How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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I am not even going to point out what I think are important parts. From what I have seen so far, EVERYTHING is important!
ok, i am still not 100% sure you are not a bot. Being sick is a human thing yes... but bots also can be sick im onto you kadu
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I abandoned looking for John Connor some time ago. Found ponies.
4977927 when everything is important... nothing is
4977958 oh god... im imagining arnold swartzasomething saying "bring me da loona doll"
You should take a break and get some rest. Writing is probably not helping you.
That said, things might look bleak right now, but I've got a feeling they'll turn around.
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I dunno, see, I don't think things look that bleak. Help is coming. Bucky is alive. Many deaths were prevented. Harper is showing signs of being terminally adorable and maybe a bit persnickety when crossed. Two sisters take comfort in knowing that their brother is there to comfort them. Ripple has stopped living in fear. Rising Star has resumed being a doofus.
More importantly, Bucky has an ally for what is to come.
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It's the calm before the storm and your storms break modern classifications.
OK, let´s go check the list:
Rising Star: Depression and anger, maybe even bipolar. Loooooooooooooooooow self-steem.
Sparkler: The Shivers. I bet i can make a good movie out of this. "This summer, in a theather near you....THE SHIVERS !!!!" Sucess for sure.
Dinky: There is depression and there is Dinky´s level of depression. Nothing deeper.
Piña: Did i say "nothing deeper" ? Scratch that...now we have Piña´s level of depression. Even worse ´cause it´s cute. It´s aCUTE depression. Got it ?
Sentinel: There is somethign really wrong with a herd when the more sane member is a eat-devouring blood-licking monster from the night.
Ripple: I SO want to s-ee someone trying to make a move to get her, not knowing that Ripple is already married. "Hey, beauty, nice flan...i mean, cutie mark. What does it mean ?" Ripple punchs a hole in a nearby tree without even looking at it. "Means i can kill with my bare hooves...oh, look, nice trick with your balls...i did not know they could shrink that much !"
Moonbow: Nice, first threat your husband to be in being...well, your husband to be. Then make him love you dearly. Now broke the poor guy´s heart going to the special forces. Can we throw her out of the ship ? With an anchor in her neck ?
Grimglammer: Everyting Bucky´s herd touch become shaggable. EVERYTHING !!!! Hey, now that i think ´bout that statement....Luna was their first victim !!!! Oh gosh, Ponyville will have a super-population in 10 years tops...
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Any chance we can get to see Ripple Smash her "Fathers" face in before they leave the islands?
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No. Sorry. She's better than that.
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Scare him?
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Luna.
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The depression and anger is new, but the low self esteem has been going on for longer than just this arc though, and you can think of the other stuff being at least somewhat caused by it, probably.
4977927 It's true. Everything is IMPORTANT. EVERY. SINGLE. TEENY. TINY. DETAIL. How do you do it kudz?
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Lots of notes.
4978216 Thank you.
4978198 Not sure i agree with you. In the beginning he was very foolish and without worries. I don´t remeber any signs of low self-steem but, even so, it was a very slightly thing....now is tartarus-deep...i can forsee some bad insecurity coming his way soon. Even worse, he may do somethhing very stupid on order to prove himslef worth of his herd, hurting badly in the process...
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It was fairly subtle in the beginning. Way back when he was meeting Sparkler, she gets very pushy and conflicted about him, and jerks him around a little, and he just accepts it like he should be happy about a girl that's more thoughtful than most proving she cares by being pushy. While it's worked out pretty well for him, someone with confidence doesn't warm up to someone who is pushy and aggressive and fickle like that automatically, especially not without pushing back a little or getting into arguments.
At the time I said nothing because literally every male got the same treatment from the females, Bucky's pushed around because of his neuroses, Thunderlane was constantly reminded how dumb he was and he just kinda dopily nodded his head, Filthy was an emotional wreck and overcompensating to act like he's a bigshot and in charge because of his wife leaving him and his daughter bullying him, so I figured it was a "pony vs human" thing that the author was trying to get through that stallions are all really submissive, but after a broader perspective, with males that are not pushovers, it seems more like he has a start that indicates he doesn't have a strong self-esteem.
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Ding ding ding!
Winner winner chicken dinner!
4978270 Correct me if i´m wrong: maybe this something related to the Canterlot social system (even in Ponyville the system was still there, shadowing all the relationships ?) whie, in The Isles, the things were different, since they weren´t under such system ?
So many tidbits...
still loving your story keep it up
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my sides its too much oh god on that note... ill be back...for the next chapter
After ever page in my essay, I hop into reddit, check new messages, and hop here to check new chapters. I cant get enough :)
Also, Im going to shoot and say that Moonbow is *not* going to join the guards because she has that early-Thistle of needing foals, so she wants to spend time with Sentinel.
“There is more deer outside..."
There are more deer outside
"alive, and the the next moment I just want to lay down"
alive, and the next moment I just want to lay down
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half the site is banned from
Scootalookooarbiter, baby4978653
No, no. "is" is the right verbe tense. There was only one deer that Lugus returned with so when the dialogur says "deer" it's referring to deer meat.
4978653 no he is talking about the deer meat.
So it is right.
4978875 Oh I see.
I read it as Grimglammer wanting to hunt more deer outside.
More questions to answer in the future! Keep 'em comin', I can handle it!
Lol when Harper was like no MAMA!!!
Aaaand one last refresh before sleep. That feeling having to get up early so your professor can make fun of your morning face
I would love to see a chapter from Harper's point of veiw.
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Why is mama so lazy? And this mama, and that mama, and that mama over there, oh, and that mama that makes the music... MAMA!
4980401 Hahaha that made me laugh
Little Harper is so adorable. that scene reminded me of Baby Dinosaur from a 90's tv show; "Not the Mama!".
Kudzu's dead yu guis. Confirmed bcuz he didnt post 2 chaptrs in on dae.
(No but for serious where is our second daily dose of Chase)
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I is dead. Much dead, very rigor mortis.
Important bits indeed, noted! All of your foreshadowing/hints is ridiculous and you should feel proud Kudzu.
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Ahh
I'm starting like rising more and more. :D
Fan-art commin' right up.
And Bucky... I expected him to be more... "Awake"...
Also, can sentinel go into his sisters dreams?
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He will eventually.
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I think he meant that there is more of the deer he caught left for the others to take. In that sense, 'There is more deer outside' is actually correct.
Foreshadowing! Foreshadowing I tell ya!
I know I'm a little late to the party, but seeing quite a few posts about your health lately makes me concerned. I really do hope you get better. And soon.
Typo:
"and the the next moment"
One too many "the"s
I can't believe no one made this reference
Thistle said .
1. Again, my personal thing.
I wonder if it's appropriate to say that they stopped the landslide but now stepped into a room full of dynamite...
Another well done chapter, nicely done dude!
SENTINEL IS BEAN! IS BEST!
Nice.
4977961 That's deep...
#Smosh 8D
Harper that was so cute.