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DAYUM BARLEY!
Shetlander tough love cracks me up.
When Bon-Bon gives birth, are they going to have to plug everyone's ears to keep them from keeling over dead? I'm worried about that and her causing the house to rot.
Edit: Also I was half expecting some births that do not match the tribe of the parents. After all Mr. and Mrs. Cake had a pegasus and Unicorn.
Hoo rah! *claps* i am ready for the slice of life onslaught, take me now!!!
Hood job Barely, that's motivation!
Also, i found no typos, im sure others will but hey!
Not to play favorites but I hope we see lots of Barley Bitters and Ditzenburg in the future
So little Barley ain't fond of the cold, huh? I wonder if there is a greater meaning to that...
And they are finally outta there! XD Was half expecting Berry to drop kick Barley right after the birth XP
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No. Barley is the normal one, as promised by Scorch.
I mean, he was just in a nice, snugly womb with his pudgy sister. It was warm. And suddenly, it was cold, and it sucks.
The best lines in the whole chapter. And easy to miss if you aren't paying attention.
Were both of Berry's earth ponies? I know it was said that Brandywine is but I didn't see any mention for little Barley.
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To quote Bucky:
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Ahh, ok, I must have overlooked that.
That said, I also figured he was a unicorn by his build.
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Knowing what I know about who took part in making this spell, this being might see it as a a remote possibility and include a comical joke.
Barley = Tough love
The little ones are finally here!
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Not sure if genetics or swingers.
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The Cakes had highly mixed ancestry it seemed.
Derpy comes from a long line of pegasi. Bucky comes from a long line of unicorns.
For Berry, it was a crapshoot. She's so mixed that she could have had anything. She'll have more later. But... Bucky's peculiar genetics are going to have their say.
I can totally see the predestined nagging now.
"You're going to forget to take out the garbage!"
"You're going to get injured on this next mission when you promised you weren't!"
"You're going to push Morta off a . . .of wait, that's fine."
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And not one fuck was given by anypony about the last one lol.
Hmm...Berry was going to die without the deal Bucky made, wasn't she?
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Maybe. Maybe not. They likely keep vials of changeling healing goo from Tourmaline in stock for the Raptors if they have any emergency missions come up, so even if the tearing had been bad enough under normal circumstances to kill her, I am sure getting a vial of that quickly, getting her out of the tub and then applying it could have saved her even without the deal. Also, since Phoenix's are capable of healing, they could have likely sent someone quickly to Philomena to ask her for help. The have several options for healing from bad vaginal tearing due to birth close by.
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Yes. She was. Clotho was there fulfilling her end of the deal.
Is it only me or does the names ditzy and dizzy sound exactly the same? All z's i see i read as ts. So for me the names will be ditsy and ditsy
6484050 800 chapters of story ahead of you and, lemme say this: you´ll change your mind...a dozen times, at least. Open up your mind, dear chaser.
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Wait, can I have a reminder about the deal Bucky made? I thought I understood but now I'm confused... I feel kinda stupid
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This is why I tell people to take notes!
Now instead of writing, I have to sort through many, many chapters looking for the deal.
Chapter 151:
Berry was the one that was supposed to die in foal birth. Not from vaginal tearing, no, that is what she ended up with instead. Brandywine was going to end up lodged inside of her and Berry was not going to be able to pass her. It would have resulted in Berry's death, as well as Brandywine and Barley.
Bucky made the deal and the Fates honoured it. Clotho arrived and conveniently decided to stay for a while. Say what you will about the Fates, but they keep their deals.
Two million words... May god have mercy on our souls!
6484050 ooh, a new comer. Welcome to our abysmal abyss! As for your statement, most would agree, but hey, some are worse!
6484599 have you not read it yet?
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Because his string is set.
I feel bad about those mothers and foals who won't make it...
I mean it's sweet that there are four new faces in the Bitters Home, but still, that's gonna put a damper in an already trying time.
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If it is any consolation, next year, when things really are settled and back to a more normal state of affairs, things will be better. The circumstances were just plain bad.
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I know, but with the attack we have no details about...
We know that the Bitters (Lugus, Yew, Sentinel, everyone there; I just say "Bitters" to refer to them as a whole) all survived, but what about everyone else?
I mean, did a mother lose her husband and now lost their son?
I get the feeling there is an unspoken tragedy here that we won't even get to see, we don't even know how bad it'll get for those nameless background "statistics".
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Ponyville wasn't attacked. Just the farmhouse.
Canterlot got attacked though.
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My point still stands.
Ugh.
I give up (on chapter 50). While I liked some characterization, there is a lot in this story that rubs me the wrong way on fundamental level too much.
In fact, even knowing that some things from the story may be imagined disturbs me somewhat. Hopefully, these things cannot happen IRL ever, but who knows? Science creates new opportunities daily. And some comments do not make it easier either.
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... Actually, so far I read up to 50 and have to stop.
Around 40 chapters it was a well-written crapsaccharine distopia, but I'm hitting a Darkness-Induced Audience Apathy. May be I'll return later.
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It's not for everyone. No worries. You're at the part of the story where there is a long, slow descent. Everything eventually spirals out of control. In time, everything is rebuilt and things get better.
The Isles arc is a bad one, for a variety of reasons.
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But you'll miss Sentinel! (Best Colt!)
And Harper! (Best ZAP!)
Seriously though, no one's gonna hate on you if you don't like it.
Like the author said, not everyone is gonna enjoy this kind of tale.
The fact that you actually gave it a real chance is a lot more than most who say they don't like it, and if memory serves, Chapter 50 is said to be a good pseudo-official stopping point.
Either way, best of luck, and may Destiny never catch you.
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Oh, I get that the spell was being woven by the fates, I just wrote that assuming it was purely subjective.
I wonder if the seeming high amount of mares dying while foaling happened to 'balance' Clotho saving Berry
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The spell was made by Discord & Celestia, maybe the fates helped a little, but it's Discord & Celestia's spell.
And four more little ponies join the chase. Yay!
Her moment endowed with pain... Supposedly peasant mothers can just drop their babies in the fields, but those aren't the ones you hear about anymore. My mother had both of us as caesarians, and both of my sister's boys were twenty hour plus ordeals.
And so the horror continues.......