How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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Lovely as always keep up the good work :3
And now I ALMOST feel sorry for the wolves and their master. Anyway, that is possibly one of the best lines ever.
not much to say about this chapter, is it safe for pregnant mares to be carried though?
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Sure, everything important was being well supported.
Agreed, that last line was gloriously ominous.
4754627 oki doki!
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While I am indeed glorious, that line was nothing like me.
Ugh, this story deserves more attention and views. Alot more....I mean thousands.
If anyone ever asks me about a good fic I swear il point to The Chase.
Cause imma bitch imma lover im child
The Scorned Mare...
Brilliant, sir.
You know I'd honestly feel sorry for whoever is behind the wolves right now if it weren't for the fact that Derpy already promised she'd kill them right off instead of putting them through the pain.
And yet another wonderful chapter from our dearest Kadzu... now.. moar!
.......please?
It is a shame that I can only give this story one up vote. Whenever I finish reading a new chapter I instinctively want to give it another up vote.
Lil' typo.
Keep up the good work! Looking forward to reading your new story soon
Brace yourselves.....
As I read this I have a thought. Something Luna said in one of Bucky's dreams. What if the one controlling the wolves is an alternate Bucky? Seriously... What if this is a Bucky that has discovered other worlds, Other universes... Would Derpy be able to do what she said she would? Could she kill him? It would be Bucky, different life, different choices, but still him. I think... I think that she would break down. Seeing someone she loves so completely, so totally, and knowing that he is the cause of the problem.
I doubt that it's an alternate version of him, but damn if that idea doesn't give me the shivers.
Major Typo.
"Berry in particular was intriguing and Berry distracting."
Nope, no typos this time, well that I could spot at any rate. As to the name of the ship, I like it.
4754659 Somepony is full of himself!
4755626 No, that's a running gag throughout the fic. Whenever Berry is very something, it is replaced with berry.
This is the one story that I will suggest to tons of people no matter what annd despite all of its features, it doesn't seem like it's had enough love! This chapter feels a little bit like a filler, but you do filler chapters like The Last Avatar so I have no problem with that.
4755535 yeah, that's something I noticed as well. She said alt Bucky left, but she never said where. I'm sure it's not important. Not like there's ever been foreshadowing of major events in this fic before...
My thoughts upon reading the last line: "Hi wolves! You have just instigated your own mugging, come on down!!!"
o-o
I don't think it helps that I was listening to the nightmare fuel version of Rainbow Factory when I read that last line.
DEAR FAUST I AM SCARED!
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XD
A message to any shadow wolves that might be listening.
Be afraid. Be very, very afraid
Rising Star wiped the sweat from his face with his foreleg. He ceased the flow of magic and dropped a large log on the ground.
hehehe
also, what I thought after finishing this chapter
4757123 When kreig gets scared...
shits gotten real serious.
Only one thing left to say:
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Bucky was already beating hasty retreat
1. Isn't it supposed to be; Beating A hasty retreat?
My god that last line
That's so neat! :D
I uh... I have to go change my pants... and stuff >.>''''
Awesome chapter!
And an awesome name!
I squeed in delight when i read this line. It made unreasonably happy, and i know why.
6548417 i, too, need to find a different pair of pants.
6548417 Me to if you know what i mean
Wink wink
Sorry i'll be going now
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You mean to say they haven't already? Hang on a sec, lemme do some math...
Derpy = mare who kicked the ass of the Isle's de facto ruler
Berry = mare who declared war on Bucky's mom, then absolutely wrecked her
(Derpy + Berry) * Inner Bitch + Scorned...
*stares at projected result of equation* ...Remind me again what Bucky and the rest are contributing to this fight?
Somewhere within the keep, Keg Smasher suddenly broke down in an inexplicable case of shivers, cringes, and whimpers.
And this line just ensured pain for the wolfs
And anything else that ticks them off
...
*voids bowels in sheer terror*