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I have to say. You do an extremely good Pinkie Pie. That was almost crazy enough to be the real one.
Unless.....
I bet Bucky would love himself a Slice of Pie... If you know what I mean.
but an invisible (forced) held him in place [force]
Pinkie's not joining the herd, is she?
5052042
Oh Goddess no.
NO MORE WIVES!
Pinkie Pie is spoken for.
Hmmm I wonder if Bucky's herd is going to have the same problem of marriage proposals from all manner of ponies? Some would jut because they want a piece of the new aristocracy. But I think it would be just as likely that like Trixie, Bucky's herd has many admirers. I'm sure that Rising Star would also have that problem. Kind of curious if there are any Stallions pining for the various mares in the herd.
5052085
And risk pissing off The Geldinator?
5052088
Hey Rising Star had barely a chance to play the field, I'm sure some mare out there is resentful of the way Sparkler stole him away. Also ponies will do CRAZY things for a chance at love.
5052142
Well, there was that Apple family whorse who tried to steal him away in the beginning...
5052159
Hey Sparkler and he weren't a thing yet, not that mare's fault Sparkler couldn't sort out her feelings. I say there a case for resentment there.
too pretty to miss?
Best Pinkie. Best.
Gosh...Pinkie Pie managed to make ME dizzy ! Poor herd...
5052300
And a sprawling farmhouse.
5052302 Don´t forget that Hogwarts does not have a destillary. And i´m pretty much sure that the fine art of brew and drink will be a class in Bucky´s school....take that, Harry Potter !!!!
5052373
It used to be a distillery. Berry stripped it, remember, and it was abandoned? In the beginning of the story, she goes out to visit the old farmhouse and the old distillery.
The brick structure was good, but everything inside had rotted out.
5052386 But Bucky did some brew...it was in a different place ?
5052395
The new brewery, thoroughly modern, located in Ponyville.
5052074 Aww. That'd be hilarious.
Also I have this odd vision of Pinkie teaching Pina about the mysterious fourth wall. Meta jokes ahoy!
5052610
I'm giving the READERS what they want Pina... and you should too!
Buh bye, I am gonna go perform sexual acts with the taffy puller!
5052614 ...That sounds remarkably painful.
HAVE FUN!
5052687
Thunderlane. Why does everybody forget Thunderlane already has a role in this story and two wives.
5052687
Also... challenge. I want to make Flash Sentry something interesting.
I made Berry Punch more than the stupid town drunk.
I figure I can work with Flash and recreate him.
Someone had that theory that anything anyone passes off as random Pinkie nonsense is the universe covering up whatever Truths she's trying to convey.
Sort of like dealing with someone in Background Pony. If that was the case, that scene with Pinkie and Bucky seems a bit creepy.
5052690
Because the last time he was mentioned was like two hundred chapters ago. Why would you question we'd forget the status of a minor character after two hundred-ish chapters? D:
5052692
More like create. Fandom's given /TOM/ more personality than him.
5052817
I love it when people catch references!
5052836
I was tempted to post two vids. I don't think your audience can handle that many fart jokes though.
5052817
5052836
George Carlin is one of the greatest men who ever lived. Thanks for this reference.
I nominate that we add Pinkie to Bucky's herd.
All those with me, tag this comment and say aye.
Those against, say nothing.
if anyone is compeltely immune to the so called threads of fate miss cosmic pants is messing with, it is pinkie. she is just too random.
yep there is your secret weapon bucky. just lock miss cosmic pants in a room with pinkie and she iwll surrender.
seriousness aside, i have a gut feeling that pinkie is gonna give bucky no end of grief. and i will love every second of it.
5052998
I second that motion with a loud AYE!!!
.......... if there truly is one thing i can say is kinda off about your story is that those whole biology facts kinda just......... pop out of nowhere. often times it is kinda awkward. when you are seeing something from someone's point of view your information on events is normally limited to what they know and what they can see and interact with. so how would a foal know that batponies were resistant to motion sickness? the part suddenly completely detaches from the point of view to spout some factor yet known, sometimes things like lyra being addicted to bon bon in a literal sense which bon bon had no clue about. bringing up a plot point that, to be honest, could have been revealed in another way than just saying it.
with the factors brought up............ more hits than misses but still hit and miss. while there are some itnersting concepts, like the dark magic and will thing though i am sitll lsightly confused on the what harmony magic is and what love magic would be in comparison.
others are just rather bizaare. especially things like earth ponies relying on pegasi, when they are likely strong enough to wreck buildings, and bon bon being a prime specimen of her species cause she is literally oozes love drugs. also that whole pegasus armor thingy is just out of place i think. why could they resist weather condition? magic seems a plausible answer since, well...... their flight is magic.
can't help but think there are some missed opportunities to expand on what each species can do. like if a pegasus can create cloud from water, or if a earth pony can concentrate on some ground and cause the vegetation to rapidly grow or even if they could learn to transfer that life filled energy into another pony to heal them.
basically you focus a lot on the biology yet rarely reference the fact they are magical for the most part.
5053245
The lost chapters with her would be ridiculous. In the best way.
... I also second the motion.
5052998 AYE!!! ... it's not gonna happen though. No mane six will be mainstream in the Chase except Twilight.
5053674
Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. We don't know that. It's up to the author in the end.
5052998 Perhaps you should re-read the comments on this chapter, mainly number 6.
5052998 kudzu said no more wives when they tried to nominate Trixie into the herd.
Was good update thank you
so, 4 days seems to be the turnaround time with this story. I kept forgetting bits. Even forgot Barley was a unicorn so I reread everything. Of course that was 4 days of literally reading, going to work, and reading some more. I wish I knew how to speed read, but then again that's not what stories are for. There was no sleep. now it's nearly 6 AM and I need to go to work again. <3 Kudzuhaiku! keep writing the awesomeness.
Pinkie...
everyone is making fart jokes and trying to put pinkie in with the lot and I'm just sitting here thinking about ponies eating eggs (bon bon was cooking eggs and tomatoes)
Without*
Pink Menace? Where? I did not read about humans, but only pony.
5111100 egg eating ponies is show cannon
Ha, I am owed money. Also, waaaaaaah, what was Bucky thinkin?!?! My brain literally had to reboot when I read that paragraph.
I SHIP IT!
Awesome chapter man, you write an awesome Pinkie Pie! :D hahahaha!
Nice going.
Nothing like a one in the morning game of Twister,” Rising Star mumbled
I KNOW RIGHT!?!?
Feeling kind of nauseous, Sentinel hoped that Pinkie would stop spinning around soon. Round and round she spun, lifting up up and swinging him up and down. And then, as suddenly as it started, it was over and Sentinel found himself on the sofa.
hasn't been edited yet. but is two ups needed?