How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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4801755 Yes, but their initial plan didn't involve this. Best in this situation is not to bind herself I think. But it is your story. I just feel like its not fair to rising at all. If sparkler falls in love with another pony do they get added to the herd, even if the others don't feel the same way?
Again it's an excellent chapter, and part of me wonders exactly what's going to go through Bucky's mind. Another part of me wonders how he'll react toward Celestia and Luna when everything is said and done. Don't get me wrong, I understand that they did what needed to be done for his own good, but then again... how many would be saviors have said the same thing. How many have said that what they were doing was for someone's good, and it ended up changing them, but not always for the good?
Yes... Everything seems to be changing... and that said... I believe this says it just as well as I could.
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There is the option of having her cheat on her fellow herd members.
She was married in and for quite some time, she will continue to enjoy her foal-hood, whatever is left of it. And when she grows up and is ready, Sparkler will be waiting for her.
I am really enjoying this story. I wonder how much more Bucky will physically change?
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Bucky will do what Sombra couldn't... those words alone should be a good indicator as to how Bucky will respond to Celestia and Luna.
If you recall, Luna broke down his mind after his horn cracked and helped to rebuild him.
There has been so many little hints that he is being manipulated and pushed towards his goal.
Celestia plays to win in the Chase-verse. She can only be pushed so long before she pushes back.
We'll see that in The Catch too.
Sneezing for hours? Literally everything stops in your body when you sneeze, including your heart: too much sneezing and you're dead. Although this is for humans, mind you.
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Further correction: remove the first "have", leaving "could never have had".
4801925 You're a good editor. Has anyone ever told you that?
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Thank you! I only edit on a couple stories (not counting this one) but I find grammar/spelling errors often annoy me enough to speak up on others, and I rather like that kudzu is cool with them being posted here.
4802350 You're welcome.
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You amaze me with this story!
The pacing is just perfect!
A lot of authors forget that its moments like these that make the action scenes all that much better.
I tip my hat to you sir.
off?
You forgot to the word her.
Whilst an admirable notion, surely it is impossible to protect all foals? Help get the protection in place, yes, but Bucky can't be everywhere at once.
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Madness.
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NB4 Lyra x Bucky lost chapter
This is one of the things that i love in this fic, and i REALLY can´t understand how kudzu manage that much information.
See, the whole "let´s whip all the Ponnyville´s innabitants memories so they won´t become all sexual-driven towards foals" thing was, sort of, a Deus Ex Machina of a solution. You have a break point, you come with a magical solution. Yeah, i know, it´s a magical world, you know what i meant with that. I can understand this towards Ponnyville innabitants, but i always thought that it was to easy towards the main chars. And guess what ? Kudzu had everything planned out so there would be a point when he would remember !!!! Damn, how he does that !?
And considering that he needs help to take that out of his system, plus the Bon Bon´s full honesty politics, i can only imagine how the herd will react to what he´ll say ´bout those memories.
BTW, you said that you are not sure ´bout a Lost Chapter for the Sparkler/Rising/Loch herd...but i wuld really love to see one. Even if you take a while to post it. To tartarus with cronological chapter, keep writing (please) and, when you feel good enough, post it. And i hope that the Keg conversation with Bucky will be posted here eventually.
Thanks a lot for your great work !
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And if you look back on those chapters you can see hints at all the manipulation being done to Bucky so that he would reach the point where he is at right now.
Fallen Sombra brought up a good point... Celestia crafted chains to bind Bucky... if he was influenced in dreams to be imprintable towards Derpy and Berry, having his mind broken down and rebuilt so he was totally dependent on them, a better question arises.
How much do Derpy and Berry actually love Bucky and how much of it was background manipulation to make sure he remains chained?
This isn't a spoiler... this is something that anybody with two brain cells and some time spent thinking could come up with.
Poor Bucky, that memory must have been a sledgehammer.
also, I just has a rather uncomfortable realization. Much of the reactions we have seen from celestial have been worrying similar to what a neurotic unicorn.
Only one grammar error I see:
If you have a group of two, omit the named and say it again. "He's clung to I all day."
If it don't work, use the other one: "He clung to Lyra and me all day.
oh no... looks like bad times ahead for
pacobucky4803859 fair enough
4804485 no, no way, that's imposssible!
hugs:4.5
Bucky's subby is saying that more foalzies make nasties mistakies go awazies.
4803842 Apostrophes mate, they look like this ' and not this ´.
4804952 No, 'Lyra and I' is correct. That's among some of the first things they teach you in school.
5188202 Incorrect. "Lyra and I" is only used in the subjective. What they teach you is that I or me go last. But I is used as a subject and me as an object, and "Lyra and me" is correct here. Be careful to do your research and be totally sure you have something correct before starting to edit.
EDIT: Even still, people themselves will sometimes say "Lyra and I" rather than "Lyra and me", so really it's perfectly fine to say the former rather than the latter when using dialogue, because not everybody has perfect grammar. It would be entirely unrealistic for anyone in a story to have perfect grammar all the time just because the author may have perfect grammar, although most people don't make a big deal about it. I know I don't.
5188196 meh, good enough for government work
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I apparently lack those cause I didn't think that at all, my mind is blown right now... whoa, and it makes a wee bit o sense given the situation and everything that's been going on, sneaky sneaky...
I'll see myself out now, nice job!