and misunderstandings, and I particularly like your take on Celestia's very long-term plans.
...puts down sharpened, red stained knife. 'The hell are you looking at? Just what he deserves.'
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So I slipped it in there.
4469996
Thank you so much.
When you hit the troubling spots, please, keep going. I assure you, it is worth it.
The Berry puns get me every time for some odd reason. Oh yeah, puns are !
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She is Berry pleased to hear you say that.
4473742 I'm Berry glad to hear that.
A nice transition chapter, though the amount of basking in warm fuzzies—bordering on wallowing, really—makes me worried about just how bad the upcoming arc is going to be by comparison.
Still, looking forward to more. Especially if the happy herd can act as an agent of change.
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If you mean what I think you mean, that was a case of kudzuhaiku doing one of the things he does best: milk unusual genitalia euphemisms for all they're worth.
Seriously, kudzu, you remember how much trouble I had when you were using "snoot" in serious scenes? Yeah, triple that for the "woo woo"/"hoo hoo" issue. It's certainly a novel way to keep the story from being bogged down by the sudden serious matters.
4473824
Well, foal talk.
Somehow, it seemed appropriate coming out of Dinky's mouth.
The original drafts had 'penis' and Dinky stuttering over the word 'vagina' a few times.
4473824
And snoot is an actual anatomical term for horses.
Like frog. And coffin bone.
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I am not questioning the validity of the term. I am simply noting that it sounds silly. Snoot.
One question, at the wedding, Cadence made Berry and Derpy go into heat, yes?
If so, wouldn't they be pregnant by now and if so alcohol would be a very bad thing for them.
Hope this isn't the plan...
Yay mature stuff. Also. Woo woo and hoo hoo? I literally had ot get up and walk away for a few minutes lest i burst out laughing causing other i live with to stare at me like i'm some kind of crazy person.
...more than they normally do that is.
To close -> too close
4737154 yes, just yes, finally someone who knows what i go through XD