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She what at the mare?
Well... shit. After Fillydelphia, I'm going to the Isles. Not to burn them, but to show it no longer needs to be like that. Once the right infrastructure is in place, which it will be once Bucky has finished his plans, then the Isles will be safe, a good place for foals to thrive, and no more sweeps.
Hmm... so, a flower is presented to a head mare of a herd to petition joining it? S... how long before Loch Skimmer presents Sparkler with a flower?
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Whoops, fixed.
And yes, Loch Skimmer is moving that direction. That much is obvious and is not a spoiler.
It seems to me that any talent has infinite potential. Some just have more obvious potential than others. Heck, brewing is fermentation, a form of rot. Bucky could be a frighteningly competent necromancer.
In any case, some information on the dark side of herds and filly boners all around. A good read, if not always a happy topic. Looking forward to more.
uh-oh...a NEW mischievous streak? that cant be good
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Brewing is also cultivation and the careful sustaining of fragile life in a hostile environment... something to think about while Bucky is on the Isles.
Hmm! The flipside of the coin when it comes to chasing was a bit of a surprise, but seems pretty realistic. And the flower thing is finally (sorta) explained! Aha!
Hmmmm... I think that Loch Skimmer, and perhaps Ripple, may be joining Rising Star and Sparkler's Herd (when they decide to form one). It just seems to be pointing that way.
Yeah, Derpy (I still feel filthy saying that...) needs to get used to the idea that there's going to be a lot of offers to join her family. Tons of offers from various mares and fillies who want to join a good family.
Good to see that Berry is still in her element.
All in all, this has been a good chapter.
I give you four smiling Pinkie Pies .
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Herds are all about minimising risk. A stallion can't afford to be kicked or injured in an environment like the Isles. (As an example) So rather than risk serious injury, it is highly advantageous for mares to distribute the risk load over one another, overpower, overwhelm, take down, subdue, and gain the submission of a new herd mate rather than allow injury to their stallion.
In this context, chasing would tire out and exhaust a female, making her easier to subdue, meaning that copulation would be much easier to achieve. Hence, new life is formed with fewer risks. So this becomes a functional social behaviour.
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You never did post much of a reaction to the tower creation scene.
That was the incident I was referring to that would require the Imperial March as theme music.
I suppose the main question here is can Bucky survive a mischievous streak in his current condition.
The rape of wolves BEEgins. (Sorry, couldn't stop myself)
Somehow I can see Sparkler convincing her parents to let Her Skimmer and her sister have a sham hearding with Rising. But after a few months of no foal making things might start turning blue.
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I loved the creation of the tower, and yeah, I could see what you mean by it would be awesome to hear the Imperial March while that was going. Or perhaps
would also work.
I heard you like people pointing out errors.
I imagine that's supposed to be "tinder"..."tender" is an adjective
Still enjoying this series
I think im done reading this fic. No offense to the writer or anybody who reads this. Good luck kudzuhaiku · with your story.
I wonder of the bees can be made to explode remotely, or carry a flare spell with them. With enough strong unicorns, I could see the isles being cleaned of natural enemies remarkably quickly.
I'm also wondering how many unicorns are coming with the gold transport that's already on its way, and if they could be convinced to help out.
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I'd save that song for about 22,675 chapters from now, for the epic climax of the battle between the grown-up Dinky and the finally-turned-evil Bucky.
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You are supposed to tag spoilers.
4533053 KARRRRRLLLLLLL THAT SPOILS PEOPLE
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If I think something will happen sooner, I'll definitely mark it! For example, here is latest guess of what will happen soon: Once the bandages come off, Bucky is going to need an eye patch. Dinky and Piña are going to take responsibility for this. Bucky is going to have the cutest eye patch of all, and anyone who makes fun of it will find themselves meeting a swift and terrible end (at the foal's hooves).
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To be clear, I do not expect that to happen! Still, I do wonder who is going to be knocked off next.
thanks for the update!! it amazes me that you are able to update it so fast, not that I'm complaning!!
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4533053 what would be cool would be
bucky accidentally absorbing some of the shadow wolves power
Then bucky could have a real darkside to his powers
Or... sentinel. Could accidentally gain these powers
Or maybe the wolves are part of some ancient artifact placed by house Avarice
Long ago to keep the numbers in check
So many possibilities. :D.
Cant wait for more updates!!!!
4534090 well. He HAS stated that sentinels inherent dark power as a lunar pegasi will be necessary. I guess it is possible that some deeper unlocking of that power may take place but anyone turning evil is a scenario I see as impossible, there is way to much love going on for that. Plus, power corrupts the weak and there are no weak ponies in this story.
453555 I completely agree.
But seeing as the author just loves to fuck our minds over I wouldnt rule anything out XD
I personally think that the shadow wolves are are from an ancient artifact that house Avarice utilised to keep them from banding together along with 'the sweeps'
So as to keep them in check and under control.
Something like that is unnatural.
Plus the wolves seemed incredibly organized when they attacked bucky and the others.
But these are just speculations as im sure we will find out the real reasons soon cause this author is a power house for updates.
Well, it took about five days reading from the beginning, but I'm finally caught up.
I take back what I said earlier. This is not one of the best fanfics I've ever read.
This is one of the best stories I've ever read.
Romeo and Juliet? Nope. Of Mice and Men? Nope. 1984? Nope. The Catcher in the Rye? Nope. Lord of the Flies? Nope.
The Chase.
Bucky evolved to Unihorn prime, Bucky obtained +5 to pranking skill.
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Yeah, them wolves seemed to be surprisingly dedicated to terminate the only unicorn in the hunting party. Smells more like foul play than weird, but natural monster.
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I most definitely DO NOT EAT HANDS!
Spoiler: No, I actually don't
4536824 I thought this was going to be a simple funny ship fic. I am so glad I was wrong.
Damn I caught up.
Haha, wow. Just plowed through all this throughout the week. Here's all the comments I wanted to make all at once:
Snoot Bump is a funny term.
What kinda name is Bucky.
Oh cool, I get it. Unicorns are Logos, Pegasi are Pathos, and Earth ponies are Ethos.
I'm glad you appeal directly to my sense of humor, intentional or not. Which is pretty much "Use silly words and situations that are carnal or strange and treat them seriously." I'm a little sad how much better you are than I am at it.
Bucky's an alright name.
I'm glad that even though repression isn't smiled upon, it is acknowledged as a skill, and like all skills, it can be used for good. Like repressing the desire to rape a little girl and save her.
I bet Celestia was originally a unicorn, and Luna was a Earth Pony. They act that way, not also that, but Equestria is being carried on Celestia's shoulders, and it has been stated Unicorns were not made for that. Celestia's plans and plans and plans some more and things just don't go right and that just seems very Unicorn. It's cool to note that Twilight just seems like a more successful version of her, having a 'herd' in the sense of her friends to keep her in check.
Geez Buck manned up, and it was awesome.
Herd feminism is strange, then again, I know near nothing of actual feminism so I don't really feel I can have a opinion that should be taken note on it.
Bucky is an awesome name.
Now you see, you know you really like a character, or at least I know when I really like a character, when I make up a distinct voice for them in my head. I really like Bucky, but Rising Star is my favorite so far.
One thing I love about fanfics is giving a background character depth. I've read many Derpy stories, but I haven't seen many Berry as a main protagonist before. Now I have a personality for her that I can recall whenever I see her in the show or read about her elsewhere, neato.
I'm hoping Bucky ascends further into an alicorn. That would just be awe inspiring. And hilarious. Prince of Beer.
4551130 BRING ME MORE BEER! but we're out *uses a spell to speed the production of it to mere minutes* not anymore!
The
4740930 The beer shwall lasht foweveeeer!!
For a country that live in a dangerous world for freedom there doesn't seem to have much freedom involved.
Well, .
Sorry wolves, but you're now.
And probably so is the rest of the island.
While I can understand the concepts behind the island's lifestyle, I cannot condone their practices.
I sense Berry much foreshadowing, sparkler and..... I already forgot her name are going to share Rising Star, aren't they.
Man, Filydelphia is suckish, and the Isles are insane...
Where are the happy places!
)/;n;)/
I demand hugs.
Nicely done, nicely done! :D
I like Loch Skimmer, she seems nice.
A mischievous stage a shite.
4551130 'Alicorn of Drunken Harmony' perhaps?
Chapter 66
That just reads weird.
'for the flower' feels like it should be part of the dialogue
You know last chapter got me thinking i think the level ones became so common due to deaths happening during wars and such to the level threes and two the 4s are juat rare in the first place
"Subtle unpleasantness"